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==1.1 Sphere of Freedom ==
==1.1 Sphere of Freedom ==
===Part one===
===Part one===
The Doctor communicates with Nova whom he is waiting to escape the tunnels after saving the universe. He waits outside the TARDIS for her after promising he would wait for her. Just then the TARDIS detects time eddies and just as she arrives and the Doctor reaches out for her hand she disappears.  
The [[Ninth Doctor|Doctor]] communicates with [[Nova (Sphere of Freedom)|Nova]] whom he is waiting on to escape the tunnels after she manages to destroy the [[Central Arc|central arc]]. He waits outside the [[The Doctor's TARDIS|TARDIS]] for her after promising. Just then the TARDIS detects [[Time eddy|time eddies]] and just as Nova arrives and the Doctor reaches out for her hand she disappears.  


The merchant, named Audrey, attempts to resume her conversation and the Doctor explains to her his current predicament, and when questioned about Nova, says that she's no friend of his just someone he happened to be working with over a spot of bother. He explains that the time eddies should not be occurring and that his trouble started with the planet Earth. Just then he finds another Eddie and attempts to pursue it.  
A merchant, named [[Audrey Mohinson|Audrey]], who had been speaking to the Doctor earlier, attempts to resume her conversation and the Doctor explains to her his current predicament, and when questioned about Nova, says that she's no friend of his and just someone he happened to be working with over a spot of bother. He explains that the time eddies should not be occurring and that his trouble started with the planet [[Earth]]. Just then he finds another eddy and attempts to pursue it.  


The Doctor arrives in 1959 London to find that a bomb has gone off in [[Piccadilly Circus]] as well as the startling appearance of 80 Roman Centurions. He meets with Captain Hallerin and ______ who suspect it to be the work of the Russians. The Doctor calms the situation down before it escalates as he realises the Centurions can't understand the instructions of Hallerin's men because they aren't speaking Latin. The Doctor, thanks to the [[Translation circuit|TARDIS's Translation Circuits]] is able to communicate with the scared Romans but negotiations go awry when they decide to attack anyway. ____
The Doctor arrives in [[1959]] [[London]] to find that a [[bomb]] has gone off in [[Piccadilly Circus]] as well as the startling appearance of 80 [[Roman Empire|Roman]] [[Centurion|Centurions]] seemingly displaced in time. He meets with [[Captain Hallorin]] and [[Lieutenant Farraday]] who suspect it to be the work of the [[Russia|Russians]]. The Doctor calms the situation down before it escalates as he realises the Centurions can't understand the instructions of Hallorin's men because they aren't speaking [[Latin]]. The Doctor, thanks to the [[Translation circuit|TARDIS's Translation Circuits]] is able to communicate with the scared Romans but negotiations go awry when they decide to attack anyway. The Doctor, however, detects time particles on the Romans and realises he can stop the situation from ever occurring. He heads back to the TARDIS and is followed by Farraday when another time eddy hits. The Doctor intends to find out who's causing them...
 
The Doctor, however, detects time particles on the Romans and realises he can stop the situation from ever occurring. He heads back to the TARDIS and is followed by ____ when another time eddy hits. The Doctor intends to find out who's causing them...  
===Part two===
===Part two===
Faraday gets lost in the time eddy and is transported to a futuristic arena. The Doctor, meanwhile, lands somewhere else and due to inopportune circumstances ends up meeting Nova, which Audrey comments on back in the presence. The Doctor continues recounting his story  to Audrey. He asks Nova about where he is and she tells him he's landed on the "Sphere of  Freedom" and that the central arc controls everything for all gaming experiences. He convinces Nova to take him inside.   
Farraday gets lost in the time eddy and is transported to a futuristic arena. The Doctor, meanwhile, lands somewhere else and due to inopportune circumstances ends up meeting Nova, which Audrey comments on back in the present. The Doctor continues recounting his story  to Audrey. He asks Nova about where he is and she tells him he's landed on the "[[Sphere of Freedom (audio story)|Sphere of  Freedom]]" and that the central arc controls everything for all gaming experiences. He convinces Nova to take him inside.   


