Editing The Rings of Akhaten (TV story)

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{{Infobox Story
|name            = {{StoryTitle}}
|image           = ClaraLeafAkhaten.jpg
|series          = [[Doctor Who television stories|''Doctor Who'' television stories]]
|season number   = [[Series 7 (Doctor Who)|7]]
|story number    = 232
|doctor          = Eleventh Doctor
|companions      = [[Clara Oswald (The Bells of Saint John)|Clara]]
|featuring       = [[Dave Oswald|Dave]], [[Ellie Oswald|Ellie]], [[Merry Gejelh|Merry]]
|enemy           = [[Akhaten]], The [[The Mummy|Mummy]], The [[Vigil]]
|setting         = [[Tiaanamat]], [[Sun-singers of Akhet]]
|writer          = [[Neil Cross]]
|director        = [[Farren Blackburn]]
|producer        = [[Denise Paul]]
|broadcast date  = [[6 April (releases)|6 April]] [[2013]]
|network         = [[BBC One]]
|production code = 3.7
|format          = 1x45 minute episode
|prev            = The Bells of Saint John (TV story)
|next            = Cold War (TV story)
|made prev       = The Bells of Saint John (TV story)
|made next       = Nightmare in Silver (TV story)
|bts             = Behind the Scenes of The Rings Of Akhaten - Doctor Who - Episode 2 Series 7 2013 - BBC One
|trailer         = Doctor Who The Rings of Akhaten - TV Trailer - Episode 2 Series 7 2013 - BBC One
|clip            = The Doctor & Clara Explore - Doctor Who The Rings of Akhaten preview - Series 7 2013 - BBC One
}}
'''''The Rings of Akhaten''''' was the eighth episode of the [[series 7 (Doctor Who)|seventh series]] of ''[[Doctor Who]]'' produced by [[BBC Wales]]. In it, the [[Eleventh Doctor]]'s new [[companion]], [[Clara Oswald]], took her first trip in [[the TARDIS]] to an [[alien]] [[planet]].

== Synopsis ==
[[Clara Oswin Oswald|Clara Oswald]] wants to see something awesome, so [[Eleventh Doctor|the Doctor]] whisks her off to the inhabited rings of the [[planet]] [[Akhaten]], where the [[Festival of Offerings]] is in full swing. Clara meets the young [[Queen of Years]] as the pilgrims and natives ready for the ceremony. But something is stirring in the [[pyramid]], and a sacrifice will be demanded.

== Plot ==
The wind blows autumn leaves and a wooden gate closes. One large reddish orange [[leaf]] rattles on the [[tree]]. [[Dave Oswald|A young man with dark hair]], dressed in a suit, fumbles with an unfolded [[map]] as he walks down a pavement. The Doctor peers out from behind a copy of ''[[The Beano]] Summer Special [[1981]]''. The young man looks around in confusion when suddenly [[Clara Oswald's Leaf|a leaf]] falls from the tree into his face. He stumbles into the street and the path of an oncoming car, but is pulled aside by [[Ellie Oswald|a beautiful young woman]]. She asks if he is all right and he smiles.

Some time later, the two are sharing an [[umbrella]] and stumble up to a doorway in laughter. He pulls out the leaf and she asks why he kept it. He explains that, "this exact leaf had to grow in that exact way, in that exact place, so that precise wind could tear it from that precise branch, and make it fly into this exact face at that exact moment. And if just one of those tiny little things had never happened, I'd never have met you. Which makes this the most important leaf in human history." They kiss; the Doctor frowns and walks away in the rain.

Later, [[baby]] [[Clara Oswin Oswald|Clara]] is held by her father. While playing as a toddler, Clara's mother shows Clara her book, ''[[101 Places to See]]''. The Doctor is hit in the face by a [[football]]. He pops up with his hands in a defensive gesture as Clara's mother asks if he's all right. Among other things, he says that's he's possibly a touch embarrassed and seriously asks if that's dangerous. Clara's father brings her over and she's introduced.

A teenage Clara, holding her mother's book, stands with her father in mourning over the [[gravestone]] for "Ellie Oswald, beloved wife and mother, born [[11 September|11th September]] [[1960]], died [[5 March|5 March]] [[2005]]" . The Doctor watches and returns to [[The Doctor's TARDIS|the TARDIS]]. He reviews her file on the scanner; he's been investigating her past to make sure she's just a human girl. He declares, "She's not possible."
[[File:Ellie_Oswald_young.jpg|thumb|left|Ellie first meets Clara's father.]]

