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Haven't actually made a talk page before, so apologies for any mistakes I make in writing this. Anyway, I've noticed the novel The Doomsday Manuscript contains some information in the first couple pages that the article is missing and I think could be worth adding: | Haven't actually made a talk page before, so apologies for any mistakes I make in writing this. Anyway, I've noticed the novel The Doomsday Manuscript contains some information in the first couple pages that the article is missing and I think could be worth adding: | ||
First, there are some details about the planetoid itself which the book mentions which might be relevant but I'm not sure: | First, there are some details about the planetoid itself which the book mentions which might be relevant but I'm not sure: | ||
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- It also has a day/night circle the same as Earth | - It also has a day/night circle the same as Earth | ||
Secondly, the page has some buildings, areas and features which aren't mentioned: | Secondly, the page has some buildings, areas and features which aren't mentioned: | ||
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- The Hamlet is a small village of accomodations, which is 3 miles NE of the mansionhouse. It has: | - The Hamlet is a small village of accomodations, which is 3 miles NE of the mansionhouse. It has: | ||
• Two story thatched cottages for overnight stays (one of which, the mill, has an ornamental waterwheel)" | • Two story thatched cottages for overnight stays (one of which, the mill, has an ornamental waterwheel)" | ||
• The caretaker's cottage (a bar) | • The caretaker's cottage (a bar) | ||
• The dairy (a restaurant) | • The dairy (a restaurant) | ||
- The great trianon lake, which the Hamlet is on the banks of | - The great trianon lake, which the Hamlet is on the banks of | ||
There are some other details which may be worth mentioning such as: | There are some other details which may be worth mentioning such as: | ||
- All visitors use plasti-discs, which are keyed to their bio-emissions and automatically open any doors they have permission to enter. | - All visitors use plasti-discs, which are keyed to their bio-emissions and automatically open any doors they have permission to enter. | ||
- As well as walking, people can get around with Ormand-Seltec flyers or Horses and Carriages. | - As well as walking, people can get around with Ormand-Seltec flyers or Horses and Carriages. | ||
That's what I've found so far - I haven't a clue what is relevant and what isn't, and I don't know how to properly edit articles, but if anyone would like to add any of this information to the page, I'd be glad to have been of help. | That's what I've found so far - I haven't a clue what is relevant and what isn't, and I don't know how to properly edit articles, but if anyone would like to add any of this information to the page, I'd be glad to have been of help. | ||
Revision as of 21:56, 11 March 2019
Haven't actually made a talk page before, so apologies for any mistakes I make in writing this. Anyway, I've noticed the novel The Doomsday Manuscript contains some information in the first couple pages that the article is missing and I think could be worth adding:
First, there are some details about the planetoid itself which the book mentions which might be relevant but I'm not sure:
- It has a circumference of about 10 miles (which, according to my calculations, means it has a surface area of about 82.44 km², and walking around it once would take 150 minutes at a brisk pace)
- It's got a gravity equal to that of earth's (1.0 Earth Normal (EN))
- It was also terraformed before the Collection was built
- It also has a day/night circle the same as Earth
Secondly, the page has some buildings, areas and features which aren't mentioned:
- The Garden of Whispers has a summer house
- There are two trianons:
• The Great Trianon, which is equidistant to the Mansionhouse to the north and south
• The Small Trianon, which is off-limits to all visitors
- There are the great stables and the small stables (still under construction during the events of the Doomsday Manuscript)
- The Hamlet is a small village of accomodations, which is 3 miles NE of the mansionhouse. It has:
• Two story thatched cottages for overnight stays (one of which, the mill, has an ornamental waterwheel)"
• The caretaker's cottage (a bar)
• The dairy (a restaurant)
- The great trianon lake, which the Hamlet is on the banks of
There are some other details which may be worth mentioning such as:
- All visitors use plasti-discs, which are keyed to their bio-emissions and automatically open any doors they have permission to enter.
- As well as walking, people can get around with Ormand-Seltec flyers or Horses and Carriages.
That's what I've found so far - I haven't a clue what is relevant and what isn't, and I don't know how to properly edit articles, but if anyone would like to add any of this information to the page, I'd be glad to have been of help.
