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*The ruthless tyrant Borad being 'jeered' into falling into the Timelash seems vaguely ridiculous. | *The ruthless tyrant Borad being 'jeered' into falling into the Timelash seems vaguely ridiculous. | ||
*The way the Doctor dismisses his miraculous re-appearance for the climax after being moments away from death at the hands of the alien missile by simply saying it's a 'little trick' and that he'll 'explain later', is a total cop-out. | *The way the Doctor dismisses his miraculous re-appearance for the climax after being moments away from death at the hands of the alien missile by simply saying it's a 'little trick' and that he'll 'explain later', is a total cop-out. | ||
*When the Doctor tells Peri that the Kontron tunnel is a 'time corridor in space' she asks 'Didn't the [[Dalek]]s have one of those?', a reference to ''[[Resurrection of the Daleks]]''. However, she wasn't around at the time, and in ''[[Revelation of the Daleks]]'' she doesn't recognise a Dalek by its appearance, indicating that the Doctor may have told her a tiny detail of a previous adventure but neglected to describe what the main adversary actually looked like. | *When the Doctor tells Peri that the Kontron tunnel is a 'time corridor in space' she asks 'Didn't the [[Dalek]]s have one of those?', a reference to ''[[Resurrection of the Daleks]]''. However, she wasn't around at the time, and in ''[[Revelation of the Daleks]]'' she doesn't recognise a Dalek by its appearance, indicating that the Doctor may have told her a tiny detail of a previous adventure but neglected to describe what the main adversary actually looked like. | ||
::That doesn't really seem out of character for the 6th Doctor. He could start telling her a story about Resurrection, then digress, or just cut himself off. Or he could just throw that fact in as an aside or even a total non-sequitur in a conversation. "Do humans ever invent time travel?" "Sure, Peri, but not until the 51st century. Other races got there much faster--the Daleks had time corridors less than 100 years after they went into space--but it took you humans 3000 years to even invent primitive time rings, and blah blah blah." | |||
*In the power room, Maylin Renis, whilst adjusting some control dials, pulls one of them off and hurriedly replaces it. | *In the power room, Maylin Renis, whilst adjusting some control dials, pulls one of them off and hurriedly replaces it. |
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