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2 November 2016
→Notes: Not dependent on the Rift
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→Characters: a better name
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→Shoreditch locations: setting everything into present whether a flashback or not
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→Shoreditch locations: bar and Swallow Avenue
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Ranesh
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1 November 2016
→Culture: more precise explanation
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→Culture: A movie reference
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→Shoreditch locations: High Street
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→Food and drinks: vodka and whisky
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→Technology: biro
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→Technology: Wi-Fi
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→Continuity: Ram and football
+178
→Characters: a small character
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→Continuity: Ram's recollections
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→Continuity: April related
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→References: pizza
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→Technology: better wording
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→Technology: smoke alarm
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→Technology: secateurs and trowels
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→Culture: Iron Man
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additional dating confirmation
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→References: Xbox
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→Continuity
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31 October 2016
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→Media: Buzzfeed and invisible Facebook
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→Culture: Seraphin videos
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→References: centripetal force
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→Continuity: Tanya plays with JArvis
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→References: Jackson Pollock
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→Continuity: The Doctor
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→Continuity: link in a new section
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→Organisations: The autocorrect really dislikes Matteusz
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→References: imprecise dating: most probably, this happens already after Nightvisiting
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→Technology: iPad
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→Continuity: linking to the people not the planet
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Continuity to Ep.1
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→Other locations: So Quill, Charlie and now Matteusz live on the Central line.
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→References: Metro newspaper
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→Other locations: Two more locations
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Bot: Automated text replacement (-Quill (For Tonight We Might Die) +Andrea Quill)
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→Characters: auto-correct typo
preliminary structure on references
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I appreciate the intent, but T:BOLD still applies here
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→Characters: Another minor character
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→Characters: Ram is by far the main character here
