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'''''The Exiles''''' was the first short story in the [[Short Trips (series)|Short Trips]] anthology ''[[Short Trips: A Universe of Terrors]]''. It was written by [[Lance Parkin]]. It featured the [[First Doctor]] and [[Susan Foreman]].
'''''The Exiles''''' was the first short story in the [[Short Trips (series)|Short Trips]] anthology ''[[Short Trips: A Universe of Terrors]]''. It was written by [[Lance Parkin]]. It featured the [[First Doctor]] and [[Susan Foreman]].
== Summary ==
== Summary ==
[[Susan Foreman|Susan]] and her [[The Doctor|grandfather]] have left their [[Gallifrey|homeworld]], and hope that their flight went unnoticed in the confusion. Susan knows her grandfather is a pioneer amongst their [[Time Lords|people]], but he admits that he’s never actually piloted one of their [[TARDIS|time machines]] before. That job was always left to technicians. However, he feels sure that he can work out its principles.  
Susan and the Doctor are on the run. They have taken a [[The Doctor's TARDIS|TARDIS]] that was in long-term storage. The [[console room]] is dark, but the Doctor manages to set them in flight. He then figures out how to turn on the instrument lights, and levels the TARDIS' flight. After Susan finds the room's lights, they discover the room has other features besides the console: the double [[Real world interface|doors]] through which they entered, an alcove with a [[fault locator]], a [[TARDIS scanner|scanner]], and another door, presumably leading to the rest of the ship. Susan wants to explore now, but the Doctor cautions her to wait.


Susan’s grandfather sets the machine in motion, and settles down to rest in the console room while waiting to see what will happen next. Unable to sleep, Susan explores the rest of the ship, and in the wardrobe room, she finds a full-length mirror -- and sees a pale-skinned young man reflected in it. The man steps out of the mirror, baring his fangs at Susan, but then vanishes after telling her that she is not the one.  
The Doctor settles down to rest, but Susan can't sleep. She thinks she might find [[TARDIS manual|operating instructions]] for the TARDIS. There must be a library on board. Making sure her grandfather is asleep, she sneaks through the door, closing it behind her. She finds herself in a bright corridor. She runs down the corridor and comes face to face with a [[mirror]] in the middle of the corridor. She finds a door nearby, and enters. She finds a large room, filled with clothing. She spends quite a bit of time looking at the clothes, then chooses an outfit for herself. Suddenly she has a strange feeling that someone is in the room with her, but no one is there. She wants to know what she looks like in her new outfit, but for some reason she is reluctant to look in the mirror in the corridor.


Susan rushes back to the console room, where her grandfather theorises that, since they are now travelling through [[time]], she encountered a brief echo of another era, an event from either the future or the past. It is just the first of many wonders and terrors of the outside Universe which he anticipates encountering in the years to come.
Susan finally musters the courage to look in the mirror. She sees a man in the reflection, though he is not in the corridor with her. He is pale and wears long dark robes. His hand reaches out, and she holds out her hand. He kisses her hand and smiles, and Susan sees that he has fangs instead of teeth. He then tells her, in a strange [[language]], that she is not the one and this is not the time.
 
The mirror is suddenly empty, and Susan runs back to the console room. She tells her grandfather what happened. The Doctor thinks the man is a time echo, a glimpse of the past. He tells her they must concentrate on the future.


== Characters ==
== Characters ==
* [[First Doctor]]
* [[First Doctor]]
* [[Susan Foreman]]
* [[Susan Foreman]]
* [[Marnal|Man in the mirror]]
== Worldbuilding ==
* The Doctor uses his [[everlasting matches]] to illuminate the dark [[console room]].


== References ==
''to be added''
== Notes ==
== Notes ==
''to be added''
''to be added''
== Continuity ==
== Continuity ==
* The strange [[mirror]] with the same mysterious reflection would later be discovered by [[Ace]]. ([[PROSE]]: ''[[Echo]]'')
* Susan finds a [[Seventh Doctor's jumper|thick wool top with red swirl symbols and red jagged lines]]. ([[TV]]: ''[[Time and the Rani (TV story)|Time and the Rani]]'', et al.)
* The strange [[mirror]] with the same mysterious reflection would later be discovered by [[Ace]]. ([[PROSE]]: ''[[Echo (short story)|Echo]]'')
* The Doctor has previously carried out missions for the Time Lords, which he would later do in his [[Second Doctor|second incarnation]]. ([[PROSE]]: ''[[World Game (novel)|World Game]]''; [[TV]]: ''[[The Two Doctors (TV story)|The Two Doctors]]'', etc.)
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Revision as of 22:36, 29 August 2024

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The Exiles was the first short story in the Short Trips anthology Short Trips: A Universe of Terrors. It was written by Lance Parkin. It featured the First Doctor and Susan Foreman.

Summary

Susan and the Doctor are on the run. They have taken a TARDIS that was in long-term storage. The console room is dark, but the Doctor manages to set them in flight. He then figures out how to turn on the instrument lights, and levels the TARDIS' flight. After Susan finds the room's lights, they discover the room has other features besides the console: the double doors through which they entered, an alcove with a fault locator, a scanner, and another door, presumably leading to the rest of the ship. Susan wants to explore now, but the Doctor cautions her to wait.

The Doctor settles down to rest, but Susan can't sleep. She thinks she might find operating instructions for the TARDIS. There must be a library on board. Making sure her grandfather is asleep, she sneaks through the door, closing it behind her. She finds herself in a bright corridor. She runs down the corridor and comes face to face with a mirror in the middle of the corridor. She finds a door nearby, and enters. She finds a large room, filled with clothing. She spends quite a bit of time looking at the clothes, then chooses an outfit for herself. Suddenly she has a strange feeling that someone is in the room with her, but no one is there. She wants to know what she looks like in her new outfit, but for some reason she is reluctant to look in the mirror in the corridor.

Susan finally musters the courage to look in the mirror. She sees a man in the reflection, though he is not in the corridor with her. He is pale and wears long dark robes. His hand reaches out, and she holds out her hand. He kisses her hand and smiles, and Susan sees that he has fangs instead of teeth. He then tells her, in a strange language, that she is not the one and this is not the time.

The mirror is suddenly empty, and Susan runs back to the console room. She tells her grandfather what happened. The Doctor thinks the man is a time echo, a glimpse of the past. He tells her they must concentrate on the future.

Characters

Worldbuilding

Notes

to be added

Continuity