Howling:How Series 6 Should Have Been

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Some fans were not pleased with the structure of Series 6, and I know someone also thought this on another discussion, because they felt it was slightly too rushed. Some of the episodes were not completely suited to be one parters. Here's how I think it should have been:

• The Impossible Astronaut
• Day of the Moon
• Curse of the Black Spot
• The Doctor's Wife
• The Almost People (squeezing the whole ganger thing into one episode)
• A Good Man Goes to War

A break, like there was in the real series.

• Let's Kill Hitler
• Night Terrors
• The Girl Who Waited
• The God Complex
• Closing Time
• (a sort of first part to the finale, with a title I made up): The Universe of Chaos
• The Wedding of River Song

As you can probably tell I wasn't a fan of the ganger episodes (they were so boring) but the alternate universe we saw in the finale was a good idea, I thought, and they could have incorporated a sub plot into the finale had they made it a two parter. I'm interested if anyone else thought the series structure was flawed. 77.86.9.25^{talk to me} 16:49, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

so, basically what you're saying is, make the ganger episodes one episode and make the finale a two parter. i wouldn't say the structure was flawed, just that some of the episodes needed a different ammount of time compared to what was given.

ps, i agree Imamadmad ^{talk to me} 20:59, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Well, not everyone liked the structure. Some didn't like that it opened with a two parter. Some didn't like the break in the middle. I'm just interested in which things most didn't feel right about the Series. 77.86.9.25^{talk to me} 21:38, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

The "ganger" two-parter did have its flaws and it might have been better compressed into one episode. The finalé was, I fully agree, far too rushed and had a much stronger claim on the extra episode than the "ganger" story. The finalé was more fun and also had more story. --89.241.67.8^{talk to me} 01:48, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

I pretty much agree with 77. The only thing that I would do differently would be to cut out Night Terrors, which was by far the weakest episode of the season, and make A Good Man Goes to War into a 2-parter. I also don't think that a show that only has 13 episodes in a season should really have a mid-season break. The Wedding of River Song definetly would have worked better as a 2-parter though, and The Rebel Flesh/The Almost People would have worked much better as a single part episode.Icecreamdif ^{talk to me} 15:13, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

I can see why you might not have liked Night Terrors, but I quite enjoyed it. I was considering moving NT into the first part of the series on the list, because it had a much lighter tone that would have felt better there, but then I remembered the creepy nursery rhyme, which actually turned out to be a good incorporation to the whole story arc of the Doctor dying. Had it been in the place of episode 3 or something the nursery rhyme arc might not have been as effective. If the Gangers had not been important to the arc I would probably have scrapped TRF/TAP entirely. 94.72.237.220^{talk to me} 16:53, January 17, 2012 (UTC) and yes my IP adress has changed from 77 to 94.

The nursery rhyme was all right, although it didn't quite make sense that the dolls would know the Doctor's fate, or that Kovarian would know the nursery rhyme, but overall the episode wasn't very good. Oftentimes, just going with a monster that is designed to be scary ends up just feeling kind of gimicky. Moffat was very good at doing good scary stories back when RTD was in charge, but noone else seems to be as good at it. Stories like The Empty Child/The Doctor Dances or Blink had good stories in addition to scary monsters. Night Terrors, however, just had a pretty boring story. Besides, A Good Man Goes to War really should have been a two parter.Icecreamdif ^{talk to me} 19:14, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Let's Kill Hitler could have been a two parter simply because it would mean Mels would not seem like a last minute idea. The finale was a tad rushed too.--82.11.57.232^{talk to me} 20:33, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

The only way that Mels would have really worked would have been if they had introduced her before A Good Man Goes to War. I mean, did anybody actually not figure out who Mels was as soon as they heard her name, after having learned River's real name. If Mels had been introduced before we learned the name "Melody Pond," then the revelation that she was actually River would probably have been shocking, but as it was it was pretty obvious. Introducing her earlier would also have given them more time to establish the character so that it wouldn't seem like she just came out of nowhere.Icecreamdif ^{talk to me} 03:43, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

also, they had a part mentioning the name mels in one of the preview clips on the bbc website before lets kill hitler aired, which yet again removed more of the mystery from her as anyone who had seen the clips would probably have made the connection before the character was even introduced properly in her mels form. the name should have deffinately been mentioned all the way back in series 5, preferably in 11th hour, which would have made it a lot less obvious that mels was melody. unless they wanted it to be that mels only grew up with amy and rory in the renewed timeline. and don't criticise me for spoiling things for myself.

