Talk:Jenny Says: Drink Gevity™! (comic story): Difference between revisions

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This page is fairly well-made, although I'd say a few things would improve it - mainly, an [https://weirdtalesfeaturingjenny.thecomicseries.com/comics/15 external link to the comic itself], to allow readers to look through it and possibly write about it themselves. ...For [[T:WIKIFY OWN|obvious reasons]], I can't do this myself, but I believe I'm allowed to suggest changes to the page. [[User:Cookieboy 2005|Cookieboy 2005]] [[User talk:Cookieboy 2005|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 12:21, 3 April 2024 (UTC)
This page is fairly well-made, although I'd say a few things would improve it - mainly, an [https://weirdtalesfeaturingjenny.thecomicseries.com/comics/15 external link to the comic itself], to allow readers to look through it and possibly write about it themselves. ...For [[T:WIKIFY OWN|obvious reasons]], I can't do this myself, but I believe I'm allowed to suggest changes to the page. [[User:Cookieboy 2005|Cookieboy 2005]] [[User talk:Cookieboy 2005|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 12:21, 3 April 2024 (UTC)
: (I guess it wouldn't be harmful to list stuff that can be improved, as long as the creator knows I ''do'' appreciate their work: some images would be good, a rewrite of the summary as it's currently written like part of a Jenny's biography, finished worldbuilding and continuity sections (the latter probably warrants a few [[NOTCOVERED]] redirects (see [[Auteur's Abecedarium (short story)]] for an example of this usage in action), and a few other things, like linking to character's full names and, as stated above, adding an external link. (Obviously if anyone wants to just do one or two of these, that's fine) [[User:Cookieboy 2005|Cookieboy 2005]] [[User talk:Cookieboy 2005|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 12:30, 3 April 2024 (UTC)

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Update

This page is fairly well-made, although I'd say a few things would improve it - mainly, an external link to the comic itself, to allow readers to look through it and possibly write about it themselves. ...For obvious reasons, I can't do this myself, but I believe I'm allowed to suggest changes to the page. Cookieboy 2005 12:21, 3 April 2024 (UTC)

(I guess it wouldn't be harmful to list stuff that can be improved, as long as the creator knows I do appreciate their work: some images would be good, a rewrite of the summary as it's currently written like part of a Jenny's biography, finished worldbuilding and continuity sections (the latter probably warrants a few NOTCOVERED redirects (see Auteur's Abecedarium (short story) for an example of this usage in action), and a few other things, like linking to character's full names and, as stated above, adding an external link. (Obviously if anyone wants to just do one or two of these, that's fine) Cookieboy 2005 12:30, 3 April 2024 (UTC)