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== The article's opening length ==
== The article's opening length ==
Just checking before editing it, given the template still on the page, but I was wondering: does the article's opening have to be so long. At present, the article's opening is a staggering '''ten paragraphs long'''. Now of course, it is a regeneration episode and an end to the Chibnall era of the show and a lot did occur in it, but must it be so long? For comparison, [[The End of Time (TV story)]], ''[[Twice Upon a Time (TV story)]] ''[[The Time of the Doctor (TV story)]] only have 7-8 paragraphs and most of those paragraphs are considerably shorter than the ones within this article. It seems excessive. [[User:Snivystorm|<font face="Georgia"><font color="#1E90FF">''Snivy''</font></font>]]<font face="Arial"><font color="dodgerblue">  </font> [[User talk:Snivystorm|<small style="border-style: initial; border-color: initial; "><font face="Cambria"><font color="Grey">✦ ''The coolest Pokemon ever'' ✦</font></font></small>]]</font> 15:09, 28 October 2022 (UTC)
Just checking before editing it, given the template still on the page, but I was wondering: does the article's opening have to be so long. At present, the article's opening is a staggering '''ten paragraphs long'''. Now of course, it is a regeneration episode and an end to the Chibnall era of the show and a lot did occur in it, but must it be so long? For comparison, [[The End of Time (TV story)]], ''[[Twice Upon a Time (TV story)]] ''[[The Time of the Doctor (TV story)]] only have 7-8 paragraphs and most of those paragraphs are considerably shorter than the ones within this article. It seems excessive. [[User:Snivystorm|<font face="Georgia"><font color="#1E90FF">''Snivy''</font></font>]]<font face="Arial"><font color="dodgerblue">  </font> [[User talk:Snivystorm|<small style="border-style: initial; border-color: initial; "><font face="Cambria"><font color="Grey">✦ ''The coolest Pokemon ever'' ✦</font></font></small>]]</font> 15:09, 28 October 2022 (UTC)
== Here's if I write this. ==
Here's if I write this.
Rose can narrate and show flashbacks to The Day of the Doctor including her. And hint on past companions.
Ace can be married to a he-Sylurian and to be helping to look after prehistoric animals including dinosaurs, Ice Age giants, dodos and Tasmanian tigers. And to'd gotten children and grandchidlren, half-humana nd half Sylurian. Instead of being 'ew, freaks' she accepts them.
The reason for the Dalek rebel be because of Kaled DNA. Atavism.
The lead Dalek can be the Time Strategist. He tricks Yasmin through her doubt in the 13th Doctor with a fake message of the Dalek traitor setting ehr up. Causing ehr to rbeak the machione and he;lping the Daleks to capture her. He gloats how he trick Yaz and hwo Yaz made it easy to trick because of ehr arrogance and prejurdyce. And reveal how Tegan and Ace betray their Doctors and began the Tiem War. Tegan can accuse him of lying when she hears opn the coms, but Ace reveals he spoke truth.
The deep-voice Dalek be a black one. Acting as the Time Stratageist's 2nd-in-command.
Ace's grandchildren face Yaz on her betrayal. One of them, a grandson, tries to slay Yaz. But the oldest granddaughter, the most senisble, stops him.. and admtis she did it to save his soul isntead of Yaz's lfie. And scold Yaz for her hypocrisy.
Rose can appear, psychically. Yaz confesses her sins which help the Spy Master and ponders suicide until Rose snaps sense into her with help from her Humansied Daleks and the War Doctor.
Tegan can apologise for betraying the 5th Doctor by abandoning him.
The Dalek Tiem Stratageist double-crosses the Spy Master and place a doomsday weapon to ravage time. But it fail to see Yaz's actiosn which redeem her.
The Spy Master's dying comes from the Dalek Time Strategist. When he shoots the 13th Doctor, he can gloat to Yaz she caused it.
Yaz sees the 14th Doctor and gasps.
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