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== Exoskeleton ==
I edited the page to change the "exoskeleton" interpretation in order to eliminate what seems to be a direct contradiction via the Visual Dictionary section. My edit was reversed with the comment "the Visual Dictionary is not a valid source for in-universe articles."  Fair enough ... now I know that rule!  But this raises a different question, then:
I edited the page to change the "exoskeleton" interpretation in order to eliminate what seems to be a direct contradiction via the Visual Dictionary section. My edit was reversed with the comment "the Visual Dictionary is not a valid source for in-universe articles."  Fair enough ... now I know that rule!  But this raises a different question, then:


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[[User:Just another Bill|Just another Bill]] [[User talk:Just another Bill|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 03:19, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
[[User:Just another Bill|Just another Bill]] [[User talk:Just another Bill|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 03:19, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
:You're not causing any trouble...edit summaries are supposed to be informative, so it's nice that someone actually learned something!
:I reverted your edit to the previous version because my only knowledge of Sycorax comes from ''[[The Christmas Invasion (TV story)|The Christmas Invasion]]'', but they appear in several comic stories and a short story which might contain some of the info you are questioning. If you are familiar with the comics, feel free to edit the page.
:I think it would be helpful for you to take a look at [[Tardis:Valid sources]]. You'll see what we allow as sources for in-universe pages. If you have any other questions, you can ask me at [[User talk:Shambala108|my talk page]] or that of any other [[Tardis:Administrators|admin]]. Thanks! [[User:Shambala108|Shambala108]] [[User talk:Shambala108|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 04:22, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
::I just watched the episode again and am convinced this article needs updates. The distinction between "smooth" and "jagged" exoskeletons is not correct; what happens in the episode is that the Sycorax leader looks exactly like all the other Sycorax until he removes his "smooth" ''helmet'', revealing the "jagged" appliances underneath.  (One of the human characters even explicitly states that it is a helmet.)  Since the outer part is clearly a tool created by the Sycorax and not part of their inherent anatomy, and since the inner appliance looks just like it only in a different shape, the most logical conclusion is that the inner part is also something they add to themselves as part of their warrior equipment.
::Since there is no attribution here to support the idea that these are exoskeleteons (nor the idea that they have no skin), and since the episode gives no clear evidence of these things except to explicitly state that the helmet ''is indeed a helmet'', I'm forced to consider both the "exokeleton" and "no skin" claims to be speculation.  Shouldn't the article be rewritten to avoid making unsubstantiated claims?
::[[User:Just another Bill|Just another Bill]] [[User talk:Just another Bill|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 15:25, July 28, 2013 (UTC)
::: I think the "exoskeleton" bit is referring to what we see the Sycorax leader once he takes his helmet off. Looking at the images of the Sycorax leader and of the female Sycorax from ''[[The Widow's Curse (comic story)|The Widow's Curse]] does'' come off to me as either an exoskeleton or a partially-exposed skull. Whatever is coming off those female Sycorax' skulls though doesn't seem like "flowing hair" to me, but some kind of clothing. Anyone who's read ''Curse'' care to substantiate this? -- [[User:Tybort|Tybort]] ([[User talk:Tybort|talk page]]) 18:47, July 28, 2013 (UTC)
== Acceptable Edit? ==
The Sycorax resemble the Kaleesh race from Star Wars, mainly due to their similar appearance, i.e red skin, their bone masks, war-like nature.
Is this edit actually ok? I didn't realise it was if it is actually ok. [[User:Masterpwn|Masterpwn]] [[User talk:Masterpwn|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 17:49, April 24, 2014 (UTC)
I edited the culture section to show resemblences with klingons {{Unsigned|Thpkmnmstr|9:55, 16 April 2017}}
: There are two problems with such a suggestion. Firstly, it is not confirmed by in-universe sources. Hence, it can only be present in the "Behind the scenes" section. Secondly, I would like to see a statement by producers that they intended the similarity. Because they are not that similar to my eye, especially with the latter-days Klingons that joined the Federation. I am deleting the comment in the culture section. Please feel free to post a more detailed and better sourced note in Behind the scenes. [[User:Amorkuz|Amorkuz]] [[User talk:Amorkuz|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 20:10, April 18, 2017 (UTC)

