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|range                  = Short Trips (series)
|name=Of the Mermaid and Jupiter
|series in range        = Short Trips: Past Tense
|series=[[Short Trips (series)#In print|ST short stories]]
|series number in range = 6
|doctor=Seventh Doctor
|number in series      = 12
|companions=[[Bernice Summerfield]]
|doctor                 = Seventh Doctor
|year=[[1829]]
|companions             = [[Bernice Summerfield|Bernice]]
|writer=[[Ian Mond]] and [[Danny Heap]]
|setting                = The ''[[Mermaid (ship)|Mermaid]]'' and other ships, [[October]] [[1829]]
|anthology=''[[Short Trips: Past Tense]]''
|writer                 = Ian Mond (writer), Danny Heap
|prev=White Man's Burden (short story)
|anthology             = Short Trips: Past Tense
|next=The Man Who Wouldn't Give Up (short story)
|release date          = 9 April 2004
|series                = ''[[Short Trips (series)|Short Trips]]''
|prev                   = White Man's Burden (short story)
|next                   = The Man Who Wouldn't Give Up (short story)
}}
}}
'''''Of the Mermaid and Jupiter''''' was the twelfth short story in the [[Short Trips (series)|Short Trips]] anthology ''[[Short Trips: Past Tense]]''. It was written by [[Ian Mond]] and [[Danny Heap]]. It featured the [[Seventh Doctor]] and [[Bernice Summerfield]].
'''''Of the Mermaid and Jupiter''''' was the twelfth short story in the [[Short Trips (series)|Short Trips]] anthology ''[[Short Trips: Past Tense]]''. It was written by [[Ian Mond (writer)|Ian Mond]] and [[Danny Oz|Danny Heap]]. It featured the [[Seventh Doctor]] and [[Bernice Summerfield]].
 
== Summary ==
== Summary ==
The Doctor and Benny board the sea vessel Mermaid as it leaves Sydney harbour in October [[1829]]. But the Doctor’s desire to experience a relaxing ocean cruise is soon disrupted when a storm hits, and as the Mermaid goes down, the crew and passengers are forced to abandon ship.  
It is [[16 October]] [[1829]]. Captain [[Samuel Nolbrow]] and his crew of the ''[[Mermaid (ship)|Mermaid]]'' await their last passengers before setting sail. The captain is impatient by the delay, but soon the Doctor and Bernice arrive. They set sail from [[Sydney]]. During the voyage, the Doctor makes the acquaintance of Professor [[Burroughs (Of the Mermaid and Jupiter)|Burroughs]].
 
On the third day, the ship is becalmed. On the fourth day, a storm approaches. Benny and the Professor take refuge below deck, while the Doctor helps the sailors. Despite their best efforts, the ship smashes onto a [[coral reef]]. Crewman [[Peter Richley]] helps Benny to the reef, and all hands survive the wreck, though the Doctor has to convince Captain Nolbrow not to go down with his ship.
 
After three days, they are rescued by the ''[[Swiftsure]]''. Captain [[Frederick McIntyre|McIntyre]] refuses Captain Nolbrow's offer of help and makes them his guests. Benny begins to enjoy herself, but on the third day she notices wet footprints on the deck. The next day, the ''Swiftsure'' is headed for rocks. Benny wakes the ''Mermaid'' crew, most of whom are below deck. Once again, the ship crashes, and once again, all hands are saved. This time, however, their stay on the rocks is short — the ''[[Governor Ready]]'' rescues them after only five hours.
 
On board the ''Governor Ready'', Benny notices the Doctor sneaking into the cargo hold. Half an hour later, she notices him sneaking out and confronts him. She realises he is the one responsible for the wreck of the ''Mermaid'' and the ''Swiftsure'', and he is about to do the same to the ''Governor Ready''. He has set the ship on fire, and promises to explain later. All three crews take to the boats.
 
The next day, they are rescued by the ''[[Comet (ship)|Comet]]''. Captain Scott of the ''Governor Ready'' spreads rumours that the crew of the ''Mermaid'' were jinxed. Tensions run high, and the Doctor is busy keeping the four crews from fighting.
 
Two days later, he asks Benny to help sabotage the ''Comet'', as he is too busy keeping the peace. He tells her the wrecks are necessary to preserve the [[Web of Time]]. When a storm hits and the mast breaks, the ''Comet''{{'}}s crew takes to the boat, leaving the other three crews behind. Scott is shocked, but Nolbrow tells him it's his fault for spreading the rumours. The three crews clutch onto pieces of wreckage.
 
