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 #<s>[[User:Dark Lord Xander|Dark Lord Xander]] 13:25, 26 July 2008 (UTC) Gallery seems to make article seem very messy suggest move to bottom of page or page of its own.</s>
 # [[User:Azes13|Azes13]] 16:22, 26 July 2008 (UTC) The headings of the page are messy and disorganised, quotes are against the Manual of Style, the History section needs to be cleaned up or shortened and the Rank section is out-of-universe.
-#[[User:Tangerineduel|Tangerineduel]] 17:53, 28 July 2008 (UTC) The gallery doesn't really fit, it sits quite badly within the article. It's also lacking in several qualities, Sontaran history (all about ''why'' the clones look different), society (different Sontarans and other society things was in a recent Ninth or Tenth Doctor DWM comic). The ranks shouldn't have things like (spin-off) or (novels only) notes in them, the behind the scenes information should be kept to minimum considering how little information there is.
-:*Marking the gallery as a gallery is just as bad as having it in the middle of the article. I'd suggest perhaps an incorporation into the history part of the article (and getting rid of 'Unknown commander' from the SJA: Series 2, which is a bit vague). --[[User:Tangerineduel|Tangerineduel]] 13:48, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
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