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=== Part one ===
=== Part one ===
[[Ben Jackson|Ben]], [[Polly Wright|Polly]], [[Jamie McCrimmon|Jamie]] and the [[Second Doctor|Doctor]] prepare to leave the [[Galactic bank|Galacti-bank]] when they find the [[The Doctor's TARDIS|TARDIS]] clamped by a yellow obstruction, preventing them from getting inside to take off. They head inside the bank, as the Doctor suspects that by opening an account they can use that to pay the fee and have the clamp removed. Just then the bank is invaded by the [[Selachian|Selachians]], who attempt to break into and rob the bank's vaults. They discover that the vault is [[Dimensional transcendentalism|dimensionally transcendental]] to protect the things inside and Tompkins, the bank manager, does not have the key as it continually changes so they create a hostage situation, demanding they be given access to the vault as commander Scanlon arrives to deal with the situation. After the Selachians murder the first hostage, the Doctor offers them a deal: he'll help them break into the vault and negotiate a hostage deal with Scanlon if they don't hurt anyone else. They agree.   
[[Ben Jackson|Ben]], [[Polly Wright|Polly]], [[Jamie McCrimmon|Jamie]] and the [[Second Doctor|Doctor]] prepare to leave the [[Galactic bank|Galacti-bank]] when they find the [[The Doctor's TARDIS|TARDIS]] clamped by a yellow obstruction, preventing them from getting inside to take off. They head inside the bank, as the Doctor suspects that by opening an account they can use that to pay the fee and have the clamp removed. Just then the bank is invaded by the [[Selachian|Selachians]], who attempt to break into and rob the bank's vaults. They discover that the vault is [[Dimensional transcendentalism|dimensionally transcendental]] to protect the things inside and Tompkins, the bank manager, does not have the key as it continually changes so they create a hostage situation, demanding they be given access to the vault as commander [[Scalon]] arrives to deal with the situation. After the Selachians murder the first hostage, the Doctor offers them a deal: he'll help them break into the vault and negotiate a hostage deal with Scanlon if they don't hurt anyone else. They agree.   


Polly meanwhile is permitted to go to the kitchen to prepare [[tea]] for everyone during the tense negotiations and discovers Ben having hid himself in the wall earlier when the Selachians broke in. The make a plan and create [[Glue bomb|glue bombs]] to try attack the Selachians with and Polly brings out the tea but secretly tells Jamie their plan (while the Doctor is too busy with the negotiations) and gives him a glue bomb. However, she is released along with a few other bank patrons as per the Doctor's orders to keep her safe. Jamie, thinking he's been signalled by Ben, attacks the Selachians but fails. Ben comes out to defend him but in the ensuing scurfuffle, Ben reveals that a [[bomb]] has been planted in the wall, thinking it is a Selachian ploy but it turns out not to have been put there by the Selachians...   
Polly meanwhile is permitted to go to the kitchen to prepare [[tea]] for everyone during the tense negotiations and discovers Ben having hid himself in the wall earlier when the Selachians broke in. The make a plan and create [[Glue bomb|glue bombs]] to try attack the Selachians with and Polly brings out the tea but secretly tells Jamie their plan (while the Doctor is too busy with the negotiations) and gives him a glue bomb. However, she is released along with a few other bank patrons as per the Doctor's orders to keep her safe. Jamie, thinking he's been signaled by Ben, attacks the Selachians but fails. Ben comes out to defend him but in the ensuing scuffle, Ben reveals that a [[bomb]] has been planted in the wall, thinking it is a Selachian ploy but it turns out not to have been put there by the Selachians...   


