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::The example given for other stories to follow is [[The Tenth Planet#Plot]], which has 1 to 5 paragraphs per 25-minute episode, for 14 paragraphs in total. This implies that a 45-minute episode should probably fit into 10 paragraphs, and certainly into 14--but yours is 43 paragraphs long. --[[User:Falcotron|Falcotron]] 13:44, June 9, 2010 (UTC) | ::The example given for other stories to follow is [[The Tenth Planet#Plot]], which has 1 to 5 paragraphs per 25-minute episode, for 14 paragraphs in total. This implies that a 45-minute episode should probably fit into 10 paragraphs, and certainly into 14--but yours is 43 paragraphs long. --[[User:Falcotron|Falcotron]] 13:44, June 9, 2010 (UTC) | ||
:::Well, I wrote it as best I could, especially for an episode which rely's heavily on the dialogue. And I don't see anywhere where I've quoted entire conversations. And given that the episode is a character/dialogue based episode and not a plot one, it's hard to write about it without explaining it in detail. If you can see any way to cut it down the please do so, but I can't see any way. As for the spelling mistakes, that's just human error. [[User:The Thirteenth Doctor|The Thirteenth Doctor]] 14:58, June 9, 2010 (UTC) | :::Well, I wrote it as best I could, especially for an episode which rely's heavily on the dialogue. And I don't see anywhere where I've quoted entire conversations. And given that the episode is a character/dialogue based episode and not a plot one, it's hard to write about it without explaining it in detail. If you can see any way to cut it down the please do so, but I can't see any way. As for the spelling mistakes, that's just human error. [[User:The Thirteenth Doctor|The Thirteenth Doctor]] 14:58, June 9, 2010 (UTC) | ||
:::It is way too long, it four times the size of stories where a lot happens. Anyone who hasn't seen the episode would assume its the fastest-paced most action packed episode of the season, you've gone a little over the top. There is far too much detail, and no-one will read it all.[[User:Baziel|Baziel]] 12:53, June 11, 2010 (UTC) | |||
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