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Ben, Polly, Jamie and the Doctor prepare to leave the [[Galactic bank|Galacti-bank]] when they find the [[The Doctor's TARDIS|TARDIS]] clamped by a yellow obstruction, preventing them from getting inside to take off. They head inside the bank, as the Doctor suspects that by opening an account they can use that to pay the fee and have the clamp removed. Just then the bank is invaded by the [[Selachian|Selachians]], who attempt to break into and rob the bank's vaults. They discover that the vault is [[Dimensional transcendentalism|dimensionally transcendental]] to protect the things inside and Tompkins, the bank manager, does not have the key as it continually changes so they create a hostage situation, demanding they be given access to the vault as commander Scanlon arrives to deal with the situation. After the Selachians murder the first hostage, the Doctor offers them a deal: he'll help them break into the vault and negotiate a hostage deal with Scanlon if they don't hurt anyone else. They agree. | |||
Polly meanwhile is permitted to go to the kitchen to prepare [[tea]] for everyone during the tense negotiations and discovers Ben having hid himself in the wall earlier when the Selachians broke in. The make a plan and create [[Glue bomb|glue bombs]] to try attack the Selachians with and Polly brings out the tea but secretly tells Jamie their plan (while the Doctor is too busy with the negotiations) and gives him a glue bomb. However, she is released along with a few other bank patrons as per the Doctor's orders to keep her safe. Jamie, thinking he's been signalled by Ben, attacks the Selachians but fails. Ben comes out to defend him but in the ensuing scurfuffle, Ben reveals that a [[bomb]] has been planted in the wall, thinking it is a Selachian ploy but it turns out not to have been put there by the Selachians... | |||
=== Part two === | === Part two === | ||
The Doctor attempts to analyze the bomb but accidentally activates it. Meanwhile Polly and the other released hostages are taken aboard Scanlon's ship where she realises Scanlon plans to take the bank back by force by any means necessary | |||
doc accidentally sets off bomb while trying to analyze, polly boards ship, discovers scalon gonna retake bank by force | doc accidentally sets off bomb while trying to analyze, polly boards ship, discovers scalon gonna retake bank by force | ||
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6.08 The Selachian Gambit
Part one
-at galactic bank, find tardis clamped by yellow obstruction. go into bank to make account idea of doctor; suddenly salachians arrive to rob bank, try to open vault to find it dimensionally transcendental. doctor offers help to open it after 1 killing to ensure no more killingnegotiates hostage situation trade while polly stumbles into be in kitchen who went into hiding when sels broke in; they make glue bombs, polly goes to serve tea, secretly hands jamie bomb and tells him plan while doc continues to try negotiate hostages
jamie attacks, ben shows himself and ben explainsvtheres a bomb in the wall
Ben, Polly, Jamie and the Doctor prepare to leave the Galacti-bank when they find the TARDIS clamped by a yellow obstruction, preventing them from getting inside to take off. They head inside the bank, as the Doctor suspects that by opening an account they can use that to pay the fee and have the clamp removed. Just then the bank is invaded by the Selachians, who attempt to break into and rob the bank's vaults. They discover that the vault is dimensionally transcendental to protect the things inside and Tompkins, the bank manager, does not have the key as it continually changes so they create a hostage situation, demanding they be given access to the vault as commander Scanlon arrives to deal with the situation. After the Selachians murder the first hostage, the Doctor offers them a deal: he'll help them break into the vault and negotiate a hostage deal with Scanlon if they don't hurt anyone else. They agree.
Polly meanwhile is permitted to go to the kitchen to prepare tea for everyone during the tense negotiations and discovers Ben having hid himself in the wall earlier when the Selachians broke in. The make a plan and create glue bombs to try attack the Selachians with and Polly brings out the tea but secretly tells Jamie their plan (while the Doctor is too busy with the negotiations) and gives him a glue bomb. However, she is released along with a few other bank patrons as per the Doctor's orders to keep her safe. Jamie, thinking he's been signalled by Ben, attacks the Selachians but fails. Ben comes out to defend him but in the ensuing scurfuffle, Ben reveals that a bomb has been planted in the wall, thinking it is a Selachian ploy but it turns out not to have been put there by the Selachians...
Part two
The Doctor attempts to analyze the bomb but accidentally activates it. Meanwhile Polly and the other released hostages are taken aboard Scanlon's ship where she realises Scanlon plans to take the bank back by force by any means necessary
doc accidentally sets off bomb while trying to analyze, polly boards ship, discovers scalon gonna retake bank by force
-deposit hoppers ; also turns out bank in trouble so plundered their own vaults
-seething, selachians reactivate bomb and take two hostages, ben and jamie,
-ben and jamie trick the selachinans and escape with the help of Polly's last glue bomb; go back to bank to warn doctor; polly on scanlon ship, fires and destorys selachian escaping ship; just then bomb goes off and bank destoryed as polly looks on in horror
-doctor manages to save everyone materializes vault onboard scanlon's ship
-tompkins offers free compensation ; doctor uses it as excuse to get paperwork done, has money given to charity to ben's chagrin but asks to have 10 credits to pay parking fee to remove clamp
References
- 27:00 how selachian water suit works
- 29:30 bank description
- lady sylvia mentions transmat
- selachians call jamie a skirt wearing human; jamie wears a kilt
- doctor needs to access dimentional satbilizers to return vault that saves them to proper time
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- polly is surprised b/c the doctor never carries money;
10.1 The Mouthless Dead
Part one
The TARDIS brings the Doctor, Jamie, Ben and Polly to a train platform in Kent. It gets partially damaged by a passing train and the four are forced to leave and give it time to repair itself. They visit the signalman to inquire about any damage accidentally done to the train and he treats them to tea upon discovering Ben's and Jamie's credentials, thinking they've just returned from World War I. He tells them some scary stories about terrible train accidents. Polly, wanting a breath a fresh air, steps out, followed by Jamie and Ben while the Doctor stays behind to talk trains with the signalman, having got on well with him and the signalman tells him the train story of the "Phantom Light".
