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Could the Old Mother count as a bad guy as she wanted to kill them?--[[User:GingerM|GingerM]] 17:50, 29 May 2005 (UTC)
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: Not sure that she would count as a bad guy she did was the one who set them free after all--[[User:Amxitsa|Amxitsa]] 15:44, 12 Jun 2005 (UTC)
== Uncredited cast ==


* [[Policeman (An Unearthly Child)|Policeman]] - [[Reg Cranfield (actor)|Reg Cranfield]] (uncredited)
* Members of Tribe (all uncredited)- [[Billie Davis]], [[Brenda Proctor]], [[Lyn Turner]], [[Doreen Ubells]], [[Frank Wheatley]], [[Janet Fairhead]]
* Tribe Children (all uncredited) - [[Antonia Moss]], [[Julie Moss]], [[Timothy Palmer]], [[David Rosen]], [[Trevor Thomas]], [[Elizabeth White]]
* Kal's shadow - [[Leslie Bates]] (uncredited)
* Double for Kal - [[Billy Cornelius]] (uncredited)
* Double for Za - [[Derek Ware]] (uncredited)


Should this really be a cultural reference or should they just refer to the real world references. Would it be better in continuity or should it be removed from this page and put in the appropriate enties i am about to write? "Susan is listening to John Smith and the Common Men when Ian and Barbara walk in, John Smith being the stage name of 'the honourable Aubrey Waites, also known as Chris Waites according to Ian"--[[User:Amxitsa|Amxitsa]] 15:44, 12 Jun 2005 (UTC)
Above is the list of the uncredited cast that was on the page. It will stay here until, source, not IMDb, are found. [[User:Mini-mitch|MM]]/<small>[[User talk:Mini-mitch|Want to talk?]]</small> 23:02, April 13, 2012 (UTC)


== Doctor who? ==


: Since the performers are entirely fictional, and in light of the lead singer's name, I'd put it under continuity, with a note that "John Smith" was the pseudonym the Doctor later adopted during his time with UNIT.
Completely new here, but during the scene in the TARDIS at the beginning of The Cave Of Skulls, Ian calls The Doctor "Doctor Foreman" to which he replies "Doctor who?  I don't know what you're talking about." This is probably worth referencing somewhere on the wiki but I have no idea where the best place would be.
--[[User:Freethinker1of1|Freethinker1of1]] 20:46, 12 Jun 2005 (UTC)


I was going to remove the individual episode links from this and delete the pages written for them, but on the off chance that someone may actually enter "The Cave of Skulls" or "The Forest of Fear" in the search box, I thought that instead I would simply modify the links so they lead to the epsiodes in question in the "Plot" section.
[[User:Setantae|Setantae]] [[User talk:Setantae|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 20:50, September 14, 2014 (UTC)
--[[User:Freethinker1of1|Freethinker1of1]] 03:57, 31 August 2006 (UTC)


There were several persons listed as having played the schoolchildren that I couldn't find listed in any of the sources listed under "External links." Since I couldn't find anything confirming that these people had actually been in the episode, I'e removed them for now. If anyone can find  asource confirming that they did appear in this story, by all means put them back.
== Decimal discussion ==
--[[User:OncomingStorm|OncomingStorm]] 09:15, 21 September 2006 (UTC)


== Complete rejig of this page ==
Perhaps just a nitpicky situation, but on the recent amendment to the page's plot detailing;
"''However, she has very curious gaps about present-day culture — for example, she forgets that the UK has yet to adopt a decimal currency.''"
It is certainly the case that the United Kingdom and Ireland would, in real-world instance, collectively decide in 1966 that it would phase into decimal currency by 1971... but since this is about the in-universe occurrences - do we actually have a source to properly define this as being a reference for the entirety of the UK in-universe or are we technically presuming that it's not just related to England? [[User:JDPManjoume|JDPManjoume]] [[User talk:JDPManjoume|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 13:18, 5 November 2021 (UTC)


Hello, all. I've come over from Wikipedia (on a different username), and I decided to set up an account. Why? Because I thought this free Doctor Who reference site looked slightly lacking and unprofessional. So, what I've done is I've completely cleaned up this page, and am using it as an example of what this project can do.
== DVD releases ==
I have not added much more information, I have just shifted stuff around and added proper headings, and it is looking so much better.
Now, being a newbie here, I don't know this next question. Where is the sort of 'meeting point' for everyone (like WikiProjects on the original site) where we can have a discussion about this. --[[User:TheTimeMeddler|TheTimeMeddler]] 20:49, 31 October 2007 (UTC)
:You seemed to have dropped a lot of information though, particularly in the ''Myths'' (Which seems to be completely gone now) --[[User:Colleyd|Colleyd]] 23:25, 31 October 2007 (UTC)Woof.


