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-}}'''{{PAGENAME}}''' was a mineral, used as a component in the fuel that blasts a ship into hyperspace. It was discovered that the more elesium ore in the fuel, the more efficient is your flying, this dropped the risk ratio by 6-7%, and therefore about 40 million fewer human pioneers get splattered every week. [[Harmonious 14 Zink]] was hoping to claim the mining rights of the ore on [[Erratoon]], before the discovery so he could have a good fotune from it. ([[AUDIO]]: ''[[The Prisoner's Dilemma (audio story)|The Prisoner's Dilemma]]'')
+}}'''{{PAGENAME}}''' was a mineral, used as a component in the fuel that blasted a ship into [[hyperspace]]. Fuel with a higher percentage of elesium ore was more efficient and safer.  Studies showed that the risk ratio of pilots using elesium-enriched feud dropped by 6-7%, and therefore about 40 million fewer human pioneers got splattered every week.
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+[[Harmonious 14 Zink]] wanted to claim general mining rights on [[Erratoon]], before proof was found of any veins of elesium.  Had he been successful in this endeavour, his return on investment would have been significantly increased. ([[AUDIO]]: ''[[The Prisoner's Dilemma (audio story)|The Prisoner's Dilemma]]'')
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