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:*Edited Morbius' brain section but will not delete objection till user who entered it deems it worthy.--[[User:Skittles the hog|Skittles the hog]] 15:46, 5 August 2008 (UTC) | :*Edited Morbius' brain section but will not delete objection till user who entered it deems it worthy.--[[User:Skittles the hog|Skittles the hog]] 15:46, 5 August 2008 (UTC) | ||
::*Morbius's brain section is now perhaps not improved and several other elements of the article not much better off. There are incidents of present tense (is rather than was, all in universe articles need to be past tense). Bullet points used with biographical articles such as this are ''bad'' writing as it's basically listing rather than working the information into a sentence. Some of the editing has removed the overly wordy elements, but other have been lost, the in-universe use of the Doctor's chop suey quote, much of the detail regarding mindbending and other info regarding the braincase (was it ever stated in the dialogue that it was plastic?). --[[User:Tangerineduel|Tangerineduel]] 15:43, 6 August 2008 (UTC) | ::*Morbius's brain section is now perhaps not improved and several other elements of the article not much better off. There are incidents of present tense (is rather than was, all in universe articles need to be past tense). Bullet points used with biographical articles such as this are ''bad'' writing as it's basically listing rather than working the information into a sentence. Some of the editing has removed the overly wordy elements, but other have been lost, the in-universe use of the Doctor's chop suey quote, much of the detail regarding mindbending and other info regarding the braincase (was it ever stated in the dialogue that it was plastic?). --[[User:Tangerineduel|Tangerineduel]] 15:43, 6 August 2008 (UTC) | ||
::**No I dont think it was called plastic, oops, sorry I thought I had made it more to your liking, oh well.--[[User:Skittles the hog|Skittles the hog]] 10:07, 7 August 2008 (UTC) | |||
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