Benny is horrified to discover [[shark]]s nearby. Professor Burroughs is terrified, and begins splashing wildly. Crewman [[Harold Hussey|Hussey]] of the ''Mermaid'' tries to quiet him. The Doctor [[Hypnotism|hypnotises]] Burroughs into calmness, and he and Hussey, who was accidentally hypnotised, play quietly in the water. The Doctor keeps the sharks away with a [[sonic pulse]].


Luckily everyone survives, and, having reached the safety of a rocky outcrop, they are soon rescued by the Swiftsure. But while the passengers and crew of the Mermaid marvel and their luck, the Swiftsure hits some rocks that night, and promptly sinks. Once again all hands escape unharmed, and are rescued by the Governor Ready. Benny becomes suspicious, especially when she discovers the Doctor setting fire to the ship’s hold; she realises that it was he who arranged for the previous ‘accidents’ encountered by the other vessels.  
The next day, the three crews are rescued by the ''[[Jupiter (ship)|Jupiter]]''. Benny notices the Doctor sneak away and follows him. He goes to the cabin of a [[Sarah Richley|sick woman]] who wants to see her son one last time before she dies. The Doctor sends Benny to fetch Peter, who is about the same age. When he tells Peter the woman's name, Peter realises it's ''his'' mother and goes to her.


Everyone abandons ship once more, and are soon picked up by the Australian Government cutter Comet. A furious Benny tries to confront the Doctor, but the manipulative Time Lord instead manages to persuade her to help introduce a quick-acting ‘dry rot’ to the ship’s timbers, and, as fighting breaks out between the crew of the Comet and the ‘jinxed Mermaid crew, the vessel sinks in a storm. Some hours later, the combined passengers and crews are rescued by the Jupiter.  
Benny realises that the Doctor set up this reunion, and the Web of Time was never at stake. She is angry that he risked four crews' lives for a dying woman, but he explains that Sarah Richley's health improves from this moment, and she lives another twenty years. She helped the Doctor once, and he wanted to thank her.


As Benny angrily faces the Doctor once more, she learns that a dying woman named Sarah Rickley is travelling abroad the Jupiter; the woman once came to the Doctor’s aid, and so in return he has contrived for her to be reunited with her estranged son, Peter, who is a member of the Mermaid’s crew. Satisfied that, thanks to his actions, Sarah will now find the will to live, the Doctor is taken aback by Benny’s observation that he could have achieved the same objective merely by using the TARDIS.
The Doctor tells Benny that [[The Doctor's TARDIS|the TARDIS]] is currently in the ''Jupiter''{{'}}s cargo hold, the Doctor having preset the coordinates. When Benny asks him why they didn't just pick up Sarah in the TARDIS and bring her to Peter, the Doctor hems and haws, and Benny realises that he didn't think of it.


== Characters ==
== Characters ==
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* [[Sarah Richley]]
* [[Sarah Richley]]
* [[Peter Richley]]
* [[Peter Richley]]
* [[Harold Hussey]]
* [[Matthews (Of the Mermaid and Jupiter)|Matthews]]
* Captain [[Samuel Nolbrow]]
* Captain [[Samuel Nolbrow]]
* Captain [[Frederick McIntyre]]
* Captain [[Frederick McIntyre]]
* Captain [[John Scott]]
* Captain [[John Scott]]
* Captain [[Theodore Fraser]]
* Captain [[Theodore Fraser]]
* Professor [[Burroughs]]
* Professor [[Burroughs (Of the Mermaid and Jupiter)|Burroughs]]


== References ==
== Worldbuilding ==
* [[Mermaid (ship)|Mermaid]]
* Nolbrow's ship, the ''[[Mermaid (ship)|Mermaid]]'', is a [[schooner]], as is Scott's ship the ''[[Governor Ready]]''.
* [[Swiftsure]]
* McIntyre's ship, the ''[[Swiftsure]]'', is a [[barque]].
* [[Governor Ready]]
* Fraser's ship, the ''[[Comet (ship)|Comet]]'', is a [[cutter]].
* [[Comet (ship)|Comet]]
* The ''[[Jupiter (ship)|Jupiter]]'' is a [[passenger ship]].
* [[Jupiter (ship)|Jupiter]]
* When the Doctor tells Bernice to stay out of any fights, she responds, "I'm not [[Ace]]".


