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 == Plot ==
 === Part one ===
-At an [[auction]] in the small British village of [[Hexford]], the [[Fifth Doctor]] and [[Annie (And You Will Obey Me)|a young woman in green]] both bid furiously on [[The Master's TARDIS|an ordinary grandfather clock]], as does a chavvy young man called [[Colin (And You Will Obey Me)|Colin]] — only for all of them to lose the thing to a mysterious phone bidder. After the auction wraps up, the Doctor and Annie exchange wary introductions while Colin catches up with his associate [[Helen (And You Will Obey Me)|Helen]]. As she questions the Doctor about his interest in the clock, Annie is finally told the truth: that the Doctor believes the clock to be the [[Space-time vessel|time machine]] of his old friend and fellow [[alien]], [[the Master]].
+At an [[auction]] in the small British village of [[Hexford]], the [[Fifth Doctor]] and [[Annie (And You Will Obey Me)|a young woman in green]] both bid furiously on [[Goth's TARDIS|an ordinary grandfather clock]], as does a chavvy young man called [[Colin (And You Will Obey Me)|Colin]] — only for all of them to lose the thing to a mysterious phone bidder. After the auction wraps up, the Doctor and Annie exchange wary introductions while Colin catches up with his associate [[Helen (And You Will Obey Me)|Helen]]. As she questions the Doctor about his interest in the clock, Annie is finally told the truth: that the Doctor believes the clock to be the [[Space-time vessel|time machine]] of his old friend and fellow [[alien]], [[the Master]].
 The Doctor, meanwhile, learns from Annie that the clock is the only object to have survived a fire that destroyed the derelict cottage of one "Michael Masterson", who the Doctor correctly guesses was "a recluse with a hideously deformed face" — none other than the Master in his {{Pratt|n= decayed form}}. She talks her into visiting the ruins of the cottage, where they find Michael Masterson's grave. The Doctor begins to dig it up, intent on checking that the body within is indeed that of the Master and not a decoy. He finds the earth disturbed and the coffin empty, and guesses that the Master must have [[regeneration|regenerated]] after burial and crawled out of his grave. As this is going on, the two are being observed by a pair of [[Dragonhunter|alien beings]], [[Jade Nymph|a young female one]] and her superior [[Gomphus|the Dragonmaster]].
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 The Doctor discourages the Dragonhunters from liquefying the unconscious Grigor's brain for information by showing them the Master's [[TARDIS key]] and telling them he will help take them to the Master's TARDIS so long as they refrain from killing. Though mistrustful of [[Time Lord]]s, and not yet convinced that the Doctor and Annie are not [[bounty hunter]]s seeking the Master for self-serving reasons, the giant alien dragonflies accept the bargain. The Dragonhunters abruptly pick up the Doctor and all three fly off. Left on solid ground, Annie tells [[Colin (And You Will Obey Me)|Colin]] and [[Helen (And You Will Obey Me)|Helen]], whom the Doctor also convinced the Dragonhunters to leave alone, to come out of hiding. She voices her intention to wake up and interrogate Grigor. As he wakes up, Grigor can only repeat the word "strekozy" ("[[dragonfly]]" in [[Russian language|Russian]]) over and over; Helen suggests to Annie that Colin tie him to a chair.
-Meanwhile, the Doctor has succeeded in convincing the Dragonhunters to land near [[the Doctor's TARDIS|his TARDIS]] instead of continuing the journey through flight. He invites them in and explain to them that he is using the [[telepathic circuits]] to home in on [[the Master's TARDIS]] on the basis of the key. However, the [[short-wave transmission]]s, [[long-wave transmission]]s, [[frequency modulated transmission]]s and [[microwave transmission]]s at "ground level" drown out the signal, forcing the Doctor to take the TARDIS up vertically "a few thousand feet up" in the hope of being able to home in on the "whisper" of the other TARDIS.
+Meanwhile, the Doctor has succeeded in convincing the Dragonhunters to land near [[the Doctor's TARDIS|his TARDIS]] instead of continuing the journey through flight. He invites them in and explain to them that he is using the [[telepathic circuits]] to home in on [[Goth's TARDIS|the Master's TARDIS]] on the basis of the key. However, the [[short-wave transmission]]s, [[long-wave transmission]]s, [[frequency modulated transmission]]s and [[microwave transmission]]s at "ground level" drown out the signal, forcing the Doctor to take the TARDIS up vertically "a few thousand feet up" in the hope of being able to home in on the "whisper" of the other TARDIS.
 Meanwhile, the interrogation of Grigor is interrupted by the [[Auctioneer (And You Will Obey Me)|Auctioneer]], objecting to the use of his auction house as a "torture chamber", just as Grigor is starting to wake up, but Annie uses the staser-gun to stun the auctioneer so they can continue in peace. Grigor jeers that "interfering" English civilians won't dare to hurt him, and vows to tell them nothing — prompting Annie to reveal both to him and to Helen and Colin that she's actually part of [[MI5]]. Frightened, Grigor gives her the GPS coordinates of the abode of the "mistress". The three rush out, but Annie goes back in, claiming to have forgotten her handbag, just long enough to shoot Grigor with the staser again (despite her reassurance to him that she wasn't going to). On the way there, Annie, Helen and Colin exchange data about the Master.
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 === Part three ===
-''to be added''
+The Doctor gets Mikey to recount the story how it all started, prompting a flashback. After getting off the bus, the four teenagers — [[Colin (And You Will Obey Me)|Colin]], [[Helen (And You Will Obey Me)|Helen]], and [[Janine (And You Will Obey Me)|Janine]] and [[Michael Masterson|Mikey]] themselves — bicker about whether Mikey knows the way back as he claimed. Before things can get too far, however, they see [[Goth's TARDIS|the Master's TARDIS]] plummeting to the ground, causing tremors as though a bomb just dropped.
