Talk:The Corsair

Singular they

I don't suppose we could use the singular they in this article to avoid the clumsy pronoun trouble? --SB | T 18:42, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

No; grammatically incorrect. Keep it as is. CloneMarshalCommanderCody ☎ 02:40, June 17, 2014 (UTC)

Both

Shouldn't this article metion something about The Corsair being the only Time Lord to be both male and female?Mandalore74 ^{talk to me} 22:44, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Not the only one — just the only one we know about. (For all we know, Borusa started out female.) —Josiah Rowe ^{talk to me} 04:56, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Davies and Lost in Time

I deleted a potentially bogus paragraph claiming that Russell T Davies (described as "head canon", whatever that means) said the Shopkeeper from Sarah Jane Adventures was the Corsair. The cited source contains no such reference, and The Doctor's Wife was produced and broadcast after the Shopkeeper was introduced in Lost in Time, and Davies has never made any statement as to the origins of that character (the DWM special editions on SJA make no reference to the Corsair having any connection). Feel free to put it back if an actual source can be found. 70.72.211.35^{talk to me} 14:28, April 10, 2013 (UTC)

Seeing as how the writer of the episode, Neil Gaiman, is the source for this information I think it should be included. PonyEnglish ☎ 03:15, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

This information will not be added to the article unless it occurs in the narrative. Out of universe sources are not valid sources for in-universe articles. Shambala108 ☎ 03:21, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

I would argue that since it is a "behind the scenes" bit that Gaiman warranted a blog post commenting on it that it should stay. It doesn't add to the character in-universe, true, but it adds a bit of creative, if not a bit of trivia, to the character. I don't see the harm.PonyEnglish ☎ 03:44, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

My IP has changed since I deleted the comment, but I have no problem with it being in Behind the Scenes, though there should be a direct link added to where Gaiman says this in the blog. It would be even better if we could find a second source. Has Davies mentioned this? Although it's all "non-narrative" right now there is always potential for Gaiman to write a future episode or novel - perhaps even bringing the Corsair back and making the Shopkeeper connection official. 68.146.70.124^{talk to me} 13:10, April 15, 2014 (UTC)

Plagiarism

The behind the scenes section is almost completely copied from the source (see the first footnote). I changed it when I noticed, but it's still too similar. CloneMarshalCommanderCody ☎ 02:39, June 17, 2014 (UTC)

Conjectural names for each incarnation

A few months back it was decided that we moved The Doctor (Fugitive of the Judoon) to Fugitive Doctor, a while ago, when splitting the Ollistra pages, I unconsciously created the page for the incarnation played by Jacqueline Pearce at War Ollistra instead of Ollistra (The Innocent) (with a {{conjecture}} tag). The reason I forwarded these two decisions was because calling an incarnation "something TimeLordName" is much more piratical when writing (and, specially, when reading) an article than the alternative "TimeLordName (story)". It makes each incarnation much more visually distinct. I mean, we have T:DOCTORS telling us to "avoid pipe switching to simply "the Doctor"".

Further, as I argued back on Talk: Fugitive Doctor, Tardis:Romana acknowledges and embraces the fact that her naming convention didn't originate from narrative sources, but rather an out-of-universe one.

And why am I saying all this? Well, like Romana, we have out-of-universe numbering for the Corsair incarnations. Gailman (the creator of the Corsair) and Houser (who wrote the stories in which she appeared) has told us that The Corsair (Old Friends) is indeed the Sixth Corsair; he's also told us that The Corsair (One Virtue, and a Thousand Crimes) is the Seventh Corsair (a story which he himself wrote). Finally, The Corsair (The Doctor's Wife), who was first mentioned in The Doctor's Wife and briefly appears in One Virtue, and a Thousand Crimes (both written by Gaiman), is affirmatively the Ninth Corsair, given he has the same exact same description (literally almost word-for-word) as the one in The Brilliant Book 2012 (in a piece also written by Gaiman).

All that said, I think the wiki would only benefit from moving these three pages for their respective new names, adding the "conjecture" tags on them. Thoughts? OncomingStorm12th ☎ 21:31, 27 September 2021 (UTC)

Great plan! As long as the conjecture is clearly marked, it sounds good to me. Some page locks might also be necessary to keep well-intentioned editors from making [[First Corsair]] and so on. – n8 (☎) 19:08, 28 September 2021 (UTC)

Well, actually, the piece about the Corsair in The Brilliant Book 2012 really ought to have an {{invalid}} page, to be placed in Category:Non-DWU features; and this would lead us to have [[First Doctor]] onwards as {{invalid}} pages sourced to that piece. Or am I missing something? Scrooge MacDuck ⊕ 19:17, 28 September 2021 (UTC)

First of all it does have such a page and second of all (assuming you mean [[First Corsair]] rather than [[First Doctor]]) then I don't see why not! In terms of OS12's proposal, I definitely support the splitting and chosen names. What I'm less sure about is referring to these pages in articles. As there's no in-universe basis for the names, we'd still be restricted to writing something like "[[Sixth Corsair|one incarnation of the Corsair]]", which could become a bit awkward. Danochy ☎ 23:28, 28 September 2021 (UTC)

Yes, sorry, re "First Doctor", stupid typo.

