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=== Part four === | === Part four === | ||
The Doctor finds himself inside the jelly, but makes it vomit him out. The jelly speaks- it's a [[Jelloid (The One Doctor)|Jelloid]], the guardian of the Jewel, placed there to guard it 30 million years ago. The Doctor explains why he needs the jewel, and the Jelloid lets them take it, but it's held down by a force field. The Jelloid is waiting for an entertainment system to be delivered, so the humans (and Doctor) agree to wait while the Jelloid goes to switch the forcefield off. Meanwhile, the Cylinder lowers itself towards Generios 1, announcing there are less than 15 minutes remaining. Sally-Anne and Banto argue and Banto reveals that he's already married. | |||
The force shield is lowered, but they've missed the delivery, angering the Jelloid. Banto makes off with the diamond in the TARDIS. Mel was also inside. Banto professes his love to her, asking for her hand in marriage. The Doctor promises that as soon as the business with the Cylinder is sorted, he'll go and bring the Jelloid his entertainment system. The Jelloid tracks the TARDIS's trail, and they are able to teleport away. Meanwhile, the countdown is over. The TARDIS arrives as Mel rejects Banto's advances. | |||
Potikol, Mel, and Banto present the treasures to the cylinder in a trolley; the Shelves of Infinity, Mentos, and- The Doctor arrives to present the diamond. The Cylinder deems the tribute satisfactory, and says he must reward the one who collected the treasures. Banto presents himself as the Doctor- the one who collected the treasures. Sally-Anne protests, introducing the real Doctor, but he says Sally-Anne is mad and he is Banto. He then kisses Sally-Anne, declaring that a "Time Lord would never do this" as proof that he isn't the Doctor. | |||
The cylinder places Banto in a beam, paralysing him, declaring that the Doctor is wanted by his masters for trial. The cylinder set trials it knew only the Doctor could complete. As the Doctor worked out, the cylinder was after him all this time. It leaves with Banto. | |||
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== Worldbuilding == | == Worldbuilding == | ||
=== The Doctor === | === The Doctor === | ||
* The Cylinder calls the Doctor [[The Doctor's aliases|Johann Schmidt]], Doktor von Wer, [[Ka Faraq Gatri]], [[The Doctor's aliases#Theta Sigma|Theta Sigma]] and Snail. | * The Cylinder calls the Doctor [[The Doctor's aliases|Johann Schmidt]], [[Aliases of the Doctor|Doktor von Wer]], [[Ka Faraq Gatri]], [[The Doctor's aliases#Theta Sigma|Theta Sigma]] and Snail. | ||
* The Doctor is at least 900 years old, with his three wishes when he blew out his nine-hundredth birthday cake candles being "Peace throughout the galaxy, Better control of the TARDIS, and more manageable hair". | * The Doctor is at least 900 years old, with his three wishes when he blew out his nine-hundredth birthday cake candles being "Peace throughout the galaxy, Better control of the TARDIS, and more manageable hair". | ||
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