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'''Hari Sunil''' was from [[India]], who was looking for [[Hertford]], a Captain who had been bitten by a beast native to his land. He had take drastic actions to try and kill the beast before it did anymore harm, but was eaten alive. ([[JAL]]: [[The Bloodless Soldier (audio story)| The Bloodless Soldier]]) | '''Hari Sunil''' was a man from [[India]], who was looking for [[Hertford]], a Captain who had been bitten by a beast native to his land. He had to take drastic actions to try and kill the beast before it did anymore harm, but was eaten alive. ([[JAL]]: [[The Bloodless Soldier (audio story)| The Bloodless Soldier]]) | ||
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Hari Sunil was a man from India, who was looking for Hertford, a Captain who had been bitten by a beast native to his land. He had to take drastic actions to try and kill the beast before it did anymore harm, but was eaten alive. (JAL: The Bloodless Soldier)