=== Part two ===
=== Part two ===
The Doctor attempts to analyze the bomb but accidentally activates it. Meanwhile Polly and the other released hostages are taken aboard Scanlon's ship where she realises Scanlon plans to take the bank back by force by any means necessary. Meanwhile Jamie manages to deactivate the bomb using the glue bomb to stop the timer. The Selachians, however, manage to break into the vault. Polly, onboard Scanlon's ship, realises that the Selachians aren't after money, coming to the conclusion after realising that the parkign clamp on the TARDIS wouldn't accept regular money, nor is that stored in the vaults. Scanlon confirms her thoughts and one of the bank's largest clients are weapons manufacturers who store their plans and weapons in the vaults, which the Selachians have come to claim. The Selachians discover, however, that there is nothing in the vaults and that they had been robbed previously. It is revealed unwillingly by Tompkin that the bank is lying about its state and is not doing well, hence they robbed their own stores, lured the Selachians into a trap, tipped off Scanlon to their prescence so they would take the fall and  collect on the insurance. The Selachains are enraged by this revelation and reactivate the bomb using their own timer and take two hostages, Ben and Jamie, at the Doctor's behest to keep them safe.  
The Doctor attempts to analyze the bomb but accidentally activates it. Meanwhile Polly and the other released hostages are taken aboard Scalon's ship where she realises Scalon plans to take the bank back by force by any means necessary. Meanwhile Jamie manages to deactivate the bomb using the glue bomb to stop the timer. The Selachians, however, manage to break into the vault. Polly, onboard Scalon's ship, realises that the Selachians aren't after money, coming to the conclusion after realising that the parkign clamp on the TARDIS wouldn't accept regular money, nor is that stored in the vaults. Scalon confirms her thoughts and one of the bank's largest clients are weapons manufacturers who store their plans and weapons in the vaults, which the Selachians have come to claim. The Selachians discover, however, that there is nothing in the vaults and that they had been robbed previously. It is revealed unwillingly by Tompkin that the bank is lying about its state and is not doing well, hence they robbed their own stores, lured the Selachians into a trap, tipped off Scalon to their presence so they would take the fall and  collect on the insurance. The Selachains are enraged by this revelation and reactivate the bomb using their own timer and take two hostages, Ben and Jamie, at the Doctor's behest to keep them safe.  


Once outside though, Jamie and Ben trick the Selachians and escape with the help of the last glue bomb and go back to warn the Doctor of the Selachians plans to detonate the bomb anyway after their escape despite them promising not to in exchange for the hostages originally. However, Scanlon's ship fires and destroys the Selachian ship as it attempts to escape but the bomb detonates and supposedly destorys the bank as Polly watches in horror at the unfolding events aboard Scanlon's ship.  
Once outside though, Jamie and Ben trick the Selachians and escape with the help of the last glue bomb and go back to warn the Doctor of the Selachians plans to detonate the bomb anyway after their escape despite them promising not to in exchange for the hostages originally. However, Scalon's ship fires and destroys the Selachian ship as it attempts to escape but the bomb detonates and supposedly destroys the bank as Polly watches in horror at the unfolding events aboard Scalon's ship.  


However, the Doctor manages to save everyone using the vault's dimensionally transcendental abilities and materialises them aboard Scanlon's ship. Tompkins, in a change of heart, offers the clients and bank patrons free reimbursement and a handsome reward for the Doctor and co. for saving them all.  
However, the Doctor manages to save everyone using the vault's dimensionally transcendental abilities and materialises them aboard Scalon's ship. Tompkins, in a change of heart, offers the clients and bank patrons free reimbursement and a handsome reward for the Doctor and co. for saving them all.  


Ben, Jamie and Polly wait by the TARDIS and the Doctor soon finds them while Ben excitedly exclaims that they've been offered very large compensation and is eagerly awaiting his credits. His hopes are dashed though when the Doctor returns and explains to them all that he directed Tompkins to give the money to charity but asked a small amount be set aside, then pulls out the card and says an amount just large enough to pay the fee to remove the parking clamp.     
Ben, Jamie and Polly wait by the TARDIS and the Doctor soon finds them while Ben excitedly exclaims that they've been offered very large compensation and is eagerly awaiting his credits. His hopes are dashed though when the Doctor returns and explains to them all that he directed Tompkins to give the money to charity but asked a small amount be set aside, then pulls out the card and says an amount just large enough to pay the fee to remove the parking clamp.     
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== References ==
== References ==


* 27:00 how selachian water suit works
* Selachians are [[Water|aquatic]]; their [[Selachian battlesuit|suits]] contain water but the water needs to be [[Oxygen|oxygenated]], which is done through a vent near the fin on the suits.
*29:30 bank description
*Polly describes the particular branch of the Galacti-bank as "the shape of a spinning top floating against the backdrop of a thousand stars".
*lady sylvia mentions transmat
*Lady Sylvia mentions [[Transmat|transmats]].
*selachians call jamie a skirt wearing human; jamie wears a kilt  
*The Selachians call Jamie a [[skirt]]-wearing [[human]]; Jamie wears a [[kilt]].
*doctor needs to access dimentional satbilizers to return vault that saves them to proper time
*The Doctor claims he needs to access [[Dimensional stabilizer|dimensional stabilizers]] to return the vault that saves them to proper time.


