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Leaving [[World War II]] behind, the [[Ninth Doctor]], [[Rose Tyler|Rose]] and Captain [[Jack Harkness|Jack]] discover that [[Time Lord]] technology, lost in the wake of [[Last Great Time War|the Time War]], is being sold on the intergalactic black market! | Leaving [[World War II]] behind, the [[Ninth Doctor]], [[Rose Tyler|Rose]] and Captain [[Jack Harkness|Jack]] discover that [[Time Lord]] technology, lost in the wake of [[Last Great Time War|the Time War]], is being sold on the intergalactic black market! | ||
Now the threat of a NEW temporal war brews on the horizon. Can the Doctor stop history repeating itself? | Now the threat of a NEW temporal war brews on the horizon. Can the Doctor stop history repeating itself? | ||
== Plot == | == Plot == | ||
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=== Part two === | === Part two === | ||
As Rose falls through the Vortex, the Doctor tries to materialise the TARDIS around her, but only her jacket appears within. Meanwhile, Rose wakes up next to a squid-like alien. The Doctor refuses to believe she is dead, and uses the TARDIS to track the DNA from her jacket. However, the coordinates it finds would place her in the blast radius of a nascent [[supernova]] [[Beart-54]] in the [[Beart system]]. Jack materialises the TARDIS on a nearby planetoid, [[Fluren's World]]. They find the sun's nova is being held back by a [[time bubble]], technology that hasn't existed since the [[Last Great Time War|Time War]]. | As Rose falls through the Vortex, the Doctor tries to materialise the TARDIS around her, but only her jacket appears within. Meanwhile, Rose wakes up next to a squid-like alien. The Doctor refuses to believe she is dead, and uses the TARDIS to track the DNA from her jacket. However, the coordinates it finds would place her in the blast radius of a nascent [[supernova]] [[Beart-54]] in the [[Beart system]]. Jack materialises the TARDIS on a nearby planetoid, [[Fluren's World]]. They find the sun's nova is being held back by a [[time bubble]], technology that hasn't existed since the [[Last Great Time War|Time War]]. | ||
Jack takes the Doctor to the [[Fluren Temporal Bazaar]], a [[black market]] for time weapons. There, they find Rose, who has been stuck there for four days. She fell through the Vortex, and the tachyon inhibitor protected her from the [[time wind]]s. [[Glom]], the squid alien, picked her up with his ship's [[Time scoop|time scoops]]. The Doctor recognises one of Glom's weapons, and realises they're all from [[Gallifrey]]. He flips Glom's table in anger, and steps up to make an announcement. He's offering his [[Time Lord]] mind for sale, in an attempt to attract the Unon. Instead, the Lect appear. | Jack takes the Doctor to the [[Fluren Temporal Bazaar]], a [[black market]] for time weapons. There, they find Rose, who has been stuck there for four days. She fell through the Vortex, and the tachyon inhibitor protected her from the [[time wind]]s. [[Glom]], the squid alien, picked her up with his ship's [[Time scoop|time scoops]]. The Doctor recognises one of Glom's weapons, and realises they're all from [[Gallifrey]]. He flips Glom's table in anger, and steps up to make an announcement. He's offering his [[Time Lord]] mind for sale, in an attempt to attract the Unon. Instead, the Lect appear. | ||
=== Part three === | === Part three === | ||
The Doctor tries to open the Lect robotic armour with his screwdriver to see who he is dealing with, but he is not quick enough. While Jack and the Doctor wrestle with the Lect, the Unon arrive and engage the Lect in a fight without so much as a warning. | The Doctor tries to open the Lect robotic armour with his screwdriver to see who he is dealing with, but he is not quick enough. While Jack and the Doctor wrestle with the Lect, the Unon arrive and engage the Lect in a fight without so much as a warning. | ||
The ensuing chaotic battle between the Lect, the Unon and the security guards of the Fluren Temporal Bazaar triggers the emergency protocol. The time bubble that have been keeping the supernova in check will disperse in ten minutes. All the traders, including Glom, hurry to leave Fluren's World. | The ensuing chaotic battle between the Lect, the Unon and the security guards of the Fluren Temporal Bazaar triggers the emergency protocol. The time bubble that have been keeping the supernova in check will disperse in ten minutes. All the traders, including Glom, hurry to leave Fluren's World. | ||
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Meanwhile Rose is being woken by the Lect and finds herself their prisoner. Her threats to them that the Doctor will sort them out die out as the Lect remind her that he was killed by the Unon. They order her to serve the Lect now, causing a furious reaction. Rose challenges them to torture her. In the face of her defiance, a Lect opens up his armoured suit to reveal a figure inside, wired to the suit and resembling an Excrothian. | Meanwhile Rose is being woken by the Lect and finds herself their prisoner. Her threats to them that the Doctor will sort them out die out as the Lect remind her that he was killed by the Unon. They order her to serve the Lect now, causing a furious reaction. Rose challenges them to torture her. In the face of her defiance, a Lect opens up his armoured suit to reveal a figure inside, wired to the suit and resembling an Excrothian. | ||
