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* The Doctor (upon seeing Clara, and calling her by her name): "You're back. You're in my head. All my memories are back." | * The Doctor (upon seeing Clara, and calling her by her name): "You're back. You're in my head. All my memories are back." | ||
Now, do we have any quotes (aside from a stubborn Doctor who was proven to be wrong about the Testimony's intentions and nature the whole time) to support they '''aren't''' Bill, Clara and Nardole? [[User:OncomingStorm12th|OncomingStorm12th]] [[User talk:OncomingStorm12th|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 22:41, January 3, 2019 (UTC) | Now, do we have any quotes (aside from a stubborn Doctor who was proven to be wrong about the Testimony's intentions and nature the whole time) to support they '''aren't''' Bill, Clara and Nardole? [[User:OncomingStorm12th|OncomingStorm12th]] [[User talk:OncomingStorm12th|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 22:41, January 3, 2019 (UTC) | ||
== Improvements on this episode == | |||
Here are ideas how I'd write it: | |||
1. The 12th Doctor reminding the 1st about his future selves, causing him to remember the many Doctor episodes. | |||
2. The 12th Doctor can remind the 1st Doctor of Barbara who saved him from Daleks. | |||
3. Rose Tyler, Sarah J, and Barbara can appear. They can remind the two how their deaths can lend victory to the dark forces. And prevent the Curator, thus dooming Gallifrey. | |||
4. Rose Tyler can call the two Doctors cowards, liars, and promise breakers; and point out the War Doctor proving more self-sacrificing and honourable. | |||
5. The War Doctor (real or memory, or even really the Curator) can remind the 12th how turning a blind eye led to more suffering in the Time War including Cass's death in 'The Night of the Doctor'. | |||
6. It can be reveal Rassilon deceived the 12th Doctor to think Bill dead to push him to suicide so zero can stop him from gaining godhood. The 12th Doctor can be shocked Bill survived and furious Rassilon tricked him. | |||
7. The captain can show respect to the Doctor's she-companions and admit they prove more of a man, and call hismelf a coward sucha s how he screamed on Dalek mutants. But Sarah and Barbara can lecture how tio took coruage to stay on adventures, and mroe to admit errors. | |||