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 Soon, Chris interrogates the pair, who reveal their [[Grigori (species)|species]] and [[Grigori (planet)|home planet]], as well as that they killed off their species in an act of revenge for their Government's awful control. They then burst into tears.
-Between their sobs, Chris offers to help Larles and Neil, and despite them not understanding why Chris would help them, after what they did, they accept. Chris instructs them to save as many humans and bring them to Dawn 1027's version of the [[Democratic Saturnian Entanglement]], where they will safeguard the survivors.
+Between their sobs, Chris offers to help Larles and Kwol, and despite them not understanding why Chris would help them, after what they did, they accept. Chris instructs them to save as many humans and bring them to Dawn 1027's version of the [[Democratic Saturnian Entanglement]], where they will safeguard the survivors.
 Two years later, Larles and Kwol final complete their mammoth task, saving every person they could. As their job is done, Chris wants to the them to the Totality, but he's stumped on how to do it. Luckily, [[Aesculapius|Lady Aesculapius]] arrives and offers them a lift in her [[Foce]]. They happily accept.