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|image | |image = Cwej- A Bright White Crack.jpg | ||
|main character = [[Chris Cwej]] | |range = Cwej: The Series | ||
|setting | |anthology = Down the Middle (anthology) | ||
|writer | |series number in range = 1 | ||
|editor | |number in series = 1 | ||
|illustrator | |main character = [[Chris Cwej]], [[Larles]], [[Kwol]] | ||
|publisher | |featuring = Aesculapius{{!}}Lady Aesculapius | ||
|release date | |featuring2 = Superior{{!}}Superiors | ||
| | |featuring3 = Cwejen | ||
| | |featuriing4 = The Vicinity {{!}} Vicky | ||
| | |setting = {{il|[[The Vicinity]]|[[Earth]]|[[Washington DC (Dawn 1027)|Washington DC]], [[Earth (Dawn 1027)|Earth]], [[Dawn 1027]], [[2030s]]}} | ||
|writer = Hunter O'Connell | |||
|editor = [[Hunter O'Connell]] | |||
|illustrator = [[Mia Ashford-John]] | |||
|publisher = Arcbeatle Press | |||
|format = Online short story | |||
|release date = 24 June 2020 | |||
|series = [[Chris Cwej]]'s timeline | |||
|prev = Requiem (novel) | |||
|next = Barnyard of the Cyberons (short story) | |||
|series2 = ''[[Down the Middle (anthology)|Down the Middle]]'' | |||
|prev2 = | |||
|next2 = Fountain of Youth (short story) | |||
|series3 = ''[[Cwej: The Series]]'' | |||
|prev3 = Collective Unconscious (short story) | |||
|next3 = Barnyard of the Cyberons (short story) | |||
}} | }} | ||
''''' | '''''A Bright White Crack''''' was a ''[[Cwej: The Series|Cwej]]'' short story released by [[Arcbeatle Press]] freely on their website, and then as the first story in ''[[Down the Middle (anthology)|Down the Middle]]''. | ||
''A Bright White Crack'' was the fifth story in total to feature elements from [[James Wylder]]'s [[10,000 Dawns (series)|''10,000 Dawns'' series]] in conjunction with established ''[[Doctor Who]]'' characters but the first that is currently considered a [[Tardis:Valid sources|valid source]] by this wiki. This story was released as part of ''[[Cwej: The Series]]'' and featured [[Seventh Doctor]] [[companion]] [[Chris Cwej]] as the titular character whereas all previous stories had been released as part of ''10,000 Dawns'' or one of its spin-offs making it a pre-existing franchise at the time of its [[crossover]]s with the [[Doctor Who universe|''Doctor Who'' universe]]. ''A Bright White Crack'' also featured the licenced usage of properties from [[Obverse Books]] and [[BBV Productions]]. | ''A Bright White Crack'' was the fifth story in total to feature elements from [[James Wylder]]'s [[10,000 Dawns (series)|''10,000 Dawns'' series]] in conjunction with established ''[[Doctor Who]]'' characters but the first that is currently considered a [[Tardis:Valid sources|valid source]] by this wiki. This story was released as part of ''[[Cwej: The Series]]'' and featured [[Seventh Doctor]] [[companion]] [[Chris Cwej]] as the titular character whereas all previous stories had been released as part of ''10,000 Dawns'' or one of its spin-offs making it a pre-existing franchise at the time of its [[crossover]]s with the [[Doctor Who universe|''Doctor Who'' universe]]. ''A Bright White Crack'' also featured the licenced usage of properties from [[Obverse Books]] and [[BBV Productions]]. | ||
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Chris remembers how when his Superiors had exited the universe, they how found that it was in the shape of a [[Picard Horn]]. He notes this, as he finds himself trapped in this void for [[28 (number)|twenty-eight]] days. On the final day, the garbled message changes, and Chris is engulfed in a bright light. | Chris remembers how when his Superiors had exited the universe, they how found that it was in the shape of a [[Picard Horn]]. He notes this, as he finds himself trapped in this void for [[28 (number)|twenty-eight]] days. On the final day, the garbled message changes, and Chris is engulfed in a bright light. | ||