also, i liked night terrors. it was a simpler story, but a good one all the same. although it could have looked better for me because it was surrounded by bad episodes on either side. just imo. and the nursery rhyme was suggested to be a well known one in wedding of river song (winston churchill said something along the lines of "tick tock goes the clock. that's what the old nursery rhyme says. but they don't, do they doctor"). Imamadmad ^{talk to me} 05:02, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Well, everyone has their own opinions of which episodes are better. Personally, while I thought that Let's Kill Hitler was not one of the season's better episodes, it was still better than Night Terrors, and The Girl Who Waited was one of the season's better episodes. Anyway, Mels should definetly have been mentioned back in season 5. When I first heard her name in the preview clip, I assumed that we would spend the next several months on these forums speculating as to whether or not Mels and River were the same person, but instead she just regenerated 10 minutes after she was introduced. Since she was the one who got Amy and Rory to go out together in the first place, I think we have to assume that that is how the timeline always worked. My guess would be that the reason that she wasn't mentioned in season 5 was that Moffat hadn't come up with that particular plot point yet. I have no idea how far ahead he plans these things, but I'm guessing that she would have made some kind of appearance if he had come up with her as early as The Eleventh Hour. Still, he could have given her a cameo or something in Let's Kill Hitler, though perhaps he decided that three Rivers (four if you count the version in Amy's womb (well, I guess it was just Ganger-Amy)) was more than enough for one episode.Icecreamdif ^{talk to me} 05:22, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Moffat may not have thought of Mels before the Series 5 scripts were finalised and, in any case, there wasn't that much room in The Eleventh Hour to introduce her. Her absence from the wedding in The Big Bang was (sort of) explained in retrospect. Introducing her earlier in Series 6 would have been better, however, especially if it had been done before A Good Man Goes to War, so that we knew she was the friend after whom Amy named her daughter. The similarity of name would then have seemed quite normal. Even when River revealed that she was Melody Pond, Mels would still have seemed like a separate character -- just the source of the name Melody. In terms of story arc, Night Terrors could have been dispensed with but story arc isn't (certainly shouldn't be) everything. It was a good story in itself. The Doctor's Wife is in the same category, not essential to the story arc but well worth having for its own sake. --89.242.76.108^{talk to me} 07:39, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Thinking about it further, the "preamble" sequence at the start of The Impossible Astronaut might have been the place to introduce Mels, as a friend of Amy and Rory who knew something of -- but had never met -- the Doctor. When the Doctor's intrusion into the Laurel and Hardy film was shown (and missed by both Amy and Rory), Mels could have been there and seen it. We'd then have thought the Ponds had just missed the chance to tell her, "That was the Doctor," -- one mild comedy touch among others that didn't seem very important to the plot. --89.242.76.108^{talk to me} 07:55, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

There was clearly enough room in The Eleventh Hour for the Doctor to meet other, much more inconsequential, residents of Leadworth. It would probably have been hard, but not impossible, to introduce Mels at the beginning of The Impossible Astronaut. However, the scenes in Leadworth in that episode would have to have been longer if they were going to introduce a new character. Night Terrors was not just despensible in terms of story arc, but it would have been a bad episode in any season. It certainly wasn't in the same category as The Doctor's Wife or The Girl Who Waited, which were both amazing episodes. Overall, it was just a very weak episode. George's character wasn't developed beyond a few minor quirks, like the lights, and he just didn't do much throughout the episode apart from being afraid. The mother, who probably should have been an important character, dissappeared at the beginning, and the father was far to willing to believe that the Doctor was an alien. The other residents of the building were just boring, and Amy and Rory had no role in the story apart from being chased by giant dolls.Icecreamdif ^{talk to me} 18:21, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

The point, in The Eleventh Hour, about the other residents of Leadworth that we met is that they were inconsequential. We didn't need to get to know them. Of course, Mels could have appeared as a similar "background" character. She'd still have needed to be (re)introduced in Series 6, though, and I can't think of anywhere except the beginning of The Impossible Astronaut where that could have been done without tipping us off too much that she was going to turn out to be important. The explanation of why she'd not been at the wedding could have been done there, too. If Mels had said something about wanting to meet the Doctor she'd heard so much about, Amy might have said, "If you'd been at the wedding, you'd have met him. You could even have danced with him." Then Mels could have said her bit about not doing weddings. Where Night Terrors is concerned, I think we'll just have to agree to disagree: I liked it, you didn't -- matter of taste and no point arguing. --78.146.176.218^{talk to me} 19:07, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Personally, I found TGWW as my second least favourite, after the Ganger two parter. I mean, come on, Amy, when in the history of reality itself has pressing a red button EVER caused anything good to happen? I'd have expected better from a companion of the Doctor himself. 94.72.237.220^{talk to me} 19:19, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Well, Rory and the Doctor had just pressed what she thought was the same button without any negative side effects, and some of the Doctor's companions are much dumber. Anyway, 78 is right in that different people like different episodes. I liked The Girl Who Waited, and you didn't. Anyway, the revelation that Mels was actually River would have worked much better if she had been introduced as a seemingly inconsequential character. Nobody would have really suspected it if she was just introduced in the context of being just another Leadworth resident who is friends with Amy and Rory, and we got to know most of them a little bit. Moffat could have easily established that Mels was a friend of Amy and Rory's, who was obsessed with "the Raggedy Doctor" (who everyone in that episode had heard of anyway), and who regularly broke the law back in The Eleventh Hour. It also could have worked for her to be present at Amy and Rory's wedding, though that could have caused a paradox since she was already there. It wouldn't have been impossible for Moffat to introduce or reintroduce Mels at the beginning of The Impossible Astronaut, but he would have pretty much have had to change the entire opening to make it work. Icecreamdif ^{talk to me} 20:57, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

