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== Plot == | == Plot == | ||
=== Part one === | === Part one === | ||
An Australian | An [[Mike Bretherton|Australian reporter]] speaks on the phone with someone in his apartment. Suddenly | ||
reporter speaks on the phone with someone in his apartment. Suddenly | |||
he hears a strange noise and the power goes off in his apartment. He | he hears a strange noise and the power goes off in his apartment. He | ||
goes to investigate and ends up being attacked by a strange creature. | goes to investigate and ends up being attacked by a strange creature. | ||
Nyssa interrupts the | [[Nyssa]] interrupts the | ||
Doctor watching cricket. They are staying in a hot villa just a bit | [[Fifth Doctor|Doctor]] watching cricket. They are staying in a hot villa just a bit | ||
of a ways from Brisbane. They agree that it is nice to finally be | of a ways from [[Brisbane]]. They agree that it is nice to finally be | ||
someplace where they can have a relaxing vacation, only to be | someplace where they can have a relaxing vacation, only to be | ||
interrupted by Tegan. She runs into the room exclaiming that her | interrupted by [[Tegan Jovanka|Tegan]]. She runs into the room exclaiming that her | ||
friend from high school, Mike Bretherton, has gone missing. He is a | friend from high school, Mike Bretherton, has gone missing. He is a | ||
reporter who was always investigating top stories, according to | reporter who was always investigating top stories, according to | ||
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that they help Tegan investigate his disappearance. | that they help Tegan investigate his disappearance. | ||
They take the TARDIS | They take the [[TARDIS]] | ||
to Mike’s apartment which they find is extremely messy. They find | to Mike’s apartment which they find is extremely messy. They find | ||
articles that Mike has gathered surrounding strange disappearances. | articles that Mike has gathered surrounding strange disappearances. | ||
Tegan reads from the news article about Mike’s disappearance that | Tegan reads from the news article about Mike’s disappearance that | ||
his last known contact had mentioned him | his last known contact had mentioned him explaining that he saw a | ||
meteor above his apartment before he disappeared. | meteor above his apartment before he disappeared. | ||
Inside the | Inside the TARDIS, | ||
the Doctor retrieves an ionograph that he says can help them. They | the Doctor retrieves an ionograph that he says can help them. They | ||
use it to find the diminishing ion trail of a spacepod, which the Doctor dubs "a space eddy" that most | use it to find the diminishing ion trail of a spacepod, which the Doctor dubs "a space eddy" that most | ||
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They find that the | They find that the | ||
“space eddy” as the Doctor refers to the spacepod as has returned | “space eddy” as the Doctor refers to the spacepod as has returned | ||
to its place of origin, Luparis. The Doctor is puzzled about this. | to its place of origin, [[Luparis]]. The Doctor is puzzled about this. | ||
This is because Luparis, the Doctor explains to a confused Tegan, is | This is because Luparis, the Doctor explains to a confused Tegan, is | ||
an uninhabited planet with a climate similar to a tropical paradise. | an uninhabited planet with a climate similar to a tropical paradise. | ||
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Meanwhile on the | Meanwhile on the | ||
planet Luparis a man named Lord Jezzavar makes his way through the | planet Luparis a man named [[Jezzavar|Lord Jezzavar]] makes his way through the | ||
streets on horseback as people yell insults at him. He arrives at a | streets on horseback as people yell insults at him. He arrives at a | ||
palace where he is greeted by Lord Zellenger. They argue about the | palace where he is greeted by Lord [[Zellenger]]. They argue about the | ||
unrest going on in the city as Zellenger inquires as to why Jezzavar | unrest going on in the city as Zellenger inquires as to why Jezzavar | ||
has 12 guards armed with rapiers following him wherever he goes, even | has 12 guards armed with rapiers following him wherever he goes, even | ||
if it’s just to see their wife, the | if it’s just to see their wife, the[[Zafira| Queen Zafira.]] They continue on with | ||
their business. | their business. | ||
The TARDIS crew | The TARDIS crew | ||
arrive on Luparis and find it is not at all what they expected, as it | arrive on Luparis and find it is not at all what they expected, as it | ||
is colder and resembles Tudor earth. Tegan even notes the uncanny | is colder and resembles [[Tudor]] earth. Tegan even notes the uncanny | ||
resemblance of the London bridge, visible from their landing spot. | resemblance of the London bridge, visible from their landing spot. | ||
Tegan runs off and the Doctor and Nyssa are forced to follow. | Tegan runs off and the Doctor and Nyssa are forced to follow. | ||
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chambers for them to stay in close to her own quarters and has her | chambers for them to stay in close to her own quarters and has her | ||
guards escort them there. Talking privately with Jezzavar and | guards escort them there. Talking privately with Jezzavar and | ||
Astorius, she comments that the Doctor has the air of a warrior, and | [[Astorius]], she comments that the Doctor has the air of a warrior, and | ||
when asked whether she would like them to get rid of him, she insists | when asked whether she would like them to get rid of him, she insists | ||
that they may need him, as there are times when powerful men are | that they may need him, as there are times when powerful men are | ||
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The Queen explains | The Queen explains | ||
that she built the city herself. She asks where he comes from and he | that she built the city herself. She asks where he comes from and he | ||
tells her that he is a Timelord from the planet Gallifrey in the | tells her that he is a [[Timelord]] from the planet [[Gallifrey]] in the | ||
constellation of | constellation of [[Kasterborous]]. The Doctor asks her about the | ||
hexahedron and comments that the mountains in the distance looked | hexahedron and comments that the mountains in the distance looked | ||
well-sculpted. She says that his questions should be directed at | well-sculpted. She says that his questions should be directed at | ||
Astorius, her minister of science. The Doctor requests an audience | Astorius, her minister of [[science]]. The Doctor requests an audience | ||
with him later which she consents to. She changes the subject to the | with him later which she consents to. She changes the subject to the | ||
Doctor, however, explaining that she is quite interested in him, | Doctor, however, explaining that she is quite interested in him, | ||
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yet also a man of science and wide travelling but also a man who has | yet also a man of science and wide travelling but also a man who has | ||
the courage to be a maverick. She asks him for his opinion of her and | the courage to be a maverick. She asks him for his opinion of her and | ||
he | he comments that she is a remarkable women. She says that this is the | ||
correct answer. | correct answer. | ||
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trembling, she is approached by a figure... who turns out to be Mike. | trembling, she is approached by a figure... who turns out to be Mike. | ||
However, when she exclaims her relief at finding him, he says that | However, when she exclaims her relief at finding him, he says that | ||
his name is | his name is Sargent Zacs of the City Watch and he has never seen | ||
Tegan in his life.... | Tegan in his life.... | ||
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