He wakes up in the courtyard of the [[White House (Dawn 1027)|White House]], and he sees a press conference around the [[President of the United States|President]]. He goes to investigate, being in the body of a Cwej who appears to be a [[reporter]]. He | He wakes up in the courtyard of the [[White House (Dawn 1027)|White House]], and he sees a [[press conference]] around the [[President of the United States (Dawn 1027)|President]]. He goes to investigate, being in the body of a Cwej who appears to be a [[reporter]]. A [[The Vicinity|female reporter]] approaches him, asking Chris if he's okay, he says yes, and he ignores her. He instead listens to the President, finding out that [[Great Britain (Dawn 1027)|Great Britain]] has been struck by a [[meteor]], and that's he's in the [[2030s]]. | ||
He considers helping this version of Earth, but he decides against it. He gets a [[taxi]] to a nearby [[hotel]], where he rents a room. He turns on the [[television|TV]] to a live news broadcast, where he sees the catastrophic destruction on this Earth. Somebody has let [[ | He considers helping [[Earth (Dawn 1027)|this version of Earth]], but he decides against it. He gets a [[taxi]] to a nearby [[hotel]], where he rents a room. He turns on the [[television|TV]] to a live news broadcast, where he sees the catastrophic destruction on this Earth. Somebody has let [[chaos matter]] on Earth, causing [[gravity]] to be heavily affected, making things float off into the sky, thinning the atmosphere. | ||
[[Washington DC ( | [[Washington DC (Dawn 1027)|Washington DC]] is destroyed, as the new lack of gravity is causing untold chaos on the city. The ground Chris is on is now floating at a near 90° degree angle, and he morphs himself using [[Regeneration#Borrowed from the Time Lords|regen energy]] to climb down the rising pavement. He grabs onto a [[fire hydrant]] on the ground, and he uses the [[mind transporter]] on the back of his [[neck]] to get to safety. | ||
Chris finds himself inside a new body in a [[cave]], which is filled with [[Cwejen]]. An automated message plays from the Superiors, who announce that they will be taking over [[Dawn 1027]] due to the [[Firmament]] breaking the peace treaty. He quickly tries to figure out if the Superiors where behind the meteor, and he finds one of the Superiors' military-grade spaceships, and he uses it to leave the cave. | Chris finds himself inside a new body in a [[cave]], which is filled with [[Cwejen]]. An automated message plays from the Superiors, who announce that they will be taking over [[Dawn 1027]] due to the [[Firmament]] breaking the peace treaty. He quickly tries to figure out if the Superiors where behind the meteor, and he finds one of the Superiors' military-grade spaceships, and he uses it to leave the cave. | ||
After piloting the stolen ship into the sky, Chris surveys the damage of the | After piloting the stolen ship into the sky, Chris surveys the damage of the chaos matter, and he sees that everything in a [[1000 (number)|1000]] [[mile]] radius has been affected by the lack of gravity. He notices that a [[La Kraw el Sol|cylindrical ship]] is orbiting Earth, suspecting the Superiors are controlling it, and he pilots the stolen ship towards it. | ||
