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Elsewhere, Max and the Doctor are running away from Lynch and his workmen, when they fall down a trapdoor, and land at the bottom. There they find some decayed corpses, which Max identifies as members of the SPS. The Doctor and Max try to escape, but are cornered by Lynch and his workmen. | Elsewhere, Max and the Doctor are running away from Lynch and his workmen, when they fall down a trapdoor, and land at the bottom. There they find some decayed corpses, which Max identifies as members of the SPS. The Doctor and Max try to escape, but are cornered by Lynch and his workmen. | ||
Back in the offices, Majenta has been held at gunpoint by He and his | Back in the offices, Majenta has been held at gunpoint by [[He]] and his wife [[She]]. Majenta points out to them that their accounting is of a terrible standard, listing all the errors in their work, such as lack of projections for fourth quarter growth. He explains that this is because the Earth will never have a fourth quarter, and shoots Majenta. | ||
Elsewhere, Lynch introduces his workmen as creatures called [[Wyrrmen]]. These Wyrrmen suddenly mutate into fearsome monsters, and surround the Doctor and Max. The Wyrrmen fire bright yellow beams at Max, who transforms into a glowing, white-eyed entity, who silences the Doctor, telling Lynch to "Tell mother and father... I live!" | Elsewhere, Lynch introduces his workmen as creatures called [[Wyrrmen]]. These Wyrrmen suddenly mutate into fearsome monsters, and surround the Doctor and Max. The Wyrrmen fire bright yellow beams at Max, who transforms into a glowing, white-eyed entity, who silences the Doctor, telling Lynch to "Tell mother and father... I live!" | ||
===Part 2 (The Mind of Max Edison)=== | ===Part 2 (The Mind of Max Edison)=== | ||
In the offices of Khrysalis construction, He is checking to make sure that Majenta is dead. Suddenly, she opens her eyes. She expains that the clipboard she was holding onto was made of Plasticrete, which is harder than steel. She then whacks He with the clipboard, causing him to fall over. But just as she is trying to excape, The Lokhus appears hovering in the air. | |||
She and He talk to him, and it is revealed that they are Lokhus' parents. The Lokhus then kills his parents, before asking Lynch who Majenta is. Majenta greets him enthusiastically, and tells him she proposes a partnership with him, and she will get him off this planet. | |||
The Doctor has been tied to a pole, and the Wyrrmen are taking him through the cave system. Suddenly, they stop, and they ask him if he wants to become a part of The Lokhus, pointing at a large chrysalis. They break the ropes holding The Doctor to the pole, and the Doctor runs to the chrysalis, where he can hear Max's voice. Touching it, he suddenly finds himself elsewhere. He is withe Max, who is just on the ground, grunting. The Doctor slaps him, bringing him out of it, and asks him what's going on. | |||
Meanwhile, in the village, Mrs. Porter and Mrs. Wilkes are getting excited, because Mr. Lokhus is coming. They begin fighting over who will give him their food. Suddenly, the Lokhus is there, and the villagers begi admiring him. Majenta asks Lynch what's going on, and he explains that the Lokhus emits a phsycic pulse which makes people want to mother him. The Lokhus sits in a throne, and asks for food. Majenta wonders if he's just gonna sit there eating, but Lynch tells her that The Lokhus has got big plans for Earth... | |||
Max tells the Doctor that the Lokhus is from the [[After-Universe]], and is a member of the race known as the Zytrgupten. Lokhus was born crippled, and was thrown into the infernal abyss. But something went wrong, and he was drawn into our universe. He fell on Stockbridge, and built himself a chrysalis to keep himself protected. But his parents followed him, and they've found him. Max then tells him that they have to stop Lokhus from getting out of the chrysalis, otherwise he'll destroy the world. Then, the Lokhus reveals his presence. | |||
Majenta brings Lokhus to the TARDIS, but tells him that only the pilot can get through the doors, as a safety precaution. Lokhus tortures her, but suddenly, he finds that Max is pshycically blocking him from killing Majenta. | |||
Inside the chrysalis, the Doctor is making fun of the Lokhus, but the massive creature shuts him up, and begins talking to Max. He explains that Max is holding him back, and as a 3-dimensional mind, shouldn't be able to do that. Lokhus scans Max's mind, and looks through his past, seeing that Max occasionally gets glimpses of the future, and the butcher bullied him when he told him what he knew. | |||
Lokhus, in Max's body, picks up the butcher, and asks Max if he wants him to kill the butcher. The Doctor tells him that Lokhus is twisted and bitter, but the creature slaps him away, and blocks him from the chrysalis. Max tells The Doctor to find his body, and stop the Lokhus. He holds off the Wyrrmen, and the Doctor takes his motorbike back to the town square, where Majenta has been tied to a pole. The villagers threaten him, and Lokhus tells them to kill him... | |||
===Part 3 (Day of the Lokhus)=== | ===Part 3 (Day of the Lokhus)=== | ||