Clara is sitting on the stairway with her book. She hears the TARDIS land, the door open, and she smiles and jumps up as the doorbell rings. In the [[TARDIS console room]], she asks about the nature of [[time]] ("not made of [[Strawberry|strawberries]]"), and if the TARDIS can go anywhere ("within reason"). The Doctor asks her where she wants to go, and she freezes, admitting that the breadth of options makes it difficult to think of one. The Doctor prompts her until she smiles and says she wants to see "something awesome".

The Doctor walks her out of the TARDIS, with her eyes closed, into the light of an alien sun, and bids her open her eyes so that he can welcome her to the [[Rings of Akhaten]]. A golden [[pyramid]] comes into view. It is the [[Pyramid of the Rings of Akhaten]], a holy site for the [[Sun-singers of Akhet]]. This is a [[star system|system]] of seven [[planet|worlds]], orbiting the same [[star]], and they believe that all life in the [[universe]] originated on Akhaten. Clara asks to go to it.
 
They wander an [[alien]] [[market]]. The Doctor says that most of the people around are local [[species]], and points out some. He does a ritual greeting with a [[Terraberserker]] of the [[Cadonian Belt]], mentioning that they're not common. He says he forgot how much he liked it there - [[First Doctor|he'd]] been there a long time ago with [[Susan Foreman|his granddaughter]]. Clara's a bit shocked at this, but the Doctor's moving fast. She runs after him and he presents her with [[Exotic fruit (The Rings of Akhaten)|a glowing blue fruit]]. She takes a bite as he scans it with his screwdriver. She shakes her head at the taste.
[[File:DoctorClaraAkhaten.jpg|thumb|right|The Doctor points out species in the market.]] 

The place is crowded because of the [[Festival of Offerings]], and a creature comes up to Clara, barking and growling at her. The Doctor returns, barking himself to communicate, and introduces [[Dor'een]] to Clara. Dor'een had been asking if they want to rent a moped. Clara asks what it costs and the Doctor explains that they don't use money, here. They use objects of sentimental value as currency. "[[Psychometry]]. Objects [[psychic]]ally imprinted with their history." She dislikes the idea, thinking it's terrible to have to give up something important to you in trade. The Doctor says it's better than bits of paper, so she says that he should pay, as someone who's a thousand years old should have something that he cares about. The Doctor pulls out his [[sonic screwdriver]], then shakes his head and puts it back.
[[File:Dor'een.jpg|thumb|left|Dor'een in the market.]]
 
Clara turns her back for a moment, then goes looking for him. [[Merry Galel|A little girl]], wearing crimson robes, bumps into her and runs off. Shortly afterwards, two men wearing similar robes, presumably monks of the religious order of that system, ask Clara if she'd seen the [[Queen of Years]]. Clara shrugs and they search on.
 
Clara goes to look for the young girl, and finds her in the back corridors. The girl runs, and Clara slowly follows. They startle each other and laugh. The girl says she's hiding and is confused and sceptical that Clara doesn't know her. The girl says she needs help to hide, and Clara knows the perfect box. [[Vigil|Three men wearing black uniforms with brass buttons and facial masks]] appear and start whispering, calling out for the girl. Clara takes the little girl to the TARDIS and tries to open the doors, but they are locked. She rattles the doors a bit, then states that the blue box just doesn't like her.
 
Clara gets a little angry, but she forgets it when the little girl ducks behind the TARDIS. She tells Clara that her name is [[Merry Galel]], and she's the Queen of Years. She was chosen to become this as a baby, when the previous Queen died. She knows every story, poem, legend, and song of their culture. She's scared because she has to sing a special song to their god to keep him from waking. Clara tells her that everyone's scared when they're little. She had been scared of being lost, until she'd gotten lost once. Her mom found her and took her home, and told her that no matter how lost she was, her mom would always find her. Afterwards, Clara was many times scared, but never of being lost.
 
Merry believes Clara when she tells her she'll get the song right, and Clara takes her back to the men in red robes who were looking for her. The Doctor comes up, eating the glowing blue fruit.
 
In a room in the pyramid, a man in red robes sings to a [[Mummy (The Rings of Akhaten)|mummy]]. He switches out with [[The Chorister (The Rings of Akhaten)|the Chorister]].

