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 ==Summary==
-Zetheda, a once beautiful world now turned into a universal rubbish dump.
+Zetheda, once a beautiful world, has become a universal rubbish dump.
-The Doctor is saddened by Zetheda's downfall and becomes embroiled into the ratlings, the last surviving origins of the planet who are in a endless war with the Worgoth. a powerful creature who wrecks devastation across Time and Space.
+The Doctor is saddened by Zetheda's downfall and becomes embroiled with the ratlings, the last survivors of the planet, who are in a endless war with the Worgoth. a powerful creature who wreaks devastation across Time and Space.
-But they are in for a major shock when a third party arrives on Zetheda.
+They are in for a major shock when a third party arrives on Zetheda.
 ==Characters==