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== What if I'd written the Day of the Doctor ==
It begin with the Night of the Doctor story. And we see a hint of Rose Tyler.
Rose Tyler really appears with help from the Moment. And wears a feminine version of the War Doctor's outfit. And zero skirt.
The War Doctor wears a Panama cap and a yinyang pendend. And a baldrick with a dao sword as many use on China.
Instead of rejecting the War Doctor, Rose accepts him.
The 9th Doctor returns. Struggling to stop himself from regenerating as the 1st and 12th Doctors. He's stable with the other Doctors.
There be a disc scratch on the music when the 10th Doctor realises the 'Zygon' be an ordinary rabbit.
Silurians be involved. Many old friends to Rose Tyler.
The Dalek Rose humanised is alive and leader to more humanised Daleks. It be hint he was companion to Rose, and also an apprentice to Omega who was made by the 2nd Doctor.
The humanised Daleks be call Humano-=Daleks, and be olive green which helps tell them apart from pureblood Daleks.
The War Doctor reacts to Rose's humanised Dalek with 'You brought a Dalek into my shed', similar tot eh 5th Doctor when Nyssa brought a Cybermat in 'Spare Parts'. One of many LOL moments. But he sees the truth in his tone when he claims to be a friend, sicne he's able to see if someone lies or speaks truth as shown with his alliance with the Child Master.
The 11th Doctor wears the green moleskin overcoat with the black waistcoat and also a rainbow paisley scarf.
The 10th Doctor wears a tartan scarf and a paisley tie.
The 9th Doctor tries to punch the War Doctor only to fail because the War Doctor's stronger and quicker as many remember from Engines of War.
Rose Tyler, hiding, chuckles on how fiery the War Doctor be in his old age. Many see old people as senile and frail. But the War Doctor be zero so which helps him seem more endearing. Always endearing when elders be tough; physically and mentally.
The 9th Doctor punches the Zygon queen, a big reason why they get imprison. Proving a hypocrite. He called the War Doctor a crazy savage, yet he attack someone without proof of he or she being a savage.
The 10th and 11th argue with the 9th on his reckless act, simialr to Jasper scolding Horace on letting the pups escaep on the 1990's version of 101 Dalmations.
Rose Tyler defends the War Doctor from the 9th, 10th, and 11th treating him a monster and point out their hypocrisy. The 9th Doctor calling humans 'stupid apes', sacrificing Gwyneth to Gelth and falling for their lies, refusing to give people second chances, torturing the humanised Dalek, and more. The 10th Doctor refusing to give people second chances hence how he nearly condenm Earth to the Sycorax chief's wife, his cowardice in hiding from the Family of Blood which sent humans to death, and his prejurdice of Jack Harkness which help the Master free. The 11th Doctor's cowardice in removing info which help the Weeping Angels, and hint on how they begint he Siege of Trenzalore. And also how all three try to prevent their own deaths. And point out the War Doctor's more self-sacrificing. And reveal What If scenarios such as the War Doctor seeing through the Gelth and Slitheen lies, sparing the humanised Dalek, only lettign Cassandra burst so she'd be in a coma and enable the police to take her brain without ehr escaping, gives people second chances, and more. Basically she calls the three hypocrites and the War Doctor the real Docotr.
When Clara calls the Doctors idiots for neglecting to open the door, the 9th Doctor points out the silent alarm. Zygons grab them. And the 9th Doctor calls Clara a stupid ape, much to the War Doctor's anger.
A Sylurian leader refsues to trust Kade Stewart because of her father's crimes against her people and reveal he began the Time War by destroying the only chance to prevent the virus which help Daleks conquer Earth. She be prove right with KAde trying to blow up London.
Davros and his Daleks appear.
Derek Jacobi's War Master appears. Wearing an outfit similar to the War Doctor only the trenchcoat is ebony black, the moleskin waistcoat is crimson with navy tartan symbols, and he also wears a baldrick with a Japanese katana sword and a bandolier. And a slouch cap. And his leather gaiters be charcoal grey contrasting the War Doctor's army green ones. And wears a gold fobwatch contrasting the War Doctor's bronze one. Forced into a reluctant alliance by Rose and her allies.
There can be songs. Some sung by Rose Tyler. Her actress sings.
Some classic music can play. Including some from Carnival of the Animals.
Prehistoric pachyderms including some from the Ice Age play a part. Allies summon by Rose. Maybe even some who speak by telepathy.
The War Master double crosses them. But Rose already knew. And reveals they sabotage his TARDIS.
The War Master defeats the 9th, 10th, and 11th Doctors. But falls to the War one.
The War Master and the War Doctor sword clash, similar to the 3rd Doctor and the UNIT Master onyl it's the Master using a Japanese katana versus the Doctor's Chinese dao. A nice reference to Chinese and Japanese fighting in World War 2. And the War Doctor wins. And spares him, whiel the toehr three try to slay him.
It turns out Davros and his Daleks were using Kade Stewart. And they reveal they use the Brig as a pawn. Daleks including a black one, black-dome Elite Guard, Special Weapons Daleks, some with blow torch claws, Scientists, and crimson-dome Recon Scouts.
Rassilon appears. The Timothy Dalton version. He tries to tempt the other three Doctors to kill the War one to save Gallifrey. But Rose reveals Rassilon's lies and reveals how Rassilon use them as pawns hence his real reason for the Genesis Incident and how he use the 7th.
Rose's humansie Dalek allies appear and clash with Davros's Daleks. The 1812 Overture can play when they and prehistoric animals including pachyderms turn the tide and win.
Rose shoots Rassilon to save the Doctors, hence the real reason for his regeneration into the one the 12th Doctor met. Karma for his sins.
Davros tries to slay Rose, only to be wounded by her humanised Dalek to save her...  hence why he was hurt in 'The Magician's Apprentice'. Karma for his crimes.
The 9th, 10th and 11th can be ashame they prove hypocrites while the War Doctor prove a better man.
Rose can be impress with Clara and praise her for her part. And form a psychic link.
We can see the Humano Dalek's home. And see some urn containing the ashes of Omega who fell and was cremaded (better than burial to prevent any graverobbers).
The Freedom Song from Planet of the Ood and Journey's End plays as Gallifrey is saved.
The War Doctor can be the one who says its reassuring to know the futrue is in safe hands isntead of the 10th one.
The Valem Decem plays for the War Doctor as he falls. He falls onto an army chair and dies then regenerades.
The 9th Doctor accepts he must regenerate. And the humansied Dalek sneaks Rose's DNA hinting her heart was which made the 10th Doctor.

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