[[File:Merry_singing_to_the_Old_God.jpg|thumb|right|Merry continues the Long Song.]]
Clara and the Doctor arrive to view a ceremony. The Doctor shushes Clara when she tries to ask if they're supposed to be there. There is some grumbling, then silence as Merry looks at Clara before she begins to sing a duet with the man in the pyramid. The Doctor reads the program and tells Clara that they're signing the [[Long Song]], a lullaby to keep the [[Old God]], or Grandfather - the mummy in the temple - asleep. There has been a [[Chorister]] singing this endless song for generations. Others in the audience hold up offerings, gifts of sentimental value, to feed the Old God. The viewers, including the Doctor, join in the song.
 
The Chorister in the pyramid falters, and they all stop singing, looking around in confusion. The Chorister raises his hood and continues. The ground shakes at the pyramid and in the viewing room, and a golden energy seizes Merry and starts moving her towards the pyramid. She screams and Clara asks if anyone is going to help her. She follows the Doctor, who is already leaving, saying he can't just walk away because Clara talked Merry into doing this. He replies: "Listen, there is one thing you need to know about travelling with me. Well, one thing, apart from the blue box and the two hearts. We don't walk away."
 
He walks up to Dor'een, barking, then pats his pockets and looks back to Clara. He tells her he needs something. She's confused, saying that he must have something himself. He pulls out the screwdriver, saying, "I don't want to give it away because it comes in handy." She looks down and quietly takes her mother's ring from her hand and hands it over. They take the moped and fly it out to the glowing ball carrying Merry. Clara almost takes her hand, but the little girl flies into the pyramid.

Clara and the Doctor land at a doorway protected by a [[frequency-modulated acoustic lock]]. He says that he really can't open it, as it changes too quickly, but he'll try anyway.

[[File:MerryScreams.jpg|thumb|Merry screams.]]
The Chorister continues to sing. Merry walks closer, saying that she doesn't know what to do. She screams. The Doctor manages to open the door, but it's very difficult and heavy to hold up. As Merry won't leave, the Doctor is unable to do anything other than hold the door up. Merry won't leave, as she believes that it is her fault the Old God is waking, and she doesn't believe Clara any more because Clara was wrong. Now the Old God will eat their souls. She [[telekinetic]]ally pins Clara to the glass around the Old God, and then says that he doesn't want Clara, he wants her, but if the others don't leave the God will eat them too. The Doctor says they're never going to leave, then hums a bar and lets go of the door. Clara asks if they've just been locked in with the [[soul]]-eating monster, and the Doctor says yes.

[[File:Chorister_Rezh_Baphix_closeup.jpg|thumb|left|Chorister Rezh Baphix declares the Long Song has ended with him.]]
The Chorister is still trying to sing the god back to sleep, and the Doctor advises he run. He stops, and declares that the Long Song has ended with him. He presses a button on his wrist band and disappears. The mummy begins to move, and the Doctor tells Merry that they didn't wake him, he woke because it was time to wake up and eat Merry.

He tells Merry that she was intended as a sacrifice for the monster, because if she's going to do this voluntarily she should know why. He tells her a story about how she is unique and he believes that her sacrifice would be a waste. Merry lets Clara go and they begin to run. The [[Vigil]] appear, and Merry says it is their job to feed her to the Old God. They throw off the Doctor and Clara and lead her to the mummy. Clara rouses first and gets the screwdriver to the Doctor. He holds off the Vigil with the screwdriver. Merry sings the secret song, opening another door. They run, but Clara goes back for the Doctor. He holds back the Vigil again as the mummy breaks the glass, and a beam of light shoots from him into the planet. 

The Vigil disappear, and the Doctor says they're gone because Grandfather is awake and they're no longer needed. He declares that he's made a tactical mistake. He thought that the Old God and Grandfather were the same thing ([[the Mummy]]), but "it was just Grandfather's [[alarm clock]]". ''[[Akhaten]]'' itself is the Old God. Merry declares that the entity will eat everyone in the system and then continue across the stars. Clara and the Doctor talk about going somewhere else but she knows he's going to stay to fight it.

He sends Clara off to save Merry, and turns to confront the planet. Clara returns Merry to the viewing room. Merry wants to help, so she stands and begins singing a new song. The Doctor smiles, and begins to tell a story to the Old God, a story about the people singing to him, and about the things that the Doctor is and knows. His intention is to overwhelm it with his life experience. The planet begins to recede. The Doctor slumps to the ground.

The entity eats but swirls back again. Clara takes the moped back. She asks if it's still hungry, then feeds it the most important [[leaf]] in [[human]] history, which is full of her mother's lost life, a whole future that never happened. The entity feeds on the infinite possibilities represented by the leaf. The Doctor, reviving, declares that he must be full, as infinity is too much, even for his appetite. The planet recedes again, this time seemingly asleep for good.

