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Out of the corner of his eye, the Doctor saw the spider behind them and pulls Louie to the ground as it jumps over them. He tells Louie to do exactly what he says, and then clears a path by emitting a high-pitched sound from his [[sonic screwdriver]] which causes them to cower back. Free from the spiders, Louie wishes to see the man they had seen earlier. As they walk over to that spot, they fail to see a pair of glowing red eyes watching them. Louie sees that the man is no longer sitting on the box and rushes to open it, against the Doctor's warnings. He finds some kind of machinery inside. Behind them, the man pushes up in a wooden wheelchair. The creature that possesses him talks to the Doctor, revealing that he murdered Justin and is reanimating his corpse. Louie then catches the red eyes and notifies the Doctor. They see a crystal skull around the eyes, and the eyes shoot red beams at them, which they duck from. Louie then realizes that the skull throbs with the beat of his heart. The creature is feeding off of fear. After Louie calms down and slows his heart rate, the skull sends another burst of energy, which Louie deflects with the machinery. The skull shattered to the floor but the explosion had caused a fire, and the Doctor and Louie managed to escape, but the alien was engulfed by the flames. The warehouse explodes, and the Doctor decides to take Louie home. | Out of the corner of his eye, the Doctor saw the spider behind them and pulls Louie to the ground as it jumps over them. He tells Louie to do exactly what he says, and then clears a path by emitting a high-pitched sound from his [[sonic screwdriver]] which causes them to cower back. Free from the spiders, Louie wishes to see the man they had seen earlier. As they walk over to that spot, they fail to see a pair of glowing red eyes watching them. Louie sees that the man is no longer sitting on the box and rushes to open it, against the Doctor's warnings. He finds some kind of machinery inside. Behind them, the man pushes up in a wooden wheelchair. The creature that possesses him talks to the Doctor, revealing that he murdered Justin and is reanimating his corpse. Louie then catches the red eyes and notifies the Doctor. They see a crystal skull around the eyes, and the eyes shoot red beams at them, which they duck from. Louie then realizes that the skull throbs with the beat of his heart. The creature is feeding off of fear. After Louie calms down and slows his heart rate, the skull sends another burst of energy, which Louie deflects with the machinery. The skull shattered to the floor but the explosion had caused a fire, and the Doctor and Louie managed to escape, but the alien was engulfed by the flames. The warehouse explodes, and the Doctor decides to take Louie home. | ||
Louie's mother had already met the Doctor earlier in the week. Outside at a | Louie's mother had already met the Doctor earlier in the week. Outside at a [[Bonfire Night]], the Doctor, Louie, and Millie witniss a effigy of [[Guy Fawkes]], as well as several others, come to life and advance towards the crowd. | ||
===Part Three=== | ===Part Three=== | ||
'' | The Doctor, Louie, and Millie run to the edge of the park. The Doctor rushes to [[The Doctor's TARDIS|his TARDIS]], which was next to some trees, unlocks it, and ushers the cousins into the TARDIS. The Doctor, needing to know how widespread the problem is, tunes into a news report on the [[TARDIS scanner|TARDIS's scanner]]. The reporter says that Guy Fawkes dummies around the [[United Kingdom]] had been "seemingly coming alive", and that the [[Prime Minister of the United Kingdom|Prime Minister]] was expected to make a statement. After unplugging a small device from the console, the Doctor lands the TARDIS opposite the burned warehouse, relizing that he as been stupid all along and the alien had not died; it had only meant for them to believe so. As they look closer at the warehouse, they are able to see through the [[perception filter]] to find that the warehouse is not damaged at all. Louie and Millie refuse to take refuge in the TARDIS, saying that the Doctor will need them if things become dangerous. They enter the warehouse which holds a spherical craft and meet the rejuvinated alien disguised as a healthy Justin. He is using fear to power his ship and its fusion engines, which if activated will atomize everything within a 20-mile radius. The Doctor gives the alien a chance, but it knocks his sonic screwdriver out of the way and jolts him with electricity. Louie dives at the alien's equipment with the Doctor's device and the figure begins to rapidly age and withers away. As Louie leads Millie into the TARDIS, the Doctor destroys the machinery. He tells Louie and Millie that the Guy Fawkes will not be animated due to the death of their animator, and the trio decide to return home to enjoy [[toffee apples]]. | ||
== Characters == | == Characters == | ||
Revision as of 01:54, 24 September 2011
The Night After Hallowe'en was a special short story written by Mark B. Oliver for Hallowe'en 2010.
Summary
What happens to all the monster masks, scary spiders, broomsticks and plastic skeletons that don't get sold before October 31st? The Doctor is about to find out as he faces a nightmarish threat to humanity.