After [[dock]]ing the two ships, Chris enters the bowels of the other ship, hearing [[laughter]]. As he gets closer to the noise, he realises it's actually somebody [[cry]]ing. When he reaches the source, Chris finds two, non-[[human]] creatures, [[Larles]] and [[Kwol]], both of which are huddled together, crying. He introduces himself, and he tells them he's rescuing them from the Superiors, and they tell him that they have no idea what Chris is talking about. It dawns on him that he Superiors aren't responsible for the destruction that had unfolded on this Earth, it was this pair. | After [[dock]]ing the two ships, Chris enters the bowels of the other ship, hearing [[laughter]]. As he gets closer to the noise, he realises it's actually somebody [[cry]]ing. When he reaches the source, Chris finds two, non-[[human]] creatures, [[Larles]] and [[Kwol]], both of which are huddled together, crying. He introduces himself, and he tells them he's rescuing them from the Superiors, and they tell him that they have no idea what Chris is talking about. It dawns on him that he Superiors aren't responsible for the destruction that had unfolded on this Earth, it was this pair. | ||
Soon, Chris interrogates the pair, who reveal their [[Grigori (species)|species]] and [[Grigori (planet)|home planet]], as well as that they killed off their species in an act of revenge for their Government's awful control. They then burst into tears. | Soon, Chris interrogates the pair, who reveal their [[Grigori (species)|species]] and [[Grigori (planet)|home planet]], as well as that they killed off their species in an act of [[revenge]] for their Government's awful control. They then burst into tears. | ||
Between their sobs, Chris offers to help Larles and Kwol, and despite them not understanding why Chris would help them after what they did, they accept. Chris instructs them to save as many humans and bring them to Dawn 1027's version of the [[Democratic Saturnian Entanglement]], where they will safeguard the survivors. | |||
Two years later, Larles and Kwol final complete their mammoth task, saving every person they could. As their job is done, Chris wants to take them to [[the Totality]], but he's stumped on how to do it. Luckily, [[Aesculapius|Lady Aesculapius]] arrives and offers them a lift in her [[Foce]]. They happily accept. | |||
Inside the Vicinity, the Superiors announce that they've detected a glitch in the firmware, and they going to be repairing it as soon as Chris reports to the [[Base of Operations]]. | |||
In the Base of Operations, the [[High President (A Bright White Crack)|High President]] announces to the other Superiors that he will make the person who foiled their plans pay with their life. An unseen individual forcefully kills every Superior in the room, wasting their regen energy. | |||
== Characters == | == Characters == | ||
* [[Chris Cwej]] | * [[Chris Cwej]] | ||
* [[President of the United States (Dawn 1027)|President of the United States]] | |||
* [[The Vicinity|Cwej's reporting partner]] | |||
* [[Larles]] | * [[Larles]] | ||
* [[Kwol]] | * [[Kwol]] | ||
* [[Aesculapius|Lady Aesculapius]] | * [[Aesculapius|Lady Aesculapius]] | ||
* [[High President (A Bright White Crack)|High President]] | |||
* [[Superior (A Bright White Crack)|Superior]] | |||
== | == Worldbuilding == | ||
* Chris watches experimental horror | * Chris watches [[experimental horror movie]]s from the [[2690s]]. | ||
* Chris likens his morphing body to [[Play-Doh]]. | * Chris likens his morphing body to [[Play-Doh]]. | ||
* In the message from the Superiors, they mention the [[Christmas Needle Agreement]]. | * In the message from the Superiors, they mention the [[Christmas Needle Agreement]]. | ||
* Chris eats a [[bagel]] while on the ''[[La Kraw el Sol]]''. | |||
* Chris uses the slang word "[[cruk]]" several times. | |||
=== People === | === People === | ||
* Chris mentions [[Carl Sagan]] and ''[[Voyager 1]]'' in his log. | * Chris mentions [[Carl Sagan]] and ''[[Voyager 1]]'' in his log. | ||
* Chris wishes that [[Isaac Newton]] would've studied [[alchemy]]. | * Chris wishes that [[Isaac Newton]] would've studied [[alchemy]]. | ||
* Lady Aesculapius helped resolve the [[Battle of the Shilb]], in the early days of the [[10,000 Dawns]]. | |||