The Doctor returns Clara to her home. She realises that she'd seen him at her mother's grave. He confesses that she reminds him of someone he knew, someone who died. He gives her back [[Ellie Oswald|her mother]]'s [[ring]], saying the people that she had saved wanted her to have it back. She leaves [[the TARDIS]].

== Cast ==
* [[Eleventh Doctor|The Doctor]] - [[Matt Smith]]
* [[Clara Oswin Oswald|Clara Oswald]] - [[Jenna-Louise Coleman]]
* [[Dave Oswald|Dave]] - [[Michael Dixon]]
* [[Ellie Oswald|Ellie]] - [[Nicola Sian]]
* [[Merry Gejelh|Merry]] - [[Emilia Jones]]
* [[The Chorister (The Rings of Akhaten)|The Chorister]] - [[Chris Anderson]]
* [[Mummy (The Rings of Akhaten)|The Mummy]] - [[Aidan Cook]]
* [[Dor'een]] - [[Karl Greenwood]]

== References ==
=== Alien species ===
* At the market, the Doctor recognises some alien species: [[Pan-Babylonian]]s, a [[Lugaleracush]], [[Lucanian]]s, a [[Hooloovoo]], a [[Terraberserker]] of the [[Cadonian Belt]] and an [[Ultramancer]].
* One of the alien species at the market appears to be related to the [[Hoix]]; it also has a bubbling breathing contraption like a [[Hath]] and fronds like an [[Ood]].

=== Food ===
* Clara tries out an "[[Exotic fruit (The Rings of Akhaten)|exotic fruit of some description]]", and does not like it. The Doctor also eats one.
* The Doctor raves about the quality of [[scone]]s from the [[Lake District]].

=== Cultural references from the real world ===
* The Doctor references {{wi|The Walrus and The Carpenter}} by Lewis Carroll when he tells Merry how the elements came together to form "shoes, and ships, and sealing-wax, cabbages, and kings".
* The Doctor says, "Home again, home again, jiggedy jig" when they return home, which is part of a famous nursery rhyme known as "{{w|To market, to market}}". 
* The Hooloovoo is a 'very intelligent shade of blue' in {{w|Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy}}.

=== Individuals ===
* Clara tells [[Merry]] that she hated history.
* [[The Mummy]] is also referred to as "Grandfather".
=== Places ===
* Continuing the series 7b "[[Cumbria]]n agenda", positive reference is made to the [[Lake District]].

=== The Doctor ===
* The [[Eleventh Doctor]] tells Clara that he's been to [[Akhaten]] with [[Susan Foreman|his granddaughter]] before.
* The Doctor tells Clara that the one thing she needs to know about him, "aside from [[The Doctor's TARDIS|the blue box]] and [[Binary vascular system|the two hearts]]", is that he doesn't walk away. He later clarifies that, if he's holding onto something precious he will run away until out of the shadow of danger.
* Clara mentions the Doctor being [[The Doctor's age|1,000 years old]].
* The Doctor indicates that his [[sonic screwdriver]] is the only thing he has on him that has sentimental value. He doesn't want to give it up as currency as it "comes in handy".

== Story notes ==
* Unlike the previous episodes of Series 7, this episode does not introduce a new variation of the Doctor Who logo.
* This is the first episode since her [[The Angels Take Manhattan (TV story)|departure]] that does not have [[Amy Pond]] referenced and inadvertently affecting the plot or story. The word 'Pond' was what got the Doctor to come out of retirement in [[TV]]: ''[[The Snowmen (TV story)|The Snowmen]]'' and an image on the cover of the book she wrote, [[Summer Falls]], became a manifestation for a [[Spoonhead]] in [[TV]]: ''[[The Bells of Saint John (TV story)|The Bells of Saint John]]''
* The basic plot has commonality with the ''[[Doctor Who Magazine]]]'' comic story, ''[[Thinktwice (comic story)|Thinktwice]]''.  As in this story, the [[Tenth Doctor]] in ''Thinktwice'' fights an enemy that takes memories, and he proposes to defeat that enemy, the [[Memeovax]], by "overloading it" with his own memories. 
* This is the first episode in ''Doctor Who'' history to have a musical theme. 

=== Rumours ===

* The Doctor would [[regenerate]] or give away his regenerations. ''This turned out to be false. The golden light the Doctor was connected with was his memories, not regeneration energy.''
 