Plot
Prologue
A young man named Justin is hiking alone and is lost on the cold night. He is able to see his way in the forest by the bright moonlight. He should have been back home several hours previously, but he had wandered off the trail and has had trouble getting out of the trees. He cannot see his compass well enough to use it. Suddenly, the wind picks up, but Justin realizes it is not wind--it is a dark object flying above the trees, about to crash. As it heads to crash, Justin runs ahead to see if the piolet and passengers will need help. He reaches the clearing where it landed, but he does not see any wreckage and does not hear anything. As he sits by a lake and calls his mother on his mobile phone, a bony hand reaches out from the water and grabs his ankle, dragging him into the lake. Hearing this on the other end of the phone, his mother believes it to be a Hallowe'en prank.
Part One
Best friends and cousins Louie Rollins and Millie Peterson are leaving school, laughing and talking about the Hallowe'en party the night before. While riding his bike home from school, Louie's tyre becomes flat. He enters a warehouse whose door is ajar to see if anyone has a phone to call his mother, but no one is there. All that is in the warehouse is a lot of Hallowe'en paraphernalia made out of authentic materials. He hears a scuffling noise, which then repeats itself, closer. He sees a man crouched on a box and asks him for help, but the man does not acknowledge him. He moves closer and is startled to find that the man has peeling gray skin and blank eyes. Louie is then tapped on the shoulder by the Doctor, who motions for him to be quiet and follow him. When the two are at a safe distance from the man, the Doctor introduces himself to Louie and reveals he came to help Louie and "mankind in general". He gives Louie a mobile phone he had because Amy insisted that he keep in touch while she was on her honeymoon with Rory, and Louie calls his mother. As the Doctor attempts to walk Louie out of the warehouse to bring him home, the grandfather clock began to tick loudly and the door began to shut itself. The Doctor and Louie did not make it out the door in time. The Doctor tells Louie that the man they saw had been dead for a few days and being animated like a puppet. Louie then feels something run over his foot and they discover that the warehouse is invested with large spiders, which Louie had previously thought to be just toys. One of the spiders had climbed the wall behind them and now bared its fangs and jumped...
Part Two
Out of the corner of his eye, the Doctor saw the spider behind them and pulls Louie to the ground as it jumps over them. He tells Louie to do exactly what he says, and then clears a path by emitting a high-pitched sound from his sonic screwdriver which causes them to cower back. Free from the spiders, Louie wishes to see the man they had seen earlier. As they walk over to that spot, they fail to see a pair of glowing red eyes watching them. Louie sees that the man is no longer sitting on the box and rushes to open it, against the Doctor's warnings. He finds some kind of machinery inside. Behind them, the man pushes up in a wooden wheelchair. The creature that possesses him talks to the Doctor, revealing that he murdered Justin and is reanimating his corpse. Louie then catches the red eyes and notifies the Doctor. They see a crystal skull around the eyes, and the eyes shoot red beams at them, which they duck from. Louie then realizes that the skull throbs with the beat of his heart. The creature is feeding off of fear. After Louie calms down and slows his heart rate, the skull sends another burst of energy, which Louie deflects with the machinery. The skull shattered to the floor but the explosion had caused a fire, and the Doctor and Louie managed to escape, but the alien was engulfed by the flames. The warehouse explodes, and the Doctor decides to take Louie home.
Louie's mother had already met the Doctor earlier in the week. Outside at a Bonfire Night, the Doctor, Louie, and Millie witniss a effigy of Guy Fawkes, as well as several others, come to life and advance towards the crowd.
Part Three
The Doctor, Louie, and Millie run to the edge of the park. The Doctor rushes to his TARDIS, which was next to some trees, unlocks it, and ushers the cousins into the TARDIS. The Doctor, needing to know how widespread the problem is, tunes into a news report on the TARDIS's scanner. The reporter says that Guy Fawkes dummies around the United Kingdom had been "seemingly coming alive", and that the Prime Minister was expected to make a statement. After unplugging a small device from the console, the Doctor lands the TARDIS opposite the burned warehouse, relizing that he as been stupid all along and the alien had not died; it had only meant for them to believe so. As they look closer at the warehouse, they are able to see through the perception filter to find that the warehouse is not damaged at all. Louie and Millie refuse to take refuge in the TARDIS, saying that the Doctor will need them if things become dangerous. They enter the warehouse which holds a spherical craft and meet the rejuvinated alien disguised as a healthy Justin. He is using fear to power his ship and its fusion engines, which if activated will atomize everything within a 20-mile radius. The Doctor gives the alien a chance, but it knocks his sonic screwdriver out of the way and jolts him with electricity. Louie dives at the alien's equipment with the Doctor's device and the figure begins to rapidly age and withers away. As Louie leads Millie into the TARDIS, the Doctor destroys the machinery. He tells Louie and Millie that the Guy Fawkes will not be animated due to the death of their animator, and the trio decide to return home to enjoy toffee apples.
Characters
References
- The Doctor enjoys toffee apples.
Story notes
to be added
Continuity
- Amy and Rory are still on their honeymoon. The Doctor picks them up in DW: A Christmas Carol.
- The Doctor proclaims, "Why does no one ever listen to me?" He had previously expressed this in The Eleventh Hour, when Amy entered Prisoner Zero's room against his warnings.
Timeline
- Takes place after: DW: The Big Bang
- Takes place before: DW: A Christmas Carol
