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 == Summary ==
 === Part one ===
-On the planet [[Acantha]], the [[Thirteenth Doctor]], [[Graham O'Brien|Graham]], [[Ryan Sinclair|Ryan]] and [[Yasmin Khan|Yaz]] are walking along discussing [[the Beatles]]. Graham is saddened to learn that The Doctor has used up all the dates to see the Beatles. Ryan teases Graham and calls him granddad, which Graham responds to by saying he never thought he would be sorry to hear that. Yaz asks the Doctor how the planet was named if there is no intelligent life. The Doctor is happy to hear the question and declares ten points to Yaz. Ryan sarcastically asks if they are being graded, to which the Doctor points out that that would be unfair and she loves them all equally, before whispering to Yaz she gets ten points. The Doctor informs her friends Acantha is rich in minerals so it has attracted a lot of attention over the years and Graham finds a collapsed mine. Ryan gets shocked by static electricity which the Doctor thinks is odd.
+On the planet [[Acantha]], the [[Thirteenth Doctor]], [[Graham O'Brien|Graham]], [[Ryan Sinclair|Ryan]] and [[Yasmin Khan|Yaz]] walk along discussing [[the Beatles]], where Graham is saddened to learn that the Doctor has used up all the dates to see them. Yaz asks the Doctor how the planet was named if there is no intelligent life, to which the Doctor says that Acantha is rich in minerals so it has attracted a lot of attention over the years. Graham finds a collapsed mine near which Ryan gets shocked by static electricity which the Doctor thinks is odd.
-Suddenly a ship hovers over them telling them to stay where they are, and the Doctor discovers the ship contains [[Mobox]]. She tells her friends they're not evil, just a bit touchy and brutal and trys to introduce herself. She is cut off by captain [[R'Takk]], demanding they explain what they are doing in the restricted area. Before the Doctor can reply, a [[mag-storm]] occurs and kills one of R'Takk's men. One of the blasts also knocks Ryan off a cliff. R'Takk and the other Mobox grab the Doctor, Graham and Yaz and load them into the ship, before flying off. Graham demands they go back for Ryan, and R'Takk refuses and tells his pilot, [[M'Kurr]] to get back to the hub. The Doctor asks after the storms and R'Takk explains they think its magnetic fielding causing them.
+Suddenly, a ship hovers over them telling them to stay where they are, and the Doctor discovers the ship contains [[Mobox]]. She tries to introduce herself but is cut off by captain [[R'Takk]], demanding they explain what they are doing in the restricted area. Before the Doctor can reply, a [[mag-storm]] occurs and kills one of R'Takk's men, with the blast knocking Ryan off a cliff. R'Takk and the other Mobox grab the Doctor, Graham and Yaz and load them into the ship before flying off. Graham demands they go back for Ryan, but R'Takk refuses and tells his pilot, [[M'Kurr]], to get back to Hub Town. The Doctor asks about the storms and R'Takk explains how they believe they are caused by the local magnetic field.
-Later at the hub, the Doctor learns the colony is run by both Humans and Mobox, while R'Takk informs the trio that when Icarus Incorporated ran into issues, they sold the planet to the Mobox empire who set up a colony for the Humans. Before R'Takk can arrest them, the Doctor brandishes the psychic paper, and demands to see the Mobox in charge. They go to see governor [[K'Lass]] who welcomes them in. He introduces his assistant, [[Rodney Minto]], and Graham asks him to find Ryan. K'Lass agrees and tells R'Takk to take Graham and Yaz to find him, but wishes the Doctor to stay much to her dissaproval.
+Later, at Hub Town, the Doctor learns the colony is run by both humans and Mobox, while R'Takk informs the trio that when the colony's owners, Icarus Incorporated, ran into issues, they sold the planet to the Mobox Empire. Before R'Takk can arrest them, however, the Doctor brandishes her [[psychic paper]] and demands to see the Mobox in charge. They go to see Governor [[K'Lass]] who welcomes them in. He introduces his assistant, [[Rodney Minto]], and Graham asks him to find Ryan. K'Lass agrees and tells R'Takk to take Graham and Yaz to find him, but wishes the Doctor to stay, much to her disapproval.
-While on the search for Ryan, the group run into another Mag-storm and M'Kurr declares they need to lighten the ships load to stay in the air. R'Takk, Graham and Yaz throw anything they can out of the airlock, but M'Kurr informs them it wasn't enough. R'Takk then turns to Graham and Yaz and tells them he's sorry. He opens his mouth and incinerates them. He stares at the spot where they used to be, as M'Kurr congratulates him on saving them.
+While on the search for Ryan, the group run into another mag-storm. With the ship being hit, M'Kurr declares they need to lighten the ship's load to stay in the air. R'Takk, Graham and Yaz throw everything they can out of the airlock, but M'Kurr informs them it is not enough. R'Takk then turns to Graham and Yaz and apologises, before seemingly incinerating them. He stares at the spot where they used to be as M'Kurr congratulates him on saving them.
 === Part two ===