Talk:Jenny Says: Drink Gevity™! (comic story)

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This page is fairly well-made, although I'd say a few things would improve it - mainly, an external link to the comic itself, to allow readers to look through it and possibly write about it themselves. ...For obvious reasons, I can't do this myself, but I believe I'm allowed to suggest changes to the page. Cookieboy 2005 12:21, 3 April 2024 (UTC)

(I guess it wouldn't be harmful to list stuff that can be improved, as long as the creator knows I do appreciate their work: some images would be good, a rewrite of the summary as it's currently written like part of a Jenny's biography, finished worldbuilding and continuity sections (the latter probably warrants a few NOTCOVERED redirects (see Auteur's Abecedarium (short story) for an example of this usage in action), and a few other things, like linking to character's full names and, as stated above, adding an external link. (Obviously if anyone wants to just do one or two of these, that's fine)) Cookieboy 2005 12:30, 3 April 2024 (UTC)
Oh, and I just realised, the #15 thing is based on including a scrapped comic I shared, as well as a two-parter being counted as two separate stories - by my count, this would be #13 in the "official" order of stories (and that's including "The Winx laugh at Among Us ft. Dr. Who"). Cookieboy 2005 12:54, 3 April 2024 (UTC)