While exploring the station, the three get an uneasy feeling and Ben spots an eerie figure in a dark coat who disappears. They go to the waiting room and find a woman named Frances whom Polly talks to alone. The woman reveals she is waiting for her fiance's body to be brought back from the war. Meanwhile, outside, Ben explains to Jamie about the First World War, the Unknown Warrior and the Unknown Warrior's Funeral. They see a lamp in the distance and decide to go warn a mysterious figure they see to get off the train tracks. Ben, after a closer inspection, reveals the figure is actually 'figures' and they look like his Uncle's crew from the Lion moving towards them. He and Jamie find the Doctor and explain the situation. The signalman tries to send a warning to the train through the signals to slow down while Ben explains what he saw to the Doctor. Jamie runs outside to see the shadowy figures approaching the waiting room in the station where Polly and Frances are...
Part two
Frances tells Polly about her fiance Michael Thomas who fought at the Somme. They hear the train and Frances explains she feels the body for the Unknown Warrior is him, so they go outside to check. However, once outside, they get a strange feeling about the train but the driver steps out and begins asking the girls questions. He goes off to talk to the signalman for more answers and Francis decides to go inside the train, but they get distracted by some approaching shadowy figures.
Jamie sees the girls board and approaches but despite what Ben described, Jamie sees the shadowy figures as his fellow Highlanders. Frances goes to see the coffin and Polly follows. The Doctor stops Jamie from leaving, saying that what they're seeing may be spectral. The signalman goes to try and clear off the figures on the track but they end up killing him much to the fright of the three. The Doctor explains that it may be the TARDIS's doing, and that its telepathic circuits may have been damaged when the train hit it earlier as Jamie and Ben saw different forms and figures in the shadows. Since it has landed in a post-war climate, the feelings of death and destruction so strongly associated with this war and with the Unknown Warrior and its coffin are being channeled through it into the TARDIS, causing it to manifest the strange shadowy figures that killed the signalman.
Polly and Frances look at the coffin and she explains that she wishes Michael would've returned to her alive. Suddenly a shadowy figure appears. Polly tries to stop Frances from reaching out and joining them but discovers that her pity, acting like two magnets of the same polarity repelling another, causes the figures to move away. The Doctor, Ben and Jamie are discovered by the figure Ben saw earlier, who turns out to be Michael Thomas. The Doctor realizes that the shadow figures don't seem to effect Thomas so he explains that they need to confront the shadowy figures and that they will need to use Thomas to guide them since the creatures do not effect him. They make their way to the train which is stopped at a signal when Thomas stops and explains he can't continue because he can't bear to face his fiance Frances and that the only reason he came was because he had hoped to see her get comfort from seeing the passing coffin of the Unknown Warrior. Inside the train, a figure approaches Polly and Frances, which Frances slowly realizes is Michael, despite the scar on his face. She is over-joyed to see him much to his astonishment and after he explains himself, she places hers and Thomas' hands on the sword on the coffin and swears to always love him. It begins to glow and the shadowy figures begin to disappear and the Doctor explains that the coffin, the focal point for the TARDIS, is now being filled with the emotions of love and compassion by the two, driving the dark figures away and making them disappear. The Doctor heads back to the station and alerts the next signal box that the train is clear to continue.
They head for the TARDIS and the Doctor explains to Jamie that the body of the unknown soldier is going to be buried in Westminster the following day. Jamie asks the Doctor what forms the shadows took when he saw them and he gives him a puzzling explanation. When Jamie asks the Doctor about other world wars and if the world is at peace now, which the Doctor affirms that it is for now but simply replies "Only the dead have seen the end of war."
References
- The TARDIS has a proximity alarm.
- The Doctor uses the TARDIS scanner.
- The Doctor recognizes a Southeastern and Chatham leaver frame and a Walker's two-position block and knows Rule 55.
- Ben expresses his surprise with the Australian slang word "Strewth".
- Ben's uncle was in the navy and died in the Battle of Jutland
- The station is just outside Canterbury
- Reversing the polarity is mentioned by the Doctor, comparing it to how the TARDIS's projections of the grief had been reversed to joy.
Notes
- This story was supposed to be a story meant for Ben and Jamie
- Elliott Chapman won an award which is part of the reason Lisa Bowerman recommended him
Continuity
- The TARDIS's telepathic circuits were damaged on collision with the train, causing the formation of the shadowy figures by channeling all the grief of the post-war climate of the UK focused onto the coffin of the Unknown Warrior. The telepathic circuits can also read minds and use emotions such as love and loss, and the Twelfth Doctor used them to help Clara locate Danny Pink after he died. (TV: Dark Water)
- Ben uses the exclamation "Strewth", an Australian phrase Tegan often used. (AUDIO: Ghost Walk, et al.)