== Notes ==
== Notes ==
* The Doctor and Benny are travelling without Ace, Chris or Roz, setting this story somewhere between [[PROSE]]: ''[[Set Piece]]'' and [[PROSE]]: ''[[Original Sin]]''.
* The epilogue to the story states that this is a true story. In the real world, Peter Richley really did reunite with his mother after several shipwrecks, though the ''Jupiter'' was one of the wrecks.
* This story is a "[[pure historical]]" featuring no science fiction elements apart from the presence of the Doctor, Bernice and the TARDIS.


== Continuity ==
== Continuity ==
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''to be added''
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Of the Mermaid and Jupiter was the twelfth short story in the Short Trips anthology Short Trips: Past Tense. It was written by Ian Mond and Danny Heap. It featured the Seventh Doctor and Bernice Summerfield.

Summary[[edit] | [edit source]]

It is 16 October 1829. Captain Samuel Nolbrow and his crew of the Mermaid await their last passengers before setting sail. The captain is impatient by the delay, but soon the Doctor and Bernice arrive. They set sail from Sydney. During the voyage, the Doctor makes the acquaintance of Professor Burroughs.

On the third day, the ship is becalmed. On the fourth day, a storm approaches. Benny and the Professor take refuge below deck, while the Doctor helps the sailors. Despite their best efforts, the ship smashes onto a coral reef. Crewman Peter Richley helps Benny to the reef, and all hands survive the wreck, though the Doctor has to convince Captain Nolbrow not to go down with his ship.

After three days, they are rescued by the Swiftsure. Captain McIntyre refuses Captain Nolbrow's offer of help and makes them his guests. Benny begins to enjoy herself, but on the third day she notices wet footprints on the deck. The next day, the Swiftsure is headed for rocks. Benny wakes the Mermaid crew, most of whom are below deck. Once again, the ship crashes, and once again, all hands are saved. This time, however, their stay on the rocks is short — the Governor Ready rescues them after only five hours.

On board the Governor Ready, Benny notices the Doctor sneaking into the cargo hold. Half an hour later, she notices him sneaking out and confronts him. She realises he is the one responsible for the wreck of the Mermaid and the Swiftsure, and he is about to do the same to the Governor Ready. He has set the ship on fire, and promises to explain later. All three crews take to the boats.

The next day, they are rescued by the Comet. Captain Scott of the Governor Ready spreads rumours that the crew of the Mermaid were jinxed. Tensions run high, and the Doctor is busy keeping the four crews from fighting.

Two days later, he asks Benny to help sabotage the Comet, as he is too busy keeping the peace. He tells her the wrecks are necessary to preserve the Web of Time. When a storm hits and the mast breaks, the Comet's crew takes to the boat, leaving the other three crews behind. Scott is shocked, but Nolbrow tells him it's his fault for spreading the rumours. The three crews clutch onto pieces of wreckage.

Benny is horrified to discover sharks nearby. Professor Burroughs is terrified, and begins splashing wildly. Crewman Hussey of the Mermaid tries to quiet him. The Doctor hypnotises Burroughs into calmness, and he and Hussey, who was accidentally hypnotised, play quietly in the water. The Doctor keeps the sharks away with a sonic pulse.

The next day, the three crews are rescued by the Jupiter. Benny notices the Doctor sneak away and follows him. He goes to the cabin of a sick woman who wants to see her son one last time before she dies. The Doctor sends Benny to fetch Peter, who is about the same age. When he tells Peter the woman's name, Peter realises it's his mother and goes to her.

Benny realises that the Doctor set up this reunion, and the Web of Time was never at stake. She is angry that he risked four crews' lives for a dying woman, but he explains that Sarah Richley's health improves from this moment, and she lives another twenty years. She helped the Doctor once, and he wanted to thank her.

The Doctor tells Benny that the TARDIS is currently in the Jupiter's cargo hold, the Doctor having preset the coordinates. When Benny asks him why they didn't just pick up Sarah in the TARDIS and bring her to Peter, the Doctor hems and haws, and Benny realises that he didn't think of it.

Characters[[edit] | [edit source]]

Worldbuilding[[edit] | [edit source]]

Notes[[edit] | [edit source]]

  • The epilogue to the story states that this is a true story. In the real world, Peter Richley really did reunite with his mother after several shipwrecks, though the Jupiter was one of the wrecks.
  • This story is a "pure historical" featuring no science fiction elements apart from the presence of the Doctor, Bernice and the TARDIS.

Continuity[[edit] | [edit source]]

to be added