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 As Rose falls through the Vortex, the Doctor tries to materialise the TARDIS around her, but only her jacket appears within. Meanwhile, Rose wakes up next to a squid-like alien. The Doctor refuses to believe she is dead, and uses the TARDIS to track the DNA from her jacket. However, the coordinates it finds would place her in the blast radius of a nascent [[supernova]] [[Beart-54]] in the [[Beart system]]. Jack materialises the TARDIS on a nearby planetoid, [[Fluren's World]]. They find the sun's nova is being held back by a [[time bubble]], technology that hasn't existed since the [[Last Great Time War|Time War]].
-Jack takes the Doctor to the [[Fluren Temporal Bazaar]], a [[black market]] for time weapons. There, they find Rose, who has been stuck there for four days. She fell through the Vortex, and the tachyon inhibitor protected her from the [[time wind]]s. [[Glom]], the squid alien, picked her up with his ship's [[Time scoop|time scoops]]. The Doctor recognises one of Glom's weapons, and realises they're all from [[Gallifrey]]. He flips Glom's table in anger, and steps up to make an announcement. He's offering his [[Time Lord]] mind for sale, in an attempt to attract the Unon. Instead, the Lect appear.
+Jack takes the Doctor to the [[Fluren Temporal Bazaar]], a [[black market]] for time weapons. There, they find Rose, who has been stuck there for four days. She fell through the Vortex, and the tachyon inhibitor protected her from the [[time wind]]s. [[Glom]], the squid alien, picked her up with his ship's [[time scoop]]s. The Doctor recognises one of Glom's weapons, and realises they're all from [[Gallifrey]]. He flips Glom's table in anger, and steps up to make an announcement. He's offering his [[Time Lord]] mind for sale, in an attempt to attract the Unon. Instead, the Lect appear.
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 In the Vortex, desperate Jack is trying to half threaten half reason with the TARDIS. Suddenly, the Doctor's face appears on one of the screens. The Doctor explains that the Unon are bringing the TARDIS to him. The TARDIS materialises in the [[Perpetual City]], which is anchored within the Vortex itself. Jack warily steps out, gun in his hand, and receives another reprimand from the Doctor, until the latter realises that Rose is not with Jack. Arnora is pessimistic about Rose's fate, Jack tries to stay optimistic while simultaneously flirting with the mother superior, and the Doctor heads for the TARDIS to save Rose no matter what, when [[Evja]], the Grand High Seer of the Unon, who has no ordinary sight but can see through time and space, explains that Rose is not on Fluren's World any longer. She is in a forbidden sector of time. The Doctor is unimpressed but another Unon, [[Borga]], blocks his way to the TARDIS. She insists that the Doctor must remain and do the will of the mother superior, accusing him of the atrocities of the Time War. The Doctor intends to have none of this. Only the intervention of Arnora prevents further escalation.
-She explains that before the Time War the Unon were explorers, scientists. The war destroyed their civilisation and nearly destroyed theme  species itself. But it was the aftermath of the war that was more important. The demise of both Time Lords and [[Dalek]]s created a vacuum of power that many races wanted to fill, races like [[Cyberman|Cybermen]] and [[Sontaran]]s. The Unon seers saw what was coming, so the Unon decided to prevent further chaos. They collected the detritus left over from the Time War and turned it into tools for peace, including the Perpetual City they are in. The Unon have no ambition to control time, but they prevent others from doing so.
+She explains that before the Time War the Unon were explorers, scientists. The war destroyed their civilisation and nearly destroyed theme species itself. But it was the aftermath of the war that was more important. The demise of both Time Lords and [[Dalek]]s created a vacuum of power that many races wanted to fill, races like [[Cyberman|Cybermen]] and [[Sontaran]]s. The Unon seers saw what was coming, so the Unon decided to prevent further chaos. They collected the detritus left over from the Time War and turned it into tools for peace, including the Perpetual City they are in. The Unon have no ambition to control time, but they prevent others from doing so.
 The Doctor asks if the Lect are one of those trying to cease control and learns that Borga despises them. Arnora intercedes once again before the tempers could flare. She saw in his mind the sacrifice the Doctor made for the good of the universe. She knows he's a good man. She proposes an alliance.
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 In the void, Evja explains why she thinks the Doctor is dangerous. She sees destruction following him wherever he goes.Jack asks Evja to look now at the future without the Doctor, with only the Unon in charge.
-As an Unon sneaks behind the Doctor to deal a fatal blow, he is preempted by Evja, who is carrying Jack on her back. She implores Arnora to listen to the Doctor because she saw their own future. Arnora disagrees. But Marleth, in a last effort before his death, manages to kill Arnora and is immediately killed by the Unon. The Doctor says that it is already too late and there is no way to disperse the energy in time. Evja is  ready to accept her fate and resigns to disappear along with the Perpetual City.
+As an Unon sneaks behind the Doctor to deal a fatal blow, he is preempted by Evja, who is carrying Jack on her back. She implores Arnora to listen to the Doctor because she saw their own future. Arnora disagrees. But Marleth, in a last effort before his death, manages to kill Arnora and is immediately killed by the Unon. The Doctor says that it is already too late and there is no way to disperse the energy in time. Evja is ready to accept her fate and resigns to disappear along with the Perpetual City.
 Fortunately, the Doctor manages to save her and some of the Unon by escaping in the TARDIS. He brings them to a planet off the beaten track, with no technology and makes Evja promise to leave the universe to look after itself.
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 * Captain Jack jokingly calls the Doctor "[[Spock]]", referring to the character from ''[[Star Trek]]''. The actor who played him, Leonard Nimoy, passed away a couple months before the release of the comic mini-series.
 * Rose calls Glom "[[Squidward]]", a reference to {{w|Spongebob Squarepants}}.
 * The Doctor compares Jack to [[James Bond]] by mentioning two actors who played him: Sean Connery and Roger Moore.
 * Jack criticises how the Doctor negotiates with the [[Excrothian|Lect]] by saying: "Hardly the way to make friends or influence people." This is a reference to the book {{wi|How to Win Friends and Influence People}}.
 * Rose calls armed security "stormtroopers", a reference to [[Star Wars]].
 * "Colonel Sanders's secret ingredient" is a reference to the founder of KFC.
 * "Champion the Wonder Horse" is a reference to a horse character from film and movies.
 * Rose says that a tracker was needed to beam the Doctor up. The phrase "beam you up" is a reference to ''[[Star Trek]]''.
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