Although it's arguably a bit of a Freudian slip, because as concerns your last point — the thing is that we don't really have solid in-universe sources for Twelfth Doctor and Thirteenth Doctor. We have things like series titles (e.g. Doctor Who: The Thirteenth Doctor), but it is usual for it to take years, if ever, for Doctors to be directly referred to as "the [X]th Doctor" in a valid source. Obviously we did not wait until The Time of the Doctor to write about "the Eleventh Doctor" on in-universe pages, as opposed to resorting to periphrases such as "an incarnation of the Doctor who would logically have called himself the eleventh". While I understand the scruple, if we do go forward with the Corsair renames it would, I think, be fairly silly of us not to use the names in such things as story summaries.

Anyway, while I'm going to leave this "open" a little while yet so that we can continue discussing the issue User:Danochy brought up above, as well as the possibility of the {{invalid}} pages for other incarnations, consider the proposal to use the conjectural names from the non-narrative source provisionally accepted. It's completely within the precedents of T:ROMANA, T:DOCTORS and the recent discussion at Talk:Fugitive Doctor. Scrooge MacDuck ⊕ 23:37, 28 September 2021 (UTC)

You know Danochy... I'm not entirely sure we would need to, or even should do such a thing. In general, conjecture names are chosen exactly with the purpose of avoiding wonky texts like that. For an example, we have several pages currently linking to Fugitive Doctor and War Ollistra without doing this workaround. Other example that comes to mind is Battle of the Game Station (or several other "Battles" present in Category:Articles with conjectural titles. With the risk of not actually checking several pages that link to them rn, I feel quite comfortable in assuming no one feels bad linking to them without going [[Battle of the Game Station|a battle which took place in the Game Station]]. Personally, I'd say we either go full in or full out on this; performing a rename for the pages only so that we don't take advantage of the simplified language for our articles seems a bit pointless, if I'm honest.

As for pages on [[First Corsair]]... I'm not entirely sure so far. Currently it's set up as a feature rather than an invalid short story. OncomingStorm12th ☎ 23:51, 28 September 2021 (UTC)

So what? There is ample precedent that non-narrative fictional pieces with pages can be cited on {{invalid}} page like any other invalid source. Scrooge MacDuck ⊕ 00:05, 29 September 2021 (UTC)

I wrote this before seeing OS12's message, so I'll quickly explain why I see this as a different case here. The Fugitive Doctor is a fugitive, the War Ollistra is an Ollistra of the war, and the Battle of the Game Station is indeed a battle at the Game Station. As such we don't need to stretch T:VS too much to adopt names with at least some in-universe grounding. The problem with the Corsairs is the lack of any in-universe grounding.

I would honestly like to be able to use ordinal numbers to refer to the Corsairs, so while first I wrote an argument against using the terms in-universe, I also thought for a bit about the pro argument. I present both here.

Against: In the case of Scrooge's Doctor argument (similar to OS12's) we do have that in universe connection though from the previous Doctor. Even if (from an in-universe perspective) there's a small chance we have a War Doctor-like situation, the probabilities are heavily stacked in favour of that not being the case. It's more of an assumption than a T:VS violation. With the Corsairs, there's no "would logically have been the Sixth Corsair", because we didn't see them regenerate from a Fifth Corsair or into a Seventh.

Pro: The alternative argument is that we could treat the Houser and Gaiman tweets (as well as the Brilliant Book feature) as informal "credits". There is plenty of precedent for naming pages based on a credit, the only concern here is whether we do consider these as equivalent to credits? Or at least close enough to a credit to be able to use the names in-universe. We should be careful we don't create an unfounded precedent here, though, as there are certain cases where names are intentionally not used in any stories, for example a certain renegade Time Lord. Just because a writer adopts the fan term "The Collective" in a Twitter post, doesn't mean we should start using the term ourselves.

To end with, I'm in agreement with Scrooge that creating invalid pages for the First, etc. Corsairs would only improve our coverage of the character. Danochy ☎ 00:23, 29 September 2021 (UTC)

I see your concerns for creating a precedent, and I think it is an entirely valid one. And, funnily enough, the renegade Time Lord was the next one I had in mind, specially because the name popularized itself on Twitter and Discord (much in the same way "Romana I" and "Romana II" did all those years ago). Again, while I appreciate and agree without concerns for precedent, both of these proposals would still be within the confinements of T:VS, because we're only dealing with the naming of the articles, and not the content in them. If we take a look at the description of {{Conjecture}}, it tells us "{{Conjecture}} is a template that flags articles whose subjects' names do not actually appear within a valid narrative."

While I inteded to keep this argument for the other discussion, I think it can be used here as well: if we're going to end up with "made up" names (which "The Corsair (story)" and "renegade Time Lord" (The Eleven)" kinda are) we might as well go with a more pratical/distinctive one (as long, of course, as we make it clear that they're conjectural). OncomingStorm12th ☎ 01:11, 29 September 2021 (UTC)