== Notes ==
== Notes ==
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== Continuity ==
== Continuity ==


* polly is surprised b/c the doctor never carries money;
* Polly is surprised when the Doctor accepts opening an account with the [[bank]] to store his [[money]]/[[Credit|credits]] because the Doctor usually never carries money. ([[TV]]: ''[[The End of the World (TV story)|The End of the World]]'', [[The Runaway Bride (TV story)|''The Runaway Bride'']] ''et al''.) The Doctor did provide money for his/her companions on rare occasions. ([[TV]]: [[Remembrance of the Daleks (TV story)|''Remembrance of the Daleks'']] et al.)





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Ben, Polly, Jamie and the Doctor prepare to leave the Galacti-bank when they find the TARDIS clamped by a yellow obstruction, preventing them from getting inside to take off. They head inside the bank, as the Doctor suspects that by opening an account they can use that to pay the fee and have the clamp removed. Just then the bank is invaded by the Selachians, who attempt to break into and rob the bank's vaults. They discover that the vault is dimensionally transcendental to protect the things inside and Tompkins, the bank manager, does not have the key as it continually changes so they create a hostage situation, demanding they be given access to the vault as commander Scalon arrives to deal with the situation. After the Selachians murder the first hostage, the Doctor offers them a deal: he'll help them break into the vault and negotiate a hostage deal with Scanlon if they don't hurt anyone else. They agree.

Polly meanwhile is permitted to go to the kitchen to prepare tea for everyone during the tense negotiations and discovers Ben having hid himself in the wall earlier when the Selachians broke in. The make a plan and create glue bombs to try attack the Selachians with and Polly brings out the tea but secretly tells Jamie their plan (while the Doctor is too busy with the negotiations) and gives him a glue bomb. However, she is released along with a few other bank patrons as per the Doctor's orders to keep her safe. Jamie, thinking he's been signaled by Ben, attacks the Selachians but fails. Ben comes out to defend him but in the ensuing scuffle, Ben reveals that a bomb has been planted in the wall, thinking it is a Selachian ploy but it turns out not to have been put there by the Selachians...

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The Doctor attempts to analyze the bomb but accidentally activates it. Meanwhile Polly and the other released hostages are taken aboard Scalon's ship where she realises Scalon plans to take the bank back by force by any means necessary. Meanwhile Jamie manages to deactivate the bomb using the glue bomb to stop the timer. The Selachians, however, manage to break into the vault. Polly, onboard Scalon's ship, realises that the Selachians aren't after money, coming to the conclusion after realising that the parkign clamp on the TARDIS wouldn't accept regular money, nor is that stored in the vaults. Scalon confirms her thoughts and one of the bank's largest clients are weapons manufacturers who store their plans and weapons in the vaults, which the Selachians have come to claim. The Selachians discover, however, that there is nothing in the vaults and that they had been robbed previously. It is revealed unwillingly by Tompkin that the bank is lying about its state and is not doing well, hence they robbed their own stores, lured the Selachians into a trap, tipped off Scalon to their presence so they would take the fall and collect on the insurance. The Selachains are enraged by this revelation and reactivate the bomb using their own timer and take two hostages, Ben and Jamie, at the Doctor's behest to keep them safe.

Once outside though, Jamie and Ben trick the Selachians and escape with the help of the last glue bomb and go back to warn the Doctor of the Selachians plans to detonate the bomb anyway after their escape despite them promising not to in exchange for the hostages originally. However, Scalon's ship fires and destroys the Selachian ship as it attempts to escape but the bomb detonates and supposedly destroys the bank as Polly watches in horror at the unfolding events aboard Scalon's ship.

However, the Doctor manages to save everyone using the vault's dimensionally transcendental abilities and materialises them aboard Scalon's ship. Tompkins, in a change of heart, offers the clients and bank patrons free reimbursement and a handsome reward for the Doctor and co. for saving them all.

Ben, Jamie and Polly wait by the TARDIS and the Doctor soon finds them while Ben excitedly exclaims that they've been offered very large compensation and is eagerly awaiting his credits. His hopes are dashed though when the Doctor returns and explains to them all that he directed Tompkins to give the money to charity but asked a small amount be set aside, then pulls out the card and says an amount just large enough to pay the fee to remove the parking clamp.

