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 {{Infobox Individual
 |image             = Tzim-Sha.jpg
-|alias             = Tim Shaw, Halloween
+|alias             = Tzim-Sha, T'zim-Sha
 |species           = Stenza
 |only              = The Woman Who Fell to Earth (TV story)
 |actor             = Samuel Oatley
 }}
-'''Tzim-Sha''', mockingly referred to by the [[Thirteenth Doctor]] as '''Tim Shaw''', was a [[Stenza]] warrior who sought to become the leader of his people.
+'''Tim Shaw''' was [[Thirteenth Doctor|the Doctor]]'s arguably intentional nickname for a [[Stenza]] warrior who sought to become the leader of his people. He tried to correct the Doctor's slight mispronunciation of his name by suggesting something that sounded like '''Tzim-Sha''' or '''T'zim-Sha'''.
-Tzim-Sha used a swarm of [[Gathering Coil|Gathering Coils]] in order to locate a [[Karl Wright|trophy]] to take back to his planet, despite this being against his species' rules. He came ahead in [[Tzim-Sha's pod|his pod]], waiting inside for the coils to find his target before breaking out and killing [[Rahul (The Woman Who Fell to Earth)|Rahul]], taking one of his teeth as a prize. He then began searching for the coils in order to learn where and who his target was. While searching for the coils, he encountered [[Dean (The Woman Who Fell to Earth)|Dean]], who threw salad at him, mocking his appearance. Angered, Tzim-Sha killed him and took one of his teeth as well.
+He used a swarm of [[Gathering Coil|Gathering Coils]] in order to locate a [[Karl Wright|trophy]] to take back to his planet, despite this being against his species' rules. He came ahead in [[Tzim-Sha's pod|his pod]], waiting inside for the coils to find his target before breaking out and killing [[Rahul (The Woman Who Fell to Earth)|Rahul]], taking one of his teeth as a prize. He then began searching for the coils in order to learn where and who his target was. While searching for the coils, he encountered [[Dean (The Woman Who Fell to Earth)|Dean]], who threw salad at him, mocking his appearance. Angered, Tzim-Sha killed him and took one of his teeth as well.
 Upon finding the coils, he was confronted by the Thirteenth Doctor, along with [[Ryan Sinclair|Ryan]], [[Graham O'Brien|Graham]], [[Grace O'Brien|Grace]] and [[Yasmin Khan|Yasmin]] who ordered he not hunt on Earth and flee back to his people. However, Tzim-Sha refused, threatening to kill the Doctor if she tried to stop him. He absorbed the data and then used a short-range teleport to reach his target, [[Karl Wright]], at a [[Skylark Building Services|construction site]].