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I haven't read ''[[The Gallifrey Chronicles]]'' and got pretty much all the information in this article from other websites. Can anyone who has actually read the book confirm it?--[[User:The Traveller|The Traveller]] 10:46, 20 May 2009 (UTC)
I haven't read ''[[The Gallifrey Chronicles]]'' and got pretty much all the information in this article from other websites. Can anyone who has actually read the book confirm it?--[[User:The Traveller|The Traveller]] 10:46, 20 May 2009 (UTC)
:What you've got so far isn't wrong, per se, it's just massively incomplete.  I don't think you've captured the real scope of the character.  I mean this is a guy with the power to look into the future and see that there are three [[Ninth Doctor]]s, this is a guy who sits at the intersection of the ''Doctor Who'' and ''Faction Paradise'' universes.  He's in many ways a bigger and more impressive Time Lord than the Doctor, and we've only got a few paragraphs.  There's nothing wrong with this starting point, that I can tell, but it's really only the tip of the iceberg.  '''[[User:CzechOut|<span style="background:blue;color:white">Czech</span><span style="background:red;color:white">Out</span>]]'''  [[User talk:CzechOut|☎]] | [[Special:Contributions/CzechOut|<font size="+1">✍</font>]] 00:29, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

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I haven't read The Gallifrey Chronicles and got pretty much all the information in this article from other websites. Can anyone who has actually read the book confirm it?--The Traveller 10:46, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

What you've got so far isn't wrong, per se, it's just massively incomplete. I don't think you've captured the real scope of the character. I mean this is a guy with the power to look into the future and see that there are three Ninth Doctors, this is a guy who sits at the intersection of the Doctor Who and Faction Paradise universes. He's in many ways a bigger and more impressive Time Lord than the Doctor, and we've only got a few paragraphs. There's nothing wrong with this starting point, that I can tell, but it's really only the tip of the iceberg. CzechOut | 00:29, 22 May 2009 (UTC)