::The rejig is interesting, but it's not quite as easy to read.
Do all DVD releases show the unaired pilot episode first if Play All is selected? [[User:Gilgamesh de Uruk|Gilgamesh de Uruk]] [[User talk:Gilgamesh de Uruk|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 07:55, 6 February 2023 (UTC)
::Just some things to note:
::*There are separate pages for all the Novelisations ([[Target Novelisation]]s), which negates it all being contained on one page, there are also proposals in the works (though nothing confirmed yet) for separate DVD/video pages.
::*It seems this in your 'rejig' has become a more generic wikiepdia page, rather than a page specified to the Doctor Who universe. The References section was deliberately split up to give the references meaning and links to the categories from whence they came. (Though some of the detail is appreciated).
::*The location filming and myths sections have both been removed.
::*Also Continuity and Continuity errors are two completely different things, Continuity refers to the interealatedness between stories be it TV/Novel/Novella/CD etc. While Discontinuity, errors etc is about actually plot problems, things which don't make sense and things like boom mics in shot.


::Also just on the format of the Story pages, it is generally formatted thusly: Synopsis, Plot, Cast, Crew, References, Story Notes etc, Continuity. Mainly because References relate to the story and therefore are exterior to the Story notes (they are also the in-universe section of the article). Continuity follows the Story Notes as it links the interconnectedness of the stories into a wider continuity.
== Update to mention Tribe of Gum Controversy? ==


::Also there are just simple formatting issues such as the bullet points on the External Links which make for a easier to read and follow list.
Basically the title, should we add mention of the whole controversy going on, especially as it now official that the BBC have lost the rights? {{Unsigned|Brigadier-tc}}
::Then there are just things (I personally) don't think look good which are the tables in the article of the DVDs/VHS which just seem a little too imposed within the article. --[[User:Tangerineduel|Tangerineduel]] 06:11, 1 November 2007 (UTC)


::: Okay, I'll try and get round to everything you've said...
: I'd rather wait a little longer until we know a few more details. [[User:Bongolium500|<span title="aka Bongolium500">Bongo50</span>]] [[User talk:Bongolium500|<span title="talk to me">☎</span>]] 16:27, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
Alright fair enough. [[User:Brigadier-tc|Brigadier-tc]] [[User talk:Brigadier-tc|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 16:38, 17 October 2023 (UTC)


:::* About the Myths section - I thought that it was unclear. You've reinstated the Myths, Tangerineduel, but I still think each bullet point under myths should start with 'It is a myth that...' or something similar, and then actually relate the truth of the matter afterwards. Otherwise, it is unclear about whether it is true or false, from a reader's point of view.
== Wife in Space ==
:::* Novelisations/DVD/VHS sections: I have not added anything that wasn't there before. Any unnessecary detail included in these sections was there before I edited, I just enlarged the pictures and turned those lists into thumbnails. (To tell the truth, I find the DVD/video section to be extremely ugly and hard to read. Perhaps we could at least reinstate the headers that I put in?
:::* Personally, I find the References section on the original page (and on the page that's a cross between yours and mine, thanks to Tangerineduel) cumbersome, ineffective and asking for trouble.
:::* Can I just clarify, do we all know what 'Location filming' means? I always take it to mean when they go out of the studio and film somewhere that's not a studio. Also, my opinion is that any headed section with only one entry should be merged with another one.
:::* Also, one or two things that I've spotted are:
::::* In Tangerineduel's new version of the page, there's my written paragraph about the ratings, and then the ratings immediately afterwards. Do we need both? Personally, when there's a choice, I'd go for prose every time as it looks better and is easier to insert information into than a large bulleted list.
::::* The 'Goofs' section appears like something on a forum. I say we clean it up.