In the Vortex, desperate Jack is trying to half threaten half reason with the TARDIS. Suddenly, the Doctor's face appears on one of the screens. The Doctor explains that the Unon are bringing the TARDIS to him. The TARDIS materialises in the [[Perpetual City]], which is anchored within the Vortex itself. Jack warily steps out, gun in his hand, and receives another reprimand from the Doctor, until the latter realises that Rose is not with Jack. Arnora is pessimistic about Rose's fate, Jack tries to stay optimistic while simultaneously flirting with the mother superior, and the Doctor heads for the TARDIS to save Rose no matter what, when [[Evja]], the Grand High Seer of the Unon, who has no ordinary sight but can see through time and space, explains that Rose is not on Fluren's World any longer. She is in a forbidden sector of time. The Doctor is unimpressed but another Unon, [[Borga]], blocks his way to the TARDIS. She insists that the Doctor must remain and do the will of the mother superior, accusing him of the atrocities of the Time War. The Doctor intends to have none of this. Only the intervention of Arnora prevents further escalation. | In the Vortex, desperate Jack is trying to half threaten half reason with the TARDIS. Suddenly, the Doctor's face appears on one of the screens. The Doctor explains that the Unon are bringing the TARDIS to him. The TARDIS materialises in the [[Perpetual City]], which is anchored within the Vortex itself. Jack warily steps out, gun in his hand, and receives another reprimand from the Doctor, until the latter realises that Rose is not with Jack. Arnora is pessimistic about Rose's fate, Jack tries to stay optimistic while simultaneously flirting with the mother superior, and the Doctor heads for the TARDIS to save Rose no matter what, when [[Evja]], the Grand High Seer of the Unon, who has no ordinary sight but can see through time and space, explains that Rose is not on Fluren's World any longer. She is in a forbidden sector of time. The Doctor is unimpressed but another Unon, [[Borga]], blocks his way to the TARDIS. She insists that the Doctor must remain and do the will of the mother superior, accusing him of the atrocities of the Time War. The Doctor intends to have none of this. Only the intervention of Arnora prevents further escalation. | ||
She explains that before the Time War the Unon were explorers, scientists. The war destroyed their civilisation and nearly destroyed theme species itself. But it was the aftermath of the war that was more important. The demise of both Time Lords and [[Dalek]]s created a vacuum of power that many races wanted to fill, races like [[Cyberman|Cybermen]] and [[Sontaran]]s. The Unon seers saw what was coming, so the Unon decided to prevent further chaos. They collected the detritus left over from the Time War and turned it into tools for peace, including the Perpetual City they are in. The Unon have no ambition to control time, but they prevent others from doing so. | She explains that before the Time War the Unon were explorers, scientists. The war destroyed their civilisation and nearly destroyed theme species itself. But it was the aftermath of the war that was more important. The demise of both Time Lords and [[Dalek]]s created a vacuum of power that many races wanted to fill, races like [[Cyberman|Cybermen]] and [[Sontaran]]s. The Unon seers saw what was coming, so the Unon decided to prevent further chaos. They collected the detritus left over from the Time War and turned it into tools for peace, including the Perpetual City they are in. The Unon have no ambition to control time, but they prevent others from doing so. | ||
The Doctor asks if the Lect are one of those trying to cease control and learns that Borga despises them. Arnora intercedes once again before the tempers could flare. She saw in his mind the sacrifice the Doctor made for the good of the universe. She knows he's a good man. She proposes an alliance. | The Doctor asks if the Lect are one of those trying to cease control and learns that Borga despises them. Arnora intercedes once again before the tempers could flare. She saw in his mind the sacrifice the Doctor made for the good of the universe. She knows he's a good man. She proposes an alliance. | ||
The Doctor, however, is determined to save Rose first. But Arnora shows him a planet, [[Traxis]], a world with more than seven billion inhabitants. A fracture in time caused by the Time War resulted in the past, present and future coexisting and creating chaos. If left unchecked, this time fissure would spread to the whole sector with catastrophic consequences. She shows him a temporal stabiliser of Gallifreyan make that could stitch time back together. She thinks that the Doctor is best qualified to put it to the good use. | The Doctor, however, is determined to save Rose first. But Arnora shows him a planet, [[Traxis]], a world with more than seven billion inhabitants. A fracture in time caused by the Time War resulted in the past, present and future coexisting and creating chaos. If left unchecked, this time fissure would spread to the whole sector with catastrophic consequences. She shows him a temporal stabiliser of Gallifreyan make that could stitch time back together. She thinks that the Doctor is best qualified to put it to the good use. | ||
