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At the same time, Andinio has arrived in a room where Delph is held prisoner in a frame to harness his powers. Delph pleads with Andinio to see Tzim-Sha is not their Creator. However, she ignores him and powers up the temple. A beam of red light shoots out and opens a [[portal]] to Earth. The light begins enveloping the planet; when it's completely covered, it's game over for all life on it. The Doctor calls Tzim-Sha a fool; there are consequences for attempting to break the [[law]]s of the [[universe]]. Tzim-Sha simply tells the Doctor that the death of everyone on the planet she loves so much will be her consequences for interfering with his hunt. The Doctor races to stop the Ux, as Tzim-Sha tells her that its useless; even in [[exile]] he rules.
At the same time, Andinio has arrived in a room where Delph is held prisoner in a frame to harness his powers. Delph pleads with Andinio to see Tzim-Sha is not their Creator. However, she ignores him and powers up the temple. A beam of red light shoots out and opens a [[portal]] to Earth. The light begins enveloping the planet; when it's completely covered, it's game over for all life on it. The Doctor calls Tzim-Sha a fool; there are consequences for attempting to break the [[law]]s of the [[universe]]. Tzim-Sha simply tells the Doctor that the death of everyone on the planet she loves so much will be her consequences for interfering with his hunt. The Doctor races to stop the Ux, as Tzim-Sha tells her that its useless; even in [[exile]] he rules.


In Tzim-Sha's trophy room, Ryan and Graham work to free everyone. However, the SniperBots are working to get in the room. Once everyone is [[Evacuation|evacuated]], Graham tells Ryan that he has to stay behind to detonate the [[bomb]] on the door; it’s the only way to sufficiently damage the SniperBots to cover their escape. Ryan sadly parts ways with Graham. Ryan runs into the Doctor, Yaz and Paltraki; the Doctor tells the men to lead the survivors to Paltraki's ship for [[safety]]. In the meantime, Graham succeeds in taking out the SniperBots; he takes one of their [[weapon]]s to wait for Tzim-Sha.
In Tzim-Sha's trophy room, Ryan and Graham work to free everyone. However, the SniperBots are working to get in the room. Once everyone is [[Evacuation|evacuated]], Graham tells Ryan that he has to stay behind to detonate the [[bomb]] on the door; it’s the only way to sufficiently damage the SniperBots to cover their escape. Ryan sadly parts ways with Graham. Ryan runs into the Doctor, Yaz and Paltraki; the Doctor tells the men to lead the survivors to Paltraki's ship for [[safety]]. In the meantime, Graham succeeds in taking out the SniperBots; he takes one of their [[Weapon|weapons]] to wait for Tzim-Sha.


The Doctor and Yaz run to where the Ux are powering the temple. After some debate on how to stop the temple without killing the Ux, the Doctor realises that their neural balancers can be used to stop the [[Telepathic contact|telepathic connection]] to Andinio and Delph. However, it also means having to endure the psychotropic waves; Yaz decides it's worth the risk to save Earth. With blurring vision from the effects starting, both the Doctor and Yaz attach the neural balancers to the Ux, stopping the temple and releasing the Earth from its death grip. Andinio is [[outrage]]d by the Doctor stopping them from serving the Creator, but the Doctor forces the old woman to face reality; Tzim-Sha is not a god, but a [[monster]] who has been taking advantage of them for centuries. Delph, now free, tells Andinio that the Doctor is right. The Doctor further tells them that ''they'' are the Creators, because they create.
The Doctor and Yaz run to where the Ux are powering the temple. After some debate on how to stop the temple without killing the Ux, the Doctor realises that their neural balancers can be used to stop the [[Telepathic contact|telepathic connection]] to Andinio and Delph. However, it also means having to endure the psychotropic waves; Yaz decides it's worth the risk to save Earth. With blurring vision from the effects starting, both the Doctor and Yaz attach the neural balancers to the Ux, stopping the temple and releasing the Earth from its death grip. Andinio is [[Outrage|outraged]] by the Doctor stopping them from serving the Creator, but the Doctor forces the old woman to face reality; Tzim-Sha is not a god, but a [[monster]] who has been taking advantage of them for centuries. Delph, now free, tells Andinio that the Doctor is right. The Doctor further tells them that ''they'' are the Creators, because they create.


