The Waters of Mars (TV story): Difference between revisions

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*The news article on Adelaide claims that she was born in 1999 and yet was also 10 when her parents died in 2008. (''Newspapers, or family's writing obituaries, often blur the specific ages - e.g., 9 years, 9 months is rounded up to 10 years'')
*The news article on Adelaide claims that she was born in 1999 and yet was also 10 when her parents died in 2008. (''Newspapers, or family's writing obituaries, often blur the specific ages - e.g., 9 years, 9 months is rounded up to 10 years'')


*The news article on the mission refers to "Dr Tarak Ital MD." It would be correct to write either the "Dr" or the "MD," but both at once is redundant and grammatically incorrect. Ital's obituary also misspells "Havana". ''It is correct if the person has both an MD and a PhD.''
*The news article on the mission refers to "Dr Tarak Ital MD." It would be correct to write either the "Dr" or the "MD," but both at once is redundant and grammatically incorrect. Ital's obituary also misspells "Havana". ''(It is correct if the person has both an MD and a PhD.)''


*The article on Susie Fontana Brooke's first "Faster then Light" flight lists Adelaide's team at the end as hers.
*The article on Susie Fontana Brooke's first "Faster then Light" flight lists Adelaide's team at the end as hers.
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