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It looks as if something was missing in the second sentence. [[User:RoseTenthFan|RoseTenthFan]] [[User talk:RoseTenthFan|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 18:09, April 25, 2016 (UTC)
It looks as if something was missing in the second sentence. [[User:RoseTenthFan|RoseTenthFan]] [[User talk:RoseTenthFan|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 18:09, April 25, 2016 (UTC)
:There should be a comma after "though", but aside from that it makes perfect sense as it is. -- [[User:Jack "BtR" Saxon|Saxon]] 18:15, April 25, 2016 (UTC)

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Sentence cleanup?[[edit source]]

Homo- and lesbophobia were a huge issue in human culture before Bernice Summerfield's home era of the 26th century. By Benny's time, though she couldn't understand why people had made such a big deal of such things.

It looks as if something was missing in the second sentence. RoseTenthFan 18:09, April 25, 2016 (UTC)

There should be a comma after "though", but aside from that it makes perfect sense as it is. -- Saxon 18:15, April 25, 2016 (UTC)