As the Doctor reaches for the stabiliser, he, Jack and Borga are suddenly transported to Traxis. The Doctor is not amused but resigns to do the job first and make a row later. The place is a mess with dinosaurs, neanderthals and killer robots competing for the title of the deadliest menace. While Jack and Borga cover his back, the Doctor detects the fault line smack under a mammoth. Briefly regretting not having learned Mammoth and rescued by Borga from being trampled over, the Doctor activates the device. | As the Doctor reaches for the stabiliser, he, Jack and Borga are suddenly transported to Traxis. The Doctor is not amused but resigns to do the job first and make a row later. The place is a mess with dinosaurs, neanderthals and killer robots competing for the title of the deadliest menace. While Jack and Borga cover his back, the Doctor detects the fault line smack under a mammoth. Briefly regretting not having learned Mammoth and rescued by Borga from being trampled over, the Doctor activates the device. | ||
Just as the device does its magic, the Doctor, Jack and Borga find themselves back in the Perpetual City. Arnora shows them the peaceful Traxis. She explains that this was the last test to make sure of the Doctor's motives. Finally, a mutual understanding of the common goals starts to emerge between the Doctor and Arnora. | Just as the device does its magic, the Doctor, Jack and Borga find themselves back in the Perpetual City. Arnora shows them the peaceful Traxis. She explains that this was the last test to make sure of the Doctor's motives. Finally, a mutual understanding of the common goals starts to emerge between the Doctor and Arnora. | ||
At his moment, the vortex manipulator on Jack's wrist beeps and shows a hologram of Rose's head. She seems distressed and says that she has escaped from the Lect. She needs Jack's co-ordinates to use the Lect's time scoop. Arnora is not quick enough to stop Jack from sending the data. Immediately a flotilla of Lect ships materialises above them. Neither Jack nor the Doctor can believe that Rose would betray them like this when Rose appears in front of them, holding a huge Lect-made gun and flanked on both sides by two Lect towering over her. | At his moment, the vortex manipulator on Jack's wrist beeps and shows a hologram of Rose's head. She seems distressed and says that she has escaped from the Lect. She needs Jack's co-ordinates to use the Lect's time scoop. Arnora is not quick enough to stop Jack from sending the data. Immediately a flotilla of Lect ships materialises above them. Neither Jack nor the Doctor can believe that Rose would betray them like this when Rose appears in front of them, holding a huge Lect-made gun and flanked on both sides by two Lect towering over her. | ||
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With the Unon protecting the Doctor and the Lect protecting their newly found ally, Rose shoots the Doctor, while asking herself if he would ever forgive her. She gives the signal to the Lect to transmat her and the Doctor away, leaving the flabbergasted Jack behind. Although he continues fighting the Lect alongside the Unon, Evja dissolves him with a blast of energy. | With the Unon protecting the Doctor and the Lect protecting their newly found ally, Rose shoots the Doctor, while asking herself if he would ever forgive her. She gives the signal to the Lect to transmat her and the Doctor away, leaving the flabbergasted Jack behind. Although he continues fighting the Lect alongside the Unon, Evja dissolves him with a blast of energy. | ||
The Doctor comes to on the [[Lect command ship]], understandably mad at Rose. She explains that they needed to plant a tracker on him for the Lect transmat to work. She did not know this would knock him out. Using Lect equipment, they try to locate Jack but he cannot be found on the Perpetual City. A Lect approaches the Doctor to discuss tactics and opens up the armoured suit to reveal a creature inside, a creature the Doctor clearly recognises. | The Doctor comes to on the [[Lect command ship]], understandably mad at Rose. She explains that they needed to plant a tracker on him for the Lect transmat to work. She did not know this would knock him out. Using Lect equipment, they try to locate Jack but he cannot be found on the Perpetual City. A Lect approaches the Doctor to discuss tactics and opens up the armoured suit to reveal a creature inside, a creature the Doctor clearly recognises. | ||
Jack finds himself in the same void, where the Doctor first met Arnora. Evja and Borga appear and explain that Jack is kept as an insurance. Evja thinks that involving the Doctor and his people was a mistake. She saw Jack's future and it should not be allowed. | Jack finds himself in the same void, where the Doctor first met Arnora. Evja and Borga appear and explain that Jack is kept as an insurance. Evja thinks that involving the Doctor and his people was a mistake. She saw Jack's future and it should not be allowed. | ||