::: Well, that's what I think. Later, I might make another version of this page, merging what I've just said into the [http://tardis.wikia.com/index.php?title=An_Unearthly_Child&oldid=58719 current revision]. --[[User:TheTimeMeddler|TheTimeMeddler]] 06:55, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
Genuinely, in what sense is Neil and Sue Perryman's blog and its accompanying memoir an episode guide or reference book? -- [[User:Tybort|Tybort]] ([[User talk:Tybort|talk page]]) 21:26, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
: If anything, including any of those sources, save ''maybe The Discontinuity Guide'', listing episode 1 and 2-4 as separate stories, gives precedence to fans over the ''Doctor Who'' production office and is pushing [[T:NPOV]]. -- [[User:Tybort|Tybort]] ([[User talk:Tybort|talk page]]) 22:48, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
:: "Reference book" is Wiki-speak for ''any'' ''Doctor Who''-related non-fiction book, as distinct from the narrower sense I suppose you're working from. [[User:Scrooge MacDuck|'''Scrooge MacDuck''']] [[User_talk:Scrooge MacDuck|⊕]] 23:09, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
::: OK, so that's literally worse than my working assumption. Why is a non-fiction and from what I gather self published ''memoir'' that's mostly about watching a show and the two people's romantic relationship any kind of authority or precedent holder over what is or is not for the production of a TV show? I could say and publish on social media that ''Rose'' is the tenth story of the fifth series and is also a nine-parter, that still wouldn't will it as such. -- [[User:Tybort|Tybort]] ([[User talk:Tybort|talk page]]) 23:19, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
:: No, but if you published a book claiming as much and it garnered significant attention in the fandom, that would be a notable fact about the public reception to ''An Unearthly Child''. We're not arguing about tablets of law here, or an underlying objective reality. How people lump and number serials ''post hoc'' is a sociological observation about trends in fandom, critical thought, and BBC record-keeping. "Wrong" ideas that gain significant public acknowledgement are as notable as "true" (BBC-ordered) data. And certainly ''Wife in Space'' is a very significant book as far as non-BBC-authored non-fiction goes, at about the same level as ''AHistory'', ''About Time'', ''TARDIS Eruditorum'', etc. [[User:Scrooge MacDuck|'''Scrooge MacDuck''']] [[User_talk:Scrooge MacDuck|⊕]] 23:24, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
::: Wrong ideas are by their very essence false and fallacious. Kate Bush still did not write ''Kinda'' even though it's jokingly treated as fact within the ''Wife'' blog. RTD mistakenly believed for ''decades'' his own unmade script was similar to ''The Long Game'' and that story is all over the place. Also, nothing links to Neil and Sue's blog besides this (fallacious) passage, while links to almost every other thing I've seen listed (apart from maybe Eruditorum) has been on real world and behind the scenes sections all over this wiki. By definition that's not equivalent in significance. -- [[User:Tybort|Tybort]] ([[User talk:Tybort|talk page]]) 23:39, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
:::: No pages that link to Neil Perryman mention the blog either (though the page itself does). -- [[User:Tybort|Tybort]] ([[User talk:Tybort|talk page]]) 23:43, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
::: Then the error is in the other direction. We should definitely have a page on ''Wife'' if we don't already, and the redlink indicates as much.


::::Location Filming is a bit of a misnomer, really it's 'Filming Locations' (or 'Where is is filmed?') or something like that.
::: The ''Wife''-specific Kate Bush joke might be another matter, but certainly RTD's own wrong beliefs, expressed in a variety of notable reference sources, should be recorded ''as'' wrong beliefs somewhere on the Wiki. All our TV stories have a "Myths" section for similar reasons. We are historians of ''Doctor Who'' fandom and production, as much as we are recorders of the fictional contents of actual ''Doctor Who'' media. Documenting errors, controversies, etc. is part of that duty.
::::If it's in the Myth's section every sentance does not need to start with 'It is a myth' (I've read entries on other sites like that and after the second one you just skip the sentence entirely.
::::As for my new version, I adapted (/grabbed a few salient points from the reverted version), I intended to go back later and look at it (or someone else) and edit it down further.
::::The references section is all about separating in-universe from out-of-universe, when there comes more complicated in-referencing the separation is sometimes vital for making a clear picture.
::::As for the ratings the bullet points make for a much easier to read piece of information, but I have edited down the current version making it less wordy. Also the data is much easier to read when separated out into episodes in bullet point, rather than in prose form.
::::As for merging with sections, we are trying to keep some continuity between the pages, so a reader reading from one section to another (perhaps looking for a certain piece of information) will see it within the page in the same area on each subsequent page. If sections move around/are merged with between pages, then it starts to look cluttered and unreadable. --[[User:Tangerineduel|Tangerineduel]] 09:37, 1 November 2007 (UTC)


::::: On about the Myths section here: I don't tend to read headers, and if I saw that information (specifically when it says "The first episode was delayed by 10 minutes because of an assination. It was delayed 80 seconds."), I would be a bit confused. So we need something to say that it's a myth. --[[User:TheTimeMeddler|TheTimeMeddler]] 17:15, 1 November 2007 (UTC)
::: And again I stress that I don't think there's any comparison between ''false empirical claims'', and differing classification systems. There's no ''fact of the matter'' as to whether ''AUC'' is best considered as a story in its own right distinct from the cavemen episodes; it's a critical position, a literary conceit. You can't put the serial in a supercollider to try and see whether it's "really" two distinct stories or not. That it was commissioned in one way is a fact; that a number of published works evidencing the views of ''Doctor Who'' fandom and critics say something else is another fact. These facts are both interesting and should both be recorded. [[User:Scrooge MacDuck|'''Scrooge MacDuck''']] [[User_talk:Scrooge MacDuck|⊕]] 23:47, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
 
