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: I didn't say we should '''add''' anything, and if my comments are too confusing for you, here is my proposed change; | : I didn't say we should '''add''' anything, and if my comments are too confusing for you, here is my proposed change; | ||
:::River was devoted to the [[Doctor]], and cared very much for those around her such as Amy and her team in [[The Library]]. Despite this, she could also be merciless, and repeatedly ordered the scared [[Stone Dalek]] to beg for mercy after it had shot the Doctor. | :::River was devoted to the [[Doctor]], and cared very much for those around her such as Amy and her team in [[The Library]]. Despite this, she could also be merciless, and repeatedly ordered the scared [[Stone Dalek]] to beg for mercy after it had shot the Doctor. | ||
:I have not said she ''does'' kill the dalek, I have not said she ''doesn't'' kill the dalek. So far you have been critisicing my opinion, so forget what I have said previously, and tell me what is factually wrong with my proposed change. | :I have not said she ''does'' kill the dalek, I have not said she ''doesn't'' kill the dalek. So far you have been critisicing my opinion, so forget what I have said previously, and tell me what is factually wrong with my proposed change. | ||
[[User:Geek Mythology|Geek Mythology]] 19:40, May 14, 2011 (UTC) | [[User:Geek Mythology|Geek Mythology]] 19:40, May 14, 2011 (UTC) | ||
:You forgot to add the comment where she said the Dalek died. [[User:Mini-mitch|Mini-mitch]]\[[User talk:Mini-mitch|talk]] 19:43, May 14, 2011 (UTC) | :You forgot to add the comment where she said the Dalek died. [[User:Mini-mitch|Mini-mitch]]\[[User talk:Mini-mitch|talk]] 19:43, May 14, 2011 (UTC) | ||
I'm not criticising your opinion, in fact I've repeatedly stated that its nice, quote: ''"That's a nice opinion"''. As for your change, it removes some of the current information so it could be seen as negative.----[[User:Skittles the hog|Skittles the hog]]--<small>[[User talk:Skittles the hog|Talk]]</small> 19:47, May 14, 2011 (UTC) | I'm not criticising your opinion, in fact I've repeatedly stated that its nice, quote: ''"That's a nice opinion"''. As for your change, it removes some of the current information so it could be seen as negative.----[[User:Skittles the hog|Skittles the hog]]--<small>[[User talk:Skittles the hog|Talk]]</small> 19:47, May 14, 2011 (UTC) | ||
Skittles: I can see where you are coming from, but this is a wikia. Something anyone can edit, and with all due respect, anyone who adds to wikias should expect their work to be changed (yes, even me), to better reflect what we know. I appreciate that wikias are also communities, but when I make changes, whether they are gramatically or factually, other peoples feelings aren't my main concern. I am merely trying to make one paragraph more factual and less speculative. | |||
Mitch: Technically I asked what was wrong with what I had written, not what I hadn't written, but point taken. My new proposal goes thus; | |||
:::River was devoted to the [[Doctor]], and cared very much for those around her such as Amy and her team in [[The Library]]. Despite this, she could also be merciless; she repeatedly ordered the scared [[Stone Dalek]] to beg for mercy, and displayed no sign of remorse when telling Amy and Rory 'It died'. | |||
Not only does this reference the dalek 'dying', it also tells us that the evidence for this is River's word, and the addition of the lack of remorse helps to solidify River's mercilessness. | |||
Is this a useful compromise? [[User:Geek Mythology|Geek Mythology]] 19:58, May 14, 2011 (UTC) | |||
== [[The Impossible Astronaut]] == | == [[The Impossible Astronaut]] == | ||