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  • Selachians are aquatic; their suits contain water but the water needs to be oxygenated, which is done through a vent near the fin on the suits.
  • Polly describes the particular branch of the Galacti-bank as "the shape of a spinning top floating against the backdrop of a thousand stars".
  • Lady Sylvia mentions transmats.
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The TARDIS brings the Doctor, Jamie, Ben and Polly to a train platform in Kent. It gets partially damaged by a passing train and the four are forced to leave and give it time to repair itself. They visit the signalman to inquire about any damage accidentally done to the train and he treats them to tea upon discovering Ben's and Jamie's credentials, thinking they've just returned from World War I. He tells them some scary stories about terrible train accidents. Polly, wanting a breath a fresh air, steps out, followed by Jamie and Ben while the Doctor stays behind to talk trains with the signalman, having got on well with him and the signalman tells him the train story of the "Phantom Light".

While exploring the station, the three get an uneasy feeling and Ben spots an eerie figure in a dark coat who disappears. They go to the waiting room and find a woman named Frances whom Polly talks to alone. The woman reveals she is waiting for her fiance's body to be brought back from the war. Meanwhile, outside, Ben explains to Jamie about the First World War, the Unknown Warrior and the Unknown Warrior's Funeral. They see a lamp in the distance and decide to go warn a mysterious figure they see to get off the train tracks. Ben, after a closer inspection, reveals the figure is actually 'figures' and they look like his Uncle's crew from the Lion moving towards them. He and Jamie find the Doctor and explain the situation. The signalman tries to send a warning to the train through the signals to slow down while Ben explains what he saw to the Doctor. Jamie runs outside to see the shadowy figures approaching the waiting room in the station where Polly and Frances are...

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Frances tells Polly about her fiance Michael Thomas who fought at the Somme. They hear the train and Frances explains she feels the body for the Unknown Warrior is him, so they go outside to check. However, once outside, they get a strange feeling about the train but the driver steps out and begins asking the girls questions. He goes off to talk to the signalman for more answers and Francis decides to go inside the train, but they get distracted by some approaching shadowy figures.

Jamie sees the girls board and approaches but despite what Ben described, Jamie sees the shadowy figures as his fellow Highlanders. Frances goes to see the coffin and Polly follows. The Doctor stops Jamie from leaving, saying that what they're seeing may be spectral. The signalman goes to try and clear off the figures on the track but they end up killing him much to the fright of the three. The Doctor explains that it may be the TARDIS's doing, and that its telepathic circuits may have been damaged when the train hit it earlier as Jamie and Ben saw different forms and figures in the shadows. Since it has landed in a post-war climate, the feelings of death and destruction so strongly associated with this war and with the Unknown Warrior and its coffin are being channeled through it into the TARDIS, causing it to manifest the strange shadowy figures that killed the signalman.

Polly and Frances look at the coffin and she explains that she wishes Michael would've returned to her alive. Suddenly a shadowy figure appears. Polly tries to stop Frances from reaching out and joining them but discovers that her pity, acting like two magnets of the same polarity repelling another, causes the figures to move away. The Doctor, Ben and Jamie are discovered by the figure Ben saw earlier, who turns out to be Michael Thomas. The Doctor realizes that the shadow figures don't seem to effect Thomas so he explains that they need to confront the shadowy figures and that they will need to use Thomas to guide them since the creatures do not effect him. They make their way to the train which is stopped at a signal when Thomas stops and explains he can't continue because he can't bear to face his fiance Frances and that the only reason he came was because he had hoped to see her get comfort from seeing the passing coffin of the Unknown Warrior. Inside the train, a figure approaches Polly and Frances, which Frances slowly realizes is Michael, despite the scar on his face. She is over-joyed to see him much to his astonishment and after he explains himself, she places hers and Thomas' hands on the sword on the coffin and swears to always love him. It begins to glow and the shadowy figures begin to disappear and the Doctor explains that the coffin, the focal point for the TARDIS, is now being filled with the emotions of love and compassion by the two, driving the dark figures away and making them disappear. The Doctor heads back to the station and alerts the next signal box that the train is clear to continue.

They head for the TARDIS and the Doctor explains to Jamie that the body of the unknown soldier is going to be buried in Westminster the following day. Jamie asks the Doctor what forms the shadows took when he saw them and he gives him a puzzling explanation. When Jamie asks the Doctor about other world wars and if the world is at peace now, which the Doctor affirms that it is for now but simply replies "Only the dead have seen the end of war."

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