::::Technically the ''Eruditorum'' thread from the old forums never actually came to a 100% clear solution on how to cover things from it, Czech didn't want to use it to base policy off of because it was a "special snowflake". But [[T:UNOFF REF]] and [[Tardis:Resources]] still remain in conflict as to whether or not we can use websites to this day. We really do need a thread to go over this issue in more detail. [[User:Najawin|Najawin]] [[User talk:Najawin|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 23:52, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
 
:: Aye, but it's a book too, is the point. We don't need it to consider it as 'simply' a blog. [[User:Scrooge MacDuck|'''Scrooge MacDuck''']] [[User_talk:Scrooge MacDuck|⊕]] 23:53, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
 
::: I don't even see how UNOFF REF or Resources plays here. Wife in Space is a fan watching episodes of a show with his non-fan wife and recording and transcribing on the spot reactions of Sue's first viewing. If 700 pages linked there and it ''was'' a page on Tardis Wiki that would still be the case. It is not ''Doctor Who'' scholarship. It is closer in purpose to a law (but not necessarily ''Doctor Who'') expert reacting on YouTube to a trial on the show.
::: Unsurprisingly (to me anyway), [http://wifeinspace.com/2011/01/an-unearthly-child/ the blog lists the four episodes in one place (unsecure link)]. The separation of scores is attributed entirely to Sue "enjoy[ing] the first episode a great deal, but the remaining episodes got bogged down in the politics of the cavemen, and she didn’t really care about them that much." Neil uncontroversially calls all four episodes one collective story story when he writes
:::: When I ask my wife to score the four episodes collectively known as – actually, let’s not get into that now – she doesn’t hesitate:
 
:::: Sue: Three out of 10.
::: So the whole bit about Wife in Space (the blog and accompanying book) definitively considering it two stories, even as a massive rulebend if not lie to call a reference book, isn't backed up. Like I prefer the Vardan part of ''Invasion of Time'' to the Sontaran and hospital corridor TARDIS part. It is still, as released on digital and physical media, and production terms, and to me subjectively, one story. -- [[User:Tybort|Tybort]] ([[User talk:Tybort|talk page]]) 17:48, 4 December 2023 (UTC)

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Uncredited cast[[edit source]]

Above is the list of the uncredited cast that was on the page. It will stay here until, source, not IMDb, are found. MM/Want to talk? 23:02, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Doctor who?[[edit source]]

Completely new here, but during the scene in the TARDIS at the beginning of The Cave Of Skulls, Ian calls The Doctor "Doctor Foreman" to which he replies "Doctor who? I don't know what you're talking about." This is probably worth referencing somewhere on the wiki but I have no idea where the best place would be.

Setantae 20:50, September 14, 2014 (UTC)

Decimal discussion[[edit source]]

Perhaps just a nitpicky situation, but on the recent amendment to the page's plot detailing; "However, she has very curious gaps about present-day culture — for example, she forgets that the UK has yet to adopt a decimal currency." It is certainly the case that the United Kingdom and Ireland would, in real-world instance, collectively decide in 1966 that it would phase into decimal currency by 1971... but since this is about the in-universe occurrences - do we actually have a source to properly define this as being a reference for the entirety of the UK in-universe or are we technically presuming that it's not just related to England? JDPManjoume 13:18, 5 November 2021 (UTC)

DVD releases[[edit source]]

Do all DVD releases show the unaired pilot episode first if Play All is selected? Gilgamesh de Uruk 07:55, 6 February 2023 (UTC)

Update to mention Tribe of Gum Controversy?[[edit source]]

Basically the title, should we add mention of the whole controversy going on, especially as it now official that the BBC have lost the rights? The preceding unsigned comment was added by Brigadier-tc (talk • contribs) .