Latest revision as of 20:10, 18 April 2017

Exoskeleton[[edit]]

I edited the page to change the "exoskeleton" interpretation in order to eliminate what seems to be a direct contradiction via the Visual Dictionary section. My edit was reversed with the comment "the Visual Dictionary is not a valid source for in-universe articles." Fair enough ... now I know that rule! But this raises a different question, then:

What authoritative source proves that the Sycorax do, in fact, have exoskeletons and not helmets? If such evidence exists, it should be cited, right? And if it does not, then should the article be rewritten to say "the appearance of an exoskeleton" or something?

In other words, if there is no such evidence that it is truly an exoskeleton, why does speculation trump the Visual Dictionary?

It sure looks like a helmet. And if it isn't, then how do these guys eat their dinner?

http://www.bleedingcool.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/06/sycorax.jpg

(Or even talk, for that matter.)

Also, Weta's officially licenced product is called a "Sycorax helmet," not a Sycorax exoskeleton ... doesn't that at least suggest the creative intent was the former moreso than the latter?

http://www.wetanz.com/sycorax-helmet/

Not trying to be a troublemaker ... just trying to learn the ropes.

Just another Bill 03:19, June 20, 2013 (UTC)

You're not causing any trouble...edit summaries are supposed to be informative, so it's nice that someone actually learned something!
I reverted your edit to the previous version because my only knowledge of Sycorax comes from The Christmas Invasion, but they appear in several comic stories and a short story which might contain some of the info you are questioning. If you are familiar with the comics, feel free to edit the page.
I think it would be helpful for you to take a look at Tardis:Valid sources. You'll see what we allow as sources for in-universe pages. If you have any other questions, you can ask me at my talk page or that of any other admin. Thanks! Shambala108 04:22, June 20, 2013 (UTC)
I just watched the episode again and am convinced this article needs updates. The distinction between "smooth" and "jagged" exoskeletons is not correct; what happens in the episode is that the Sycorax leader looks exactly like all the other Sycorax until he removes his "smooth" helmet, revealing the "jagged" appliances underneath. (One of the human characters even explicitly states that it is a helmet.) Since the outer part is clearly a tool created by the Sycorax and not part of their inherent anatomy, and since the inner appliance looks just like it only in a different shape, the most logical conclusion is that the inner part is also something they add to themselves as part of their warrior equipment.
Since there is no attribution here to support the idea that these are exoskeleteons (nor the idea that they have no skin), and since the episode gives no clear evidence of these things except to explicitly state that the helmet is indeed a helmet, I'm forced to consider both the "exokeleton" and "no skin" claims to be speculation. Shouldn't the article be rewritten to avoid making unsubstantiated claims?
Just another Bill 15:25, July 28, 2013 (UTC)
I think the "exoskeleton" bit is referring to what we see the Sycorax leader once he takes his helmet off. Looking at the images of the Sycorax leader and of the female Sycorax from The Widow's Curse does come off to me as either an exoskeleton or a partially-exposed skull. Whatever is coming off those female Sycorax' skulls though doesn't seem like "flowing hair" to me, but some kind of clothing. Anyone who's read Curse care to substantiate this? -- Tybort (talk page) 18:47, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

Acceptable Edit?[[edit]]

The Sycorax resemble the Kaleesh race from Star Wars, mainly due to their similar appearance, i.e red skin, their bone masks, war-like nature.

Is this edit actually ok? I didn't realise it was if it is actually ok. Masterpwn 17:49, April 24, 2014 (UTC)

I edited the culture section to show resemblences with klingons The preceding unsigned comment was added by Thpkmnmstr (talk • contribs) 9:55, 16 April 2017.

There are two problems with such a suggestion. Firstly, it is not confirmed by in-universe sources. Hence, it can only be present in the "Behind the scenes" section. Secondly, I would like to see a statement by producers that they intended the similarity. Because they are not that similar to my eye, especially with the latter-days Klingons that joined the Federation. I am deleting the comment in the culture section. Please feel free to post a more detailed and better sourced note in Behind the scenes. Amorkuz 20:10, April 18, 2017 (UTC)