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It seems to me that there is a missing clause here which covers the effect of the accident. It looks like he ceased to be a sentient ship, but would some one who knows what that clause should be please insert it? [[User:Boblipton|Boblipton]] 11:58, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
It seems to me that there is a missing clause here which covers the effect of the accident. It looks like he ceased to be a sentient ship, but would some one who knows what that clause should be please insert it? [[User:Boblipton|Boblipton]] 11:58, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
:It's been a while, but done. Fixed a few other bad wordings as well. I think it is good now though of course if anyone has better ideas... [[User:Derekbd|derekbd]] [[User talk:Derekbd|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 15:43, June 12, 2013 (UTC) (reading Where Angels Fear and the rest of the BennyNAs)

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The first sentence of the biiography reads

Clarence was previously a sentient ship known as !C-Mel, but due to an 'accident' which for much of his life he couldn't remember the specifics, but did know that it had involved the Doctor.


It seems to me that there is a missing clause here which covers the effect of the accident. It looks like he ceased to be a sentient ship, but would some one who knows what that clause should be please insert it? Boblipton 11:58, July 26, 2011 (UTC)

It's been a while, but done. Fixed a few other bad wordings as well. I think it is good now though of course if anyone has better ideas... derekbd 15:43, June 12, 2013 (UTC) (reading Where Angels Fear and the rest of the BennyNAs)