+Making their way to the flaming barn into which the timeship crashed, they hesitate with coming closer until the Master emerges from the "capsule", asking for help. He grouches and complains as they help him up, however, and threatens them with a [[staser gun]] when they try to call for medical assistance. After they recant, he tells them that his facial disfiguration is nothing new, and that what ails him as the result of his crash is trauma to his genetic structure. Not realising when and where he is, he asks for directions to a genetic therapy clinic; when Janine tries to have a joke at his expense, he drops any pretense of affability and demonstrates his hypnotic control over her, spooking the others into obedience. He then reads Mike's mind to see his greatest desire (that his wounded brother be healed) and promises it to him in exchange for total submission to his will. He soon repeats the same offer to the other three.
+Mikey and Janine go on to chronicle how the Master transferred parts of his essence and thus hypnotic powers to them, so that they could "steal" various electronic components on his behalf by simply walking into shops and demanding to be given them. The Doctor notes that it only makes sense that he would have "infected" those close to him with parts of his being, if his "[[biodata|genetic structure]]" had been damaged.
+Still in Mike's telling, the Master grows increasingly desperate over weeks living in the Hexford house, with the machine he is putting together not working properly and his unstable form "dissipating day by day". Mike helps him somewhat by using anti-burn cream to help his charred skin heal a little, confessing that his own brother sustained heavy burns from his experience in war. Mike comes to see the Master as an adopted father, to the Master's mild bemusement. Eventually, the Master learns that there is a nuclear-armed air base close by.
+While Mike is telling the story, the present-day [[Colin (And You Will Obey Me)|Colin]] and [[Helen (And You Will Obey Me)|Helen]] make their way to the old air base in question, even as Mike's story reveals how, back in the day, they used their hypnotic powers to sneak into it and steal a [[uranium]] core. After they hypnotised one soldier to drive them out, the Master demanded that Michael shoot him with his staser, so that he would go missing and the authorities would blame him for the theft. Mike suggests that the shock of seeing the dying man's face shocked him out of his hypnosis-aided faith in the Master, "breaking the spell".
+He tried to tell the one person he trusted, his favourite teacher, about the Master. However, when he visited her house, she was away, and he saw none other than the [[Fifth Doctor]] himself. Not daring to tell him anything, he claimed that he wanted to see Miss Hampden about his exams and was on his way, meekly returning to the meeting point of the Master and his other "children", who are still completely under his hypnotic control. His story sees the Master reveal that he directed his crashing TARDIS to 1984V Hexford in the first place looking for the Doctor, wanting to use him as a "donor" to repair his own failing body, but was unable to locate him after the crash (since he'd, unbeknownst to the Master, left for [[2016]]), forcing him to "improvise" by letting some of his nucleii take root inside the children, who served as "incubators". The machine he has built is meant to extract them (killing the children in the process) and transplant them into him, restoring him to health.
+However, while the nuclei are flowing into him, the Master is invulnerable, but immobilised. Resisting his control, Mike uses his father's old gun to shoot the machine, causing the machine to explode. The Master then finally dissipated into nothingness. The Doctor and Mike's conversation fills in the gaps of what happened thereafter: having kept the Master's TARDIS, it was Michael who put it up for auction as bait when he suspected that the Master had returned and killed his brother. Janine, Colin and Helen, still looking sixteen because the [[Time Lord]] nuclei in their system kept them young, are also trying to lay a trap for the Master, as they believe he is returning to life due to having had increasingly frequent visions of him in the past few years.
+However, the Doctor points out that something still doesn't make sense: if the Master killed Mikey's brother, why did he not take back his TARDIS right there and then? Just as alarms begin blaring, signaling that Janine's house's protections have been breached, the Doctor, Michael and Janine realise that it was the Master who was really using the clock as a lure — for ''them'', to draw his "children" together again.
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 * Mikey compares the Master to ''[[E.T. the Extra-Terrestrial]]''.
 === Technology ===
-* [[The Master's TARDIS]] must repair herself with the [[internal reconfiguration system]].
+* [[Goth's TARDIS|The Master's TARDIS]] must repair herself with the [[internal reconfiguration system]].
 * The "children of the Master" absorb his [[Symbiotic nucleus|symbiotic nuclei]].
 == Notes ==
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 * The Master has several [[staser]]s in his TARDIS. ([[TV]]: ''[[The Deadly Assassin (TV story)|The Deadly Assassin]]'')
 * [[Jane Hampden]] was Mikey's third year teacher at Little Hodcombe Primary School. ([[TV]]: ''[[The Awakening (TV story)|The Awakening]]'')
+* The Master's "[[biodata|genetic structure]]" having been destabilised results in his essence warping those around him. ([[PROSE]]: ''[[Unnatural History (novel)|Unnatural History]]'')
 * Although the Doctor describes [[fledershrew]]s as a common TARDIS pest, he would later allow an entire colony of them to live in his TARDIS during his [[Seventh Doctor|seventh]] and [[eighth incarnation]]s. ([[AUDIO]]: ''[[Black and White (audio story)|Black and White]]'', ''[[Nevermore (audio story)|Nevermore]]'', ''[[Relative Dimensions (audio story)|Relative Dimensions]]'', ''[[Day of the Vashta Nerada (audio story)|Day of the Vashta Nerada]]'')
 * The Doctor believes that he knows how {{Pratt|n=this incarnation of the Master}} will meet his end. ([[TV]]: ''[[The Keeper of Traken (TV story)|The Keeper of Traken]]'')