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What's your plan?[[edit source]]
Before you get too far, CBG, can I ask what your plan is, here? I'm not saying don't write this thing, but it's a very broad topic. How you planning to grab focus?
Also, {{inuse}} should go at the very top of the article, so that people see it without having to scroll down. And, as a bit of early copy editing, please remember that We Are Not German So We Don't Capitalise Every Word. Specifically, your lead should start off:
- A book was ….
czechout<staff /> ☎ ✍ 20:41: Wed 03 Apr 2013
- Please don't make this a list of appearances article as you appear to be doing. The article should have some sort of focus, some sort of organising principles. Note how hospital does not try to be an exhaustive list of hospitals, but really a broad overview of important instances in hospitals. You should also make sure that you include direct quotes rather than making up your own definitions. For instance, a good lead for you might be:
- Books were what the Tenth Doctor once described as the "best weapons in the world". (Or whatever the exact quote is.)
- I'm sure you can find quotes from The Mind Robber, Silence in the Library and other places. Don't define the term yourself. Look at the lead of The Master. Let the characters and situations of the DWU do the defining.
czechout<staff /> ☎ ✍ 20:46: Wed 03 Apr 2013
You're right, I didn't think to work. And I didn't realise how often books were used and referred to. Heh. I'll keep a greater organisation principle in mind, but it's such a large set I think I am going to need to list some more before a good organisational structure takes shape. --ComicBookGoddess ☎ 21:02, April 3, 2013 (UTC)