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The Doctor explains that the horrible weapon <span>is an [[entropy engine]], a Dalek-made weapon from the Time War. It can age a whole planet or a solar system to dust within minutes. What's worse, the entropy engine is behind impenetrable flux shields. The Doctor realises that only one thing can get past them, his TARDIS. Having decided to help Marleth in destroying the entropy engine, the Doctor loses no time. He crashes the Lect command ship into the perpetual city to create a diversion, while instructing the Lect to leave the ship and transmat him, Rose and Marleth near the TARDIS. They manage to get past the Unon guards, run into the TARDIS and materialise within the entropy engine. Then the Doctor leaves the rest to Marleth, who is going to turn the entropy engine on itself. As Marleth begins priming the engine, they are surrounded by the Unon, who shoot Marleth. </span> | The Doctor explains that the horrible weapon <span>is an [[entropy engine]], a Dalek-made weapon from the Time War. It can age a whole planet or a solar system to dust within minutes. What's worse, the entropy engine is behind impenetrable flux shields. The Doctor realises that only one thing can get past them, his TARDIS. Having decided to help Marleth in destroying the entropy engine, the Doctor loses no time. He crashes the Lect command ship into the perpetual city to create a diversion, while instructing the Lect to leave the ship and transmat him, Rose and Marleth near the TARDIS. They manage to get past the Unon guards, run into the TARDIS and materialise within the entropy engine. Then the Doctor leaves the rest to Marleth, who is going to turn the entropy engine on itself. As Marleth begins priming the engine, they are surrounded by the Unon, who shoot Marleth. </span> | ||
With Marleth down, the Doctor threatens to ignite the entropy engine himself if Arnora does not stand down. She does not believe he is capable. But he's already done it once. The Unon have become just like the Time Lords, paranoid, corrupt and tyrannical. | With Marleth down, the Doctor threatens to ignite the entropy engine himself if Arnora does not stand down. She does not believe he is capable. But he's already done it once. The Unon have become just like the Time Lords, paranoid, corrupt and tyrannical. | ||
In the void, <span>Evja explains why she thinks the Doctor is dangerous. She sees destruction following him wherever he goes. </span>Jack asks Evja to look now at the future without the Doctor, with only the Unon in charge. | In the void, <span>Evja explains why she thinks the Doctor is dangerous. She sees destruction following him wherever he goes. </span>Jack asks Evja to look now at the future without the Doctor, with only the Unon in charge. | ||
As an Unon sneaks behind the Doctor to deal a fatal blow, he is preempted by Evja, who is carrying Jack on her back. She implores Arnora to listen to the Doctor because she saw their own future. Arnora disagrees. But Marleth, in a last effort before his death, manages to kill Arnora and is immediately killed by the Unon. The Doctor says that it is already too late and there is no way to disperse the energy in time. Evja is ready to accept her fate and resigns to disappear along with the Perpetual City. | As an Unon sneaks behind the Doctor to deal a fatal blow, he is preempted by Evja, who is carrying Jack on her back. She implores Arnora to listen to the Doctor because she saw their own future. Arnora disagrees. But Marleth, in a last effort before his death, manages to kill Arnora and is immediately killed by the Unon. The Doctor says that it is already too late and there is no way to disperse the energy in time. Evja is ready to accept her fate and resigns to disappear along with the Perpetual City. | ||
Fortunately, the Doctor manages to save her and some of the Unon by escaping in the TARDIS. He brings them to a planet off the beaten track, with no technology and makes Evja promise to leave the universe to look after itself. | Fortunately, the Doctor manages to save her and some of the Unon by escaping in the TARDIS. He brings them to a planet off the beaten track, with no technology and makes Evja promise to leave the universe to look after itself. | ||
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* "Colonel Sanders's secret ingredient" is a reference to the founder of KFC. | * "Colonel Sanders's secret ingredient" is a reference to the founder of KFC. | ||
* "Champion the Wonder Horse" is a reference to a horse character from film and movies. | * "Champion the Wonder Horse" is a reference to a horse character from film and movies. | ||
* Rose says that a tracker was needed to beam the Doctor up. The phrase "beam you up" is a reference to ''[[Star Trek]]''. | * Rose says that a tracker was needed to beam the Doctor up. The phrase "beam you up" is a reference to ''[[Star Trek]]''. | ||
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