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'''Danny''' was a | '''Danny''' was a boy who became the host of [[Harmonelid]] one night when it became buried in his ear. | ||
The [[Eleventh Doctor|Eleventh Doctor]] detected the worm's presence and managed to somehow lure Danny and his dad to a nearby [[hospital]] in [[Leeds]]. | |||
An investigation into Danny’s ear with the [[sonic screwdriver]] caused the Harmonelid to flee. It settled in the ear of [[Richards (Earworm)|Mr Richards]], a deaf patient whom the worm could not harm. ([[DWAM]]: ''[[Earworm]]'') | |||
[[Category:Humans]] | [[Category:Humans]] | ||
Revision as of 19:26, 1 March 2011
That's one hell of a run-on sentence there. And that's not a "biography". Need to have the section taken away and the main sentence of the paragraph broken up so that clarity can bubble forth.
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Danny was a boy who became the host of Harmonelid one night when it became buried in his ear.
The Eleventh Doctor detected the worm's presence and managed to somehow lure Danny and his dad to a nearby hospital in Leeds.
An investigation into Danny’s ear with the sonic screwdriver caused the Harmonelid to flee. It settled in the ear of Mr Richards, a deaf patient whom the worm could not harm. (DWAM: Earworm)