For what it's worth, I liked The Girl Who Waited, too. In fact, I think it's one of the best episodes in Series 6. Again, it's a matter of taste and arguing about it will get nowhere. Having Mels present at the start of The Impossible Astronaut wouldn't have meant changing the entire opening, though -- extending it a little, probably, but not redesigning it totally. She ought to have been introduced before she was and she ought to have been introduced so she seemed just part of Amy and Rory's background. Her propensity to break the law ought to have been mentioned and Amy ought, at some point, have told her to keep out of trouble. If done in the comedic context of the opening of The Impossible Astronaut, that would merely have seemed like more comedy, with the audience (us) thinking, "Look who's talking!" We should definitely have been told enough to make it seem natural, in A Good Man Goes to War, that Amy named her daughter after Mels. In terms of the structure of the series, the break between A Good Man Goes to War and Let's Kill Hitler did have one disadvantage (apart from making us a bit impatient) -- it gave us too much time to think. Misdirections that would have held OK for a week might not have held over the much longer gap between those two episodes. If that's why Moffat decided not to introduce Mels earlier, then the break did do narrative damage. --89.242.71.102^{talk to me} 00:30, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with all the people complaining that Mels was too much of a gimmee. Background buzz at the wedding, end of season five: "Where is Mels? In jail again?" Picture on Amy's wall. Voice of Mels walking out as Amy gets the mail with the blue invitation , saying "Bye, Rory!" in thatbored voice. All stuff that could be added in post-production. Boblipton ^{talk to me} 01:26, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I think that introducing Mels in The Impossible Astronaut would have seemed random, and would have messed up the pacing, as the scene was written. However, if the opening had been different, with less emphasis on seeing the Doctor's exploits and more on seeing Amy and Rory in Leadworth, then introducing Mels there could have worked. Really though, she should have been introduced back in season 5.Icecreamdif ^{talk to me} 15:12, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

When in Series 5? One of the problems is that, until Let's Kill Hitler, Mels was supposed only to have heard of the Doctor, not to have met him. In Series 5, we saw very little of Amy without the Doctor being present. This has been discussed before in http://tardis.wikia.com/wiki/Howling:Mels(now archived) and possibly in other discussions I've not managed to track down yet. Ideally, Mels should have been introduced early on. Doing that, while keeping her from meeting the Doctor would have meant showing more of Amy's life when she wasn't with the Doctor. That could have been done and it could probably have been done without tipping us off that the reason was Mels -- by making it look like we were just being given Amy's background -- but it couldn't have been done without significant changes to Series 5 episodes. As it was, the only episode in Series 5 that was set substantially in Leadworth was The Eleventh Hour. That episode was about introducing the new incarnation of the Doctor and introducing Amy (to each other and to us). The episode already had enough work to do. Introducing Mels, as well, while managing to keep her from meeting the Doctor would have been too much more to tackle. When else in Series 5 could Mels have been introduced -- bearing in mind that she'd have to be introduced without giving us reason to think she might turn out to be important, later? --89.241.64.85^{talk to me} 02:05, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

well, she could have been at the weding for starters or in a picture in amy's house or something like that. if rtd could do it with mr saxon and bad wolf, i'm sure moffat could have figgured out a way if he tried. Imamadmad ^{talk to me} 02:46, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

One place Mels could perhaps have been mentioned was Amy's Choice. That was (mostly) set in a dream of Leadworth but in the dream Amy was pregnant, so there could have been dialogue about naming the child after Mels. The Doctor: "Who's Mels?" Rory: "Her best friend. She's a nutter. Always getting herself arrested." Amy: "She's not a nutter and she doesn't mean to get arrested!" Rory: "Neither did Crippin." (Please don't advise me against trying for a career as a dialogue writer. I don't intend to -- and that's only meant to be a rough example, anyway.) --89.241.64.85^{talk to me} 02:51, January 20, 2012 (UTC)