Talk:The Phoenix in the Tardis (feature)
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Isn't "However, a few passages seemed to describe another man altogether — such as when he was described as being "just as irritable and touchy as the First Doctor". " a bit opinonated to come in the text of an article like this? as a wiki, things should be worder neutrally. we can't tell people what is and isn't good or correct writing, regardless of personal agreement with interpertation. I suggest changing this to something like "though certain passages seem less grounded in the depiction of the character", or "seem farfetched" or something more professional souunding like that.– The preceding unsigned comment was added by 87.71.65.59 (talk).
- The whole article needs a rewrite, given it is written more like an essay than an actual source article. If I remember correctly, it is actually fiction, not non-fiction like the article claims. 20:43, 22 July 2023 (UTC)