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=== Production errors ===
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* The crack on the glass case containing the mummy disappears and reappears between shots.
* The leaf that Clara has in this episode appears to be shaped differently, possibly even having come from a different type of [[tree]] than the leaf shown in the episode's pre-credit sequence.
* When the Doctor and Clara are done observing the rings of Akhaten, and then go back into the TARDIS, the TARDIS sound is heard before they have walked in.
* When Clara tastes the exotic fruit, it is rather obvious that Jenna Louise-Coleman is simply touching the prop to her mouth, not actually eating it.
* Just before the wipe from the scene, in which Clara tells the Doctor to bring her somewhere awesome, to the scene where the Doctor brings Clara to the Rings of Akhaten, Matt Smith accidentally tears open a control panel.
* Just before Clara gets onto the moped to rescue the Doctor, and just after the flash back in which the Doctor says "We don't walk away," the scene cuts to the Doctor doubling over in pain. All though this does not appear in the closed captioning, the Doctor can be heard mumbling "What more can you want?" The music and sound effects cover this up, and it appears that the producers may have tried to erase this dialogue in post production. The volume must be turned on extremely high in order to hear this remark.
* There are numerous instances in the episode where extras wearing dressed as aliens had little or no make-up around the eyes, making the masks obviously look like masks.
* When The Vigil throw Clara into the wall, the wall moves when her back collides with it.

== Continuity ==
* The [[Eleventh Doctor]] wears [[Amy Pond|Amy]]'s reading [[glasses]]. ([[TV]]: ''[[The Angels Take Manhattan]]'', ''[[The Snowmen]]'', ''[[The Bells of Saint John]]'')
* Clara's [[book]], ''[[101 Places to See]]'', used to belong to [[Ellie Oswald|her mother]]. ([[WC]]: ''[[The Bells of Saint John: A Prequel (webcast)|The Bells of Saint John: A Prequel]]'', [[TV]]: ''[[The Bells of Saint John]]'')
*The Doctor has faced a sentient celestial body before (the previous one was a [[star]]), although he implied that he'd never faced one so big. ([[TV]]: ''[[42 (TV story)|42]]'')
* The Doctor mentions the [[Last Great Time War]] and the destruction of the Time Lords. ([[TV]]: ''[[The End of Time (TV story)|The End of Time]]'')
* The Doctor mentions bringing [[Susan Foreman|his granddaughter]] to Akhaten at some point in time, though she is not mentioned by name. This is the first explicit mention of Susan Foreman in the revived series. ([[TV]]: ''[[An Unearthly Child (TV story)|An Unearthly Child]]'')
* Clara tries to open the TARDIS without a key. When it won't open, she says that the TARDIS doesn't seem to like her, an issue that former companions [[Jack Harkness]] and [[Charlotte Pollard]] had. ([[TV]]: ''[[Utopia (TV story)|Utopia]]'', [[AUDIO]]: ''[[The Condemned]]'') 
* The Doctor talks about seeing the beginning of time, ([[TV]]: ''[[Castrovalva (TV story)|Castrovalva]]'') living to see time run out, ([[TV]]: ''[[Utopia (TV story)|Utopia]]'', ''[[The Big Bang (TV story)|The Big Bang]]'') and being in universes where the laws of physics were devised by a madman. ([[TV]]: ''[[The Celestial Toymaker (TV story)|The Celestial Toymaker]]'', ''[[The Mind Robber (TV story)|The Mind Robber]]'', ''[[The Three Doctors (TV story)|The Three Doctors]]'', ''[[The Doctor's Wife (TV story)|The Doctor's Wife]]'', [[AUDIO]]: ''[[Gods and Monsters (audio story)|Gods and Monsters]]'', ''[[The Next Life (audio story)|The Next Life]]'') He also mentions knowing [[The Question|knowledge that must never be told]]. ([[TV]]: ''[[The Wedding of River Song (TV story)|The Wedding of River Song]]'')
* [[Ambassadors from the City State of Binding Light|A native of the City State of Binding Light]] is seen among the crowd at the [[Festival of Offerings]]. ([[TV]]: ''[[The End of the World (TV story)|The End of the World]]'')
* Clara jokingly refers to the [[sonic screwdriver]] as a "spanner". [[Martha Jones]] previously asked the [[Tenth Doctor]] whether he had a "[[laser spanner]]", and he claimed it had been stolen from him by [[Emmeline Pankhurst]]. ([[TV]]: ''[[Smith and Jones (TV story)|Smith and Jones]]'')
* The Doctor had previously attempted to save the world, but it failed and the companion successfully did it. ([[TV]]: ''[[Victory of the Daleks (TV story)|Victory of the Daleks]]'').

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