However, things soon become ''much'' worse. Because of all the strain Tzim-Sha has put on the temple, the Ux and the very laws of [[reality]], the miniature planets are beginning to lose their stability. If those crystals break, it will cause [[destruction]] beyond comprehension. However, the Doctor has an idea and summons the TARDIS to her location; she is going to hook the Ux up to the telepathic circuits, which will allow them to use the temple to send all the planets back to where they came from at the same time, restoring balance to the universe. The plan is successful, but severely draining to the Ux.
However, things soon become ''much'' worse. Because of all the strain Tzim-Sha has put on the temple, the Ux and the very laws of [[reality]], the miniature planets are beginning to lose their stability. If those crystals break, it will cause [[destruction]] beyond comprehension. However, the Doctor has an idea and summons the TARDIS to her location; she is going to hook the Ux up to the telepathic circuits, which will allow them to use the temple to send all the planets back to where they came from at the same time, restoring balance to the universe. The plan is successful, but severely draining to the Ux.


Tzim-Sha arrives in his trophy room, where Graham is waiting. Graham tells him that he had wanted to kill him for the death of his wife, but he has chosen to be the better man and not kill. Tzim-Sha calls him foolish and approaches to kill him with a deadly frozen touch. However, Ryan appears behind him and causes the Stenza to divert his attention. Graham takes the moment to shoot Tzim-Sha in the [[foot]], knocking him down. Ryan is shocked, but Graham defends that he only [[wound]]ed his foot. They tell Tzim-Sha that they sentence him to life, trapping him inside his own trophy case. They tell him as he ponders about how this went wrong, he should always remember the name Grace; her death motivated them to put him in this [[hell]]. Graham and Ryan rejoin the Doctor, who is [[pride|proud]] of Graham for being the better man. However, Graham considers that not having the will to kill someone horrible makes him [[weakness|weak]], but the Doctor counters that he is one of the [[strength|strongest]] people she knows.
Tzim-Sha arrives in his trophy room, where Graham is waiting. Graham tells him that he had wanted to kill him for the death of his wife, but he has chosen to be the better man and not kill. Tzim-Sha calls him foolish and approaches to kill him with a deadly frozen touch. However, Ryan appears behind him and causes the Stenza to divert his attention. Graham takes the moment to shoot Tzim-Sha in the [[foot]], knocking him down. Ryan is shocked, but Graham defends that he only [[wound]]ed his foot. They tell Tzim-Sha that they sentence him to life, trapping him inside his own trophy case. They tell him as he ponders about how this went wrong, he should always remember the name Grace; her death motivated them to put him in this [[hell]]. Graham and Ryan rejoin the Doctor, who is [[pride|proud]] of Graham for being the better man. However, Graham considers that not having the will to kill someone horrible makes him [[weakness|weak]], but the Doctor counters that he is one of the [[strength|strong]]est people she knows.


The Doctor takes the Ux to Paltraki's ship, where Delph decides the Ux must be part of the [[civilisation]]s of the universe. It was because of their [[isolation]] on this planet that they mistook a monster like Tzim-Sha for a god. Andinio [[agreement|agrees]] with Delph, explaining that they've locked Tzim-Sha's temple and no-one will be able to get to him. As everyone boards the TARDIS, the Doctor gives a parting message to travel [[hope]]fully.
The Doctor takes the Ux to Paltraki's ship, where Delph decides the Ux must be part of the [[civilisation]]s of the universe. It was because of their [[isolation]] on this planet that they mistook a monster like Tzim-Sha for a god. Andinio [[agreement|agrees]] with Delph, explaining that they've locked Tzim-Sha's temple and no-one will be able to get to him. As everyone boards the TARDIS, the Doctor gives a parting message to travel [[hope]]fully.
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