=== Locations === | === Locations === | ||
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* [[Bifrost]] is another name for the [[Time Vortex]]. | * [[Bifrost]] is another name for the [[Time Vortex]]. | ||
* The president mentions the [[Artillery Base of Oregon]] and the [[United Nations]]. | * The president mentions the [[Artillery Base of Oregon]] and the [[United Nations]]. | ||
* Chris remembers the [[Solar Kingdom]] and the girl that served him [[banana smoothie]]s. | * Chris remembers the [[Solar Kingdom]] and the [[Aesculapius|girl]] that served him [[banana smoothie]]s at the [[Padrano Pier]]. | ||
* Larles and Kwol come from [[Grigori]]. | * Larles and Kwol come from [[Grigori (planet)|Grigori]]. | ||
=== Technology === | === Technology === | ||
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* [[Ear]]s contain [[fluid]] that affects a persons' [[balance]]. | * [[Ear]]s contain [[fluid]] that affects a persons' [[balance]]. | ||
* Chris goes uses the Superiors' ship to go into the [[stratosphere]]. | * Chris goes uses the Superiors' ship to go into the [[stratosphere]]. | ||
=== Species === | |||
* [[Cyberon]]s are vulnerable to [[gold]]. | |||
* Chris mentions the [[Devolian]]s and the [[Vampyr]]s. | |||
== Story notes == | == Story notes == | ||
* [[James Hornby]], [[Thomas Banks]], [[James Wylder]], and [[Daisy Schopmeyer]] are all credited with providing assistance and additional [[Editor|editing]]. | * [[James Hornby]], [[Thomas Banks|T. Maynard Banks]], [[James Wylder]], and [[Daisy Schopmeyer]] are all credited with providing assistance and additional [[Editor|editing]]. | ||
== Continuity == | == Continuity == | ||
* Chris is a [[police officer]] originally from the [[30th century]]. ([[PROSE]]: ''[[Original Sin (novel)|Original Sin]]'', [[AUDIO]]: ''[[Original Sin (audio story)|Original Sin]]'') | |||
* Chris refers to the [[Evil Renegade]], ([[PROSE]]: ''[[Dead Romance (novel)|Dead Romance]]'') who kidnapped him in his dark timeship, ending his days as an [[Guild of Adjudicators|Adjudicator]]. ([[PROSE]]: ''[[Original Sin (novel)|Original Sin]]'') | * Chris refers to the [[Evil Renegade]], ([[PROSE]]: ''[[Dead Romance (novel)|Dead Romance]]'') who kidnapped him in his dark timeship, ending his days as an [[Guild of Adjudicators|Adjudicator]]. ([[PROSE]]: ''[[Original Sin (novel)|Original Sin]]'') | ||
* The [[Cwej (species)|Cwejen]] were created during [[War in Heaven|a War]] between Chris' [[Superior]]s and [[The Enemy|an unseen adversary]], ([[PROSE]]: ''[[The Book of the War (novel)|The Book of the War]]'', [[AUDIO]]: ''[[The Adventure of the Diogenes Damsel (audio story)|The Adventure of the Diogenes Damsel]]'') which has since [[The Peace|concluded]]. ([[PROSE]]: ''[[The Gallifrey Chronicles (novel)|The Gallifrey Chronicles]]'', et al.) Chris is unsure if, in the new [[Post-War universe|post-War timeline]], his actions during and before the War have technically been wiped from history. ([[PROSE]]: ''[[The Ancestor Cell (novel)|The Ancestor Cell]]'') | |||
* [[Cwejen]] ranks include [[Cwej-Prime|Prime]], [[Cwej-Plus|Plus]], and [[Cwej-Magnus|Magnus]]. ([[PROSE]]: ''[[The Book of the War (novel)|The Book of the War]]'') | |||
* Other names of the [[Superior]]s include "The Shadow People" ([[PROSE]]: ''[[The Pit (novel)|The Pit]]'') and "The [[Great House|House]]-Dwellers". ([[PROSE]]: ''[[Lungbarrow (novel)|Lungbarrow]]'', ''[[The Book of the War (novel)|The Book of the War]]'', et al.) | |||
* [[PROSE]]: ''[[Barnyard of the Cyberons (short story)|Barnyard of the Cyberons]]'' is set both directly before and sometime after this story, expanding on Cwej's memories of Padrano Peir. | |||
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