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The Shape of the Hole (short story) (edit)
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A year after deciding that she would try to find [[the Doctor|"him"]], [[Bernice Summerfield|Benny]] again leaves [[Peter Summerfield|Peter]], [[Keith Branigan Kane-Summerfield|Keith]] and [[Rebecca Kane-Summerfield|Rebecca]] with [[Jason Kane|Jason]], whom she has [[marriage|remarried]], although she feels guilty for doing so. She has thus far had no luck locating him, with [[Irving Braxiatel|Braxiatel]], in the [[wine cellar]]s of an [[Earth|Old Earth]] [[monastery]], telling her that he had no brother nor did he currently employ anybody. | A year after deciding that she would try to find [[the Doctor|"him"]], [[Bernice Summerfield|Benny]] again leaves [[Peter Summerfield|Peter]], [[Keith Branigan Kane-Summerfield|Keith]] and [[Rebecca Kane-Summerfield|Rebecca]] with [[Jason Kane|Jason]], whom she has [[marriage|remarried]], although she feels guilty for doing so. She has thus far had no luck locating him, with [[Irving Braxiatel|Braxiatel]], in the [[wine cellar]]s of an [[Earth|Old Earth]] [[monastery]], telling her that he had no brother nor did he currently employ anybody. | ||
Because of her failed attempts, Benny came to search for his [[grave]] instead. She found graves reportedly belonging to him on Earth, [[Olleril]], [[Artaris]], [[Kyrol]] and [[Quiescia]], but all of them were empty. This time, she has heard a story about how he came to a planet and helped establish a [[world government]], returning over the years to help with various crises before his visits came to an end. The people of the planet cannot agree when the visits stopped, nor where his grave is. Benny finds a [[tumulus]] without an [[inscription]] and finds it empty. His grave will, she realises, always be empty. | Because of her failed attempts, Benny came to search for his [[grave]] instead. She found graves reportedly belonging to him on Earth, [[Olleril]], [[Artaris]], [[Kyrol]] and [[Quiescia]], but all of them were empty. This time, she has heard a story about how he came to a planet and helped establish a [[world government]], returning over the years to help with various crises before his visits came to an end. The people of the planet cannot agree when the visits stopped, nor where his grave is. Benny finds a [[tumulus]] without an [[inscription]] and finds it empty. His grave will, she realises, always be empty. | ||
== Characters == | == Characters == | ||
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* [[Rebecca Kane-Summerfield]] | * [[Rebecca Kane-Summerfield]] | ||
== | == Worldbuilding == | ||
* Benny has searched on [[Earth|Old Earth]], [[Olleril]], [[Artaris]], [[Kyrol]] and [[Quiescia]] | * Benny has searched on [[Earth|Old Earth]], [[Olleril]], [[Artaris]], [[Kyrol]] and [[Quiescia]] | ||
* Benny uses a [[gravity beam]] to move the [[stone]] placed in front of the entrance to the [[tumulus]]. | * Benny uses a [[gravity beam]] to move the [[stone]] placed in front of the entrance to the [[tumulus]]. | ||