I'd rather wait a little longer until we know a few more details. Bongo50 16:27, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

Alright fair enough. Brigadier-tc 16:38, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

Wife in Space[[edit source]]

Genuinely, in what sense is Neil and Sue Perryman's blog and its accompanying memoir an episode guide or reference book? -- Tybort (talk page) 21:26, 3 December 2023 (UTC)

If anything, including any of those sources, save maybe The Discontinuity Guide, listing episode 1 and 2-4 as separate stories, gives precedence to fans over the Doctor Who production office and is pushing T:NPOV. -- Tybort (talk page) 22:48, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
"Reference book" is Wiki-speak for any Doctor Who-related non-fiction book, as distinct from the narrower sense I suppose you're working from. Scrooge MacDuck 23:09, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
OK, so that's literally worse than my working assumption. Why is a non-fiction and from what I gather self published memoir that's mostly about watching a show and the two people's romantic relationship any kind of authority or precedent holder over what is or is not for the production of a TV show? I could say and publish on social media that Rose is the tenth story of the fifth series and is also a nine-parter, that still wouldn't will it as such. -- Tybort (talk page) 23:19, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
No, but if you published a book claiming as much and it garnered significant attention in the fandom, that would be a notable fact about the public reception to An Unearthly Child. We're not arguing about tablets of law here, or an underlying objective reality. How people lump and number serials post hoc is a sociological observation about trends in fandom, critical thought, and BBC record-keeping. "Wrong" ideas that gain significant public acknowledgement are as notable as "true" (BBC-ordered) data. And certainly Wife in Space is a very significant book as far as non-BBC-authored non-fiction goes, at about the same level as AHistory, About Time, TARDIS Eruditorum, etc. Scrooge MacDuck 23:24, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
Wrong ideas are by their very essence false and fallacious. Kate Bush still did not write Kinda even though it's jokingly treated as fact within the Wife blog. RTD mistakenly believed for decades his own unmade script was similar to The Long Game and that story is all over the place. Also, nothing links to Neil and Sue's blog besides this (fallacious) passage, while links to almost every other thing I've seen listed (apart from maybe Eruditorum) has been on real world and behind the scenes sections all over this wiki. By definition that's not equivalent in significance. -- Tybort (talk page) 23:39, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
No pages that link to Neil Perryman mention the blog either (though the page itself does). -- Tybort (talk page) 23:43, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
Then the error is in the other direction. We should definitely have a page on Wife if we don't already, and the redlink indicates as much.
The Wife-specific Kate Bush joke might be another matter, but certainly RTD's own wrong beliefs, expressed in a variety of notable reference sources, should be recorded as wrong beliefs somewhere on the Wiki. All our TV stories have a "Myths" section for similar reasons. We are historians of Doctor Who fandom and production, as much as we are recorders of the fictional contents of actual Doctor Who media. Documenting errors, controversies, etc. is part of that duty.
And again I stress that I don't think there's any comparison between false empirical claims, and differing classification systems. There's no fact of the matter as to whether AUC is best considered as a story in its own right distinct from the cavemen episodes; it's a critical position, a literary conceit. You can't put the serial in a supercollider to try and see whether it's "really" two distinct stories or not. That it was commissioned in one way is a fact; that a number of published works evidencing the views of Doctor Who fandom and critics say something else is another fact. These facts are both interesting and should both be recorded. Scrooge MacDuck 23:47, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
Technically the Eruditorum thread from the old forums never actually came to a 100% clear solution on how to cover things from it, Czech didn't want to use it to base policy off of because it was a "special snowflake". But T:UNOFF REF and Tardis:Resources still remain in conflict as to whether or not we can use websites to this day. We really do need a thread to go over this issue in more detail. Najawin 23:52, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
Aye, but it's a book too, is the point. We don't need it to consider it as 'simply' a blog. Scrooge MacDuck 23:53, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
I don't even see how UNOFF REF or Resources plays here. Wife in Space is a fan watching episodes of a show with his non-fan wife and recording and transcribing on the spot reactions of Sue's first viewing. If 700 pages linked there and it was a page on Tardis Wiki that would still be the case. It is not Doctor Who scholarship. It is closer in purpose to a law (but not necessarily Doctor Who) expert reacting on YouTube to a trial on the show.
Unsurprisingly (to me anyway), the blog lists the four episodes in one place (unsecure link). The separation of scores is attributed entirely to Sue "enjoy[ing] the first episode a great deal, but the remaining episodes got bogged down in the politics of the cavemen, and she didn’t really care about them that much." Neil uncontroversially calls all four episodes one collective story story when he writes
When I ask my wife to score the four episodes collectively known as – actually, let’s not get into that now – she doesn’t hesitate:
Sue: Three out of 10.
So the whole bit about Wife in Space (the blog and accompanying book) definitively considering it two stories, even as a massive rulebend if not lie to call a reference book, isn't backed up. Like I prefer the Vardan part of Invasion of Time to the Sontaran and hospital corridor TARDIS part. It is still, as released on digital and physical media, and production terms, and to me subjectively, one story. -- Tybort (talk page) 17:48, 4 December 2023 (UTC)