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He makes a deal with her and takes her to [[Vesh Taralesh|Vesh Taralesh’s]] [[Vesh Taralesh Emporium|emporium]] to fix both of their ships. Taralesh inspects the ship and claims it to be ‘kaputt’. She asks her employee [[Lukaku]] to fetch parts for Garundel’s ship. Jenny enters her ship to fetch her things. Meeting the other two in Taralesh’s office, where Jenny is made aware of her running bill. The two of them make Jenny an offer of a fifty thousand credit fine and an offer to a spaceport, unless there is valuable cargo in her ship. | He makes a deal with her and takes her to [[Vesh Taralesh|Vesh Taralesh’s]] [[Vesh Taralesh Emporium|emporium]] to fix both of their ships. Taralesh inspects the ship and claims it to be ‘kaputt’. She asks her employee [[Lukaku]] to fetch parts for Garundel’s ship. Jenny enters her ship to fetch her things. Meeting the other two in Taralesh’s office, where Jenny is made aware of her running bill. The two of them make Jenny an offer of a fifty thousand credit fine and an offer to a spaceport, unless there is valuable cargo in her ship. | ||
Spotting her cargo full of valuables, the rate is then reduced to twenty thousand [[ | Spotting her cargo full of valuables, the rate is then reduced to twenty thousand [[Credit|credits]]. Jenny refuses their offers to their anger. After the third time calling Jenny ‘blondie’, Jenny chokes Garundel, explaining to him that she’s about to leave in her ship. She had already noted that Taralesh was incorrectly hammering on the hull with a [[torque rotator]], which does nothing. However it does give away that the front of Garundel’s ship is reinforced for regular crashes. She also notes their overfamiliarity, as if they knew each other well. Finally, she reveals that before entering the hyperspace portal, she had run her [[proximity shield]], which had shown nothing, meaning that Garundel had used a [[subsonic pulsewave]] to purposely scramble her navicom. The same device, she notes, is sitting on Taralesh’s office shelf. Furthermore, Taralesh has a whole pile of the same ‘claim form’ and several transactions for fifty thousand credits. | ||
Jenny tells them she’s aware of their scam and discharges her [[power pack]], which causes enough of a distraction for her to leave. As she attempts to enter her ship, Lukaku is ordered to restrain her and force her to pay the bill. Jenny is taken to the crusher, which Garundel claims to be ‘nice and evidence-free’. As Jenny is given minutes to live, Garundel admits his part in the scam. Jenny tries to make Lukaku see that what they’re doing is wrong. Lukaku must do as she says due to Taralesh having previously saved her own people. Garundel makes her aware that others have been placed into the crusher before. | Jenny tells them she’s aware of their scam and discharges her [[power pack]], which causes enough of a distraction for her to leave. As she attempts to enter her ship, Lukaku is ordered to restrain her and force her to pay the bill. Jenny is taken to the crusher, which Garundel claims to be ‘nice and evidence-free’. As Jenny is given minutes to live, Garundel admits his part in the scam. Jenny tries to make Lukaku see that what they’re doing is wrong. Lukaku must do as she says due to Taralesh having previously saved her own people. Garundel makes her aware that others have been placed into the crusher before. | ||
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Jenny enters the ship. Garundel follows her [[biotrace]] and finds it familiar to him. Inside the ship, Jenny works out that the ship has [[psychic]] controls and uses a thought to lock the main door. As Garundel approaches the ship, Vesh leaves to run the next scam. Finding the door locked, he orders Lukaku to fetch the laser torch. Jenny threatens to fly the ship out of the side of the emporium leaving the other two next to a gaping hole leading into [[space]]. | Jenny enters the ship. Garundel follows her [[biotrace]] and finds it familiar to him. Inside the ship, Jenny works out that the ship has [[psychic]] controls and uses a thought to lock the main door. As Garundel approaches the ship, Vesh leaves to run the next scam. Finding the door locked, he orders Lukaku to fetch the laser torch. Jenny threatens to fly the ship out of the side of the emporium leaving the other two next to a gaping hole leading into [[space]]. | ||
Jenny asks the ship for help, which causes a [[Cryogenic cell|cryopod | Jenny asks the ship for help, which causes a [[Cryogenic cell|cryopod ]]to defrost, from which steps a [[Noah (Stolen Goods)|young man]]. Jenny introduces herself to the man who has no idea who he is. The man somehow manages to understand the ship and he successfully commands the ship to launch and leave the emporium. The man reveals that he’s been frozen for so long that he’s forgotten his past. They both realise that their lives are similar. Jenny decides to create a name for the man. Since he came from ‘nowhere’, she decides upon the name Noah. | ||
The ship receives a scrambled location and stops. Garundel and Lukaku catch up in Garundel’s ship. His new plan is to haul in the spaceship and render Jenny unconscious, as he knows now that she is a [[Time Lord]] and therefore expensive. Meanwhile, Vesh fails to impact on her target. Instead her ship powers down. Over the coms, a woman warns her that she will be detained for interrogation. | The ship receives a scrambled location and stops. Garundel and Lukaku catch up in Garundel’s ship. His new plan is to haul in the spaceship and render Jenny unconscious, as he knows now that she is a [[Time Lord]] and therefore expensive. Meanwhile, Vesh fails to impact on her target. Instead her ship powers down. Over the coms, a woman warns her that she will be detained for interrogation. | ||
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* Much like the TARDIS, [[Noah (Stolen Goods)|Noah's]] '[[Ghost ship (Stolen Goods)|ghost ship]]' is controlled by [[telepathy]]. Jenny uses thought to connect with the ship and instruct it on what to do, although Noah is better at this. ([[TV]]: ''[[Listen (TV story)|Listen]]'' et al) | * Much like the TARDIS, [[Noah (Stolen Goods)|Noah's]] '[[Ghost ship (Stolen Goods)|ghost ship]]' is controlled by [[telepathy]]. Jenny uses thought to connect with the ship and instruct it on what to do, although Noah is better at this. ([[TV]]: ''[[Listen (TV story)|Listen]]'' et al) | ||
* Garundel knows that the Time Lords were wiped out. ([[TV]]: ''[[The End of the World (TV story)|The End of the World]]'') | * Garundel knows that the Time Lords were wiped out. ([[TV]]: ''[[The End of the World (TV story)|The End of the World]]'') | ||
* Garundel requires time travel, and when asked how this is obtainable, he states that he knows a guy who knows a [[Dorium Maldovar|blue guy]] who owns a [[The Maldovarium|bar]]. ([[TV]]: ''[[The Pandorica Opens (TV story)|The Pandorica Opens]]'' et al) | * Garundel requires time travel, and when asked how this is obtainable, he states that he knows a guy who knows a [[Dorium Maldovar|blue guy]] who owns a [[The Maldovarium|bar]]. ([[TV]]: ''[[The Pandorica Opens (TV story)|The Pandorica Opens]]'' et al) | ||
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