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I moved the unsourced uncredited cast here until it can be properly sourced. [[User:Shambala108|Shambala108]] [[User talk:Shambala108|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 03:03, March 24, 2013 (UTC)
I moved the unsourced uncredited cast here until it can be properly sourced. [[User:Shambala108|Shambala108]] [[User talk:Shambala108|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 03:03, March 24, 2013 (UTC)
* [[Xanxia|Queen Xanxia]] - [[Vi Delmar]] (uncredited)
* [[Xanxia|Queen Xanxia]] - [[Vi Delmar]] (uncredited)
::The article on Vi Delmar on this very site gives DWM 253 as a reference.[[Special:Contributions/165.225.76.164|165.225.76.164]]<sup>[[User talk:165.225.76.164#top|talk to me]]</sup> 14:42, June 14, 2018 (UTC)


==Early Morning Doctor==
==Early Morning Doctor==
"He says "Good morning" to Romana, suggesting at least an evening has passed, but not much more."  No he doesn't.  He says "Good morrow Romana".  Romana replies "Good morning Doctor".[[Special:Contributions/165.225.76.164|165.225.76.164]]<sup>[[User talk:165.225.76.164#top|talk to me]]</sup> 14:39, June 14, 2018 (UTC)
"He says "Good morning" to Romana, suggesting at least an evening has passed, but not much more."  No he doesn't.  He says "Good morrow Romana".  Romana replies "Good morning Doctor".[[Special:Contributions/165.225.76.164|165.225.76.164]]<sup>[[User talk:165.225.76.164#top|talk to me]]</sup> 14:39, June 14, 2018 (UTC)
==Correct English==
"Veteran and Vintage Vehicles was an elective that covered the Type 40 TARDIS."  The word "elective" is not used, the actual phrase is "optional extra".  The article might be improved by using the correct phrase.[[Special:Contributions/165.225.80.75|165.225.80.75]]<sup>[[User talk:165.225.80.75#top|talk to me]]</sup> 14:47, June 14, 2018 (UTC)
==Pretty Romana==
"In part one, the Doctor actually directly refers to Romana as having "good looks", one of the few times in the original series that the Doctor made such a remark regarding one of his companions."  But the whole point is that K9 has pointed out that she is prettier than him, she uses her charm to get answers from a native, and the Doctor is getting ratty about it.  He's not complimenting her.[[Special:Contributions/165.225.76.164|165.225.76.164]]<sup>[[User talk:165.225.76.164#top|talk to me]]</sup> 14:54, June 14, 2018 (UTC)
::He does compliment her at the start of Stones of Blood, though.[[Special:Contributions/165.225.80.75|165.225.80.75]]<sup>[[User talk:165.225.80.75#top|talk to me]]</sup> 09:47, June 19, 2018 (UTC)
==Part 3 Summary Is Wrong==
"...and exposes the Captain's nurse as a hologram controlled by Queen Xanxia. The Queen believes that she has made her hologram nearly real. The Doctor tries to convince her that the escalating energy needs of the time dam she is using will eventually cause her real body to die"
None of this happens in part 3.[[Special:Contributions/165.225.76.164|165.225.76.164]]<sup>[[User talk:165.225.76.164#top|talk to me]]</sup> 13:05, June 15, 2018 (UTC)

Latest revision as of 09:47, 19 June 2018

Uncredited cast[[edit source]]

I moved the unsourced uncredited cast here until it can be properly sourced. Shambala108 03:03, March 24, 2013 (UTC)

The article on Vi Delmar on this very site gives DWM 253 as a reference.165.225.76.164talk to me 14:42, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Early Morning Doctor[[edit source]]

"He says "Good morning" to Romana, suggesting at least an evening has passed, but not much more." No he doesn't. He says "Good morrow Romana". Romana replies "Good morning Doctor".165.225.76.164talk to me 14:39, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Correct English[[edit source]]

"Veteran and Vintage Vehicles was an elective that covered the Type 40 TARDIS." The word "elective" is not used, the actual phrase is "optional extra". The article might be improved by using the correct phrase.165.225.80.75talk to me 14:47, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

Pretty Romana[[edit source]]

"In part one, the Doctor actually directly refers to Romana as having "good looks", one of the few times in the original series that the Doctor made such a remark regarding one of his companions." But the whole point is that K9 has pointed out that she is prettier than him, she uses her charm to get answers from a native, and the Doctor is getting ratty about it. He's not complimenting her.165.225.76.164talk to me 14:54, June 14, 2018 (UTC)

He does compliment her at the start of Stones of Blood, though.165.225.80.75talk to me 09:47, June 19, 2018 (UTC)

Part 3 Summary Is Wrong[[edit source]]

"...and exposes the Captain's nurse as a hologram controlled by Queen Xanxia. The Queen believes that she has made her hologram nearly real. The Doctor tries to convince her that the escalating energy needs of the time dam she is using will eventually cause her real body to die"

None of this happens in part 3.165.225.76.164talk to me 13:05, June 15, 2018 (UTC)