Once inside, the Doctor realises that the central game, Fugitive, a game reserved for rich aliens, is emanating time eddies and causing problems all throughout history. In the present Audrey presses him for details which he explains. The Doctor goes into the TARDIS and when he comes out, three weeks have passed according to Nova. The Doctor gives her a device he rigged up, saying that her job is to plant it in the sphere. The Doctor explains in the present again to Audrey that the plan succeeded, however, Nova was swept up in a time eddie. The Doctor and Audrey talk some more and as they do he becomes even more suspicious of her as she is not all she appears to be. At least Audrey reveals her deception and the Doctor is transported in his TARDIS to a supernova which Audrey reveals through their communication link is actually alive. After confirming this with a scan, the Doctor tries to find out Audrey's plans but she merely strands him somewhere else with a time eddie.   
Once inside, the Doctor realises that the central game, [[Fugitive]], a game reserved for rich aliens, is emanating time eddies and causing problems all throughout history. In the present, Audrey presses him for details which he explains. The Doctor goes into the TARDIS and when he comes out, three weeks have passed according to Nova. The Doctor gives her a device he rigged up, saying that her job is to plant it in the sphere. The Doctor explains in the present again to Audrey that the plan succeeded, however, Nova was swept up in a time eddy as had happened merely moments ago. The Doctor and Audrey talk some more and as they do he becomes even more suspicious of her as she is not all she appears to be. At last Audrey reveals her deception and the Doctor is transported in his TARDIS to a supernova which Audrey reveals through their communication link is actually alive. After confirming this with a scan, the Doctor tries to find out Audrey's plans but she merely strands him somewhere else with a time eddy.   






Cast  
Cast  
Marcus Aurelius Gallius


Marcus Aurellius ___?  
Marcus Aurellius ___?  
==References==
==References==


*Access 429BW is a block away from Freedom Square
*[[Access 429BW]] is a block away from [[Freedom Square]].
*The Doctor loves immersive reality.  
*The Doctor loves [[immersive reality]].
*The Doctor loves Geraldo's world, -> cakes are triangles and dung snatchers something 5 legged then 7 legged? 1000 star systems hooked up to them  
*The Doctor loves [[Geraldo's world]], -> cakes are triangles and dung snatchers something 5 legged then 7 legged? 1000 star systems hooked up to them
*Nova prefers the 2vids.  
*Nova prefers the [[2vids]].
*Nova is an intergalactic chef who is an 11th generation human refugee from the outer colonies.  
*Nova is an intergalactic [[Cook|chef]] who is an 11th generation [[human]] [[refugee]] from the outer colonies.
*The Doctor says "Brave new world, that has such people in it", a quote from Shakespeare's play The Tempest.  
*The Doctor says "Brave new world, that has such people in it", a quote from [[William Shakespeare|Shakespeare]]'s play ''[[The Tempest]]''.
*The Doctor uses [[psychic paper]] to get access to the central arc.  
*The Doctor uses [[psychic paper]] to get access to the central arc.  


==Notes==
==Notes==


*A merchant in the streets asks the Doctor whether he prefers the classics to which eh replies "Cheeky"
*Audrey, pretending to be a merchant in the streets asks the Doctor whether he prefers the classics to which he replies "Cheeky", a poke at Doctor Who fans who prefer the [[Classic Series - Special Releases|Classic series]] of the show.
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==Continuity==
==Continuity==


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*The Doctor uses [[psychic paper]] to gain access to the [[central arc]]. He would use it on several other occasions such as on [[Platform One]], [[Satellite Five]] and many other places. ([[TV]]: [[The End of the World (TV story)|''The End of the World'']], [[The Long Game (TV story)|''The Long Game'']] ''et al''.)
*The Doctor is able to speak [[Latin]] to the Roman Centurions due to the TARDIS [[Translation circuit|translation circuits]]. He would later use this ability to communicate with the people of [[Pompeii]] when taking [[Donna Noble]] there in his [[Tenth Doctor|tenth]] incarnation. ([[TV]]: ''[[The Fires of Pompeii (TV story)|The Fires of Pompeii]]'')

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1.1 Sphere of Freedom

Part one

The Doctor communicates with Nova whom he is waiting on to escape the tunnels after she manages to destroy the central arc. He waits outside the TARDIS for her after promising. Just then the TARDIS detects time eddies and just as Nova arrives and the Doctor reaches out for her hand she disappears.

A merchant, named Audrey, who had been speaking to the Doctor earlier, attempts to resume her conversation and the Doctor explains to her his current predicament, and when questioned about Nova, says that she's no friend of his and just someone he happened to be working with over a spot of bother. He explains that the time eddies should not be occurring and that his trouble started with the planet Earth. Just then he finds another eddy and attempts to pursue it.

The Doctor arrives in 1959 London to find that a bomb has gone off in Piccadilly Circus as well as the startling appearance of 80 Roman Centurions seemingly displaced in time. He meets with Captain Hallorin and Lieutenant Farraday who suspect it to be the work of the Russians. The Doctor calms the situation down before it escalates as he realises the Centurions can't understand the instructions of Hallorin's men because they aren't speaking Latin. The Doctor, thanks to the TARDIS's Translation Circuits is able to communicate with the scared Romans but negotiations go awry when they decide to attack anyway. The Doctor, however, detects time particles on the Romans and realises he can stop the situation from ever occurring. He heads back to the TARDIS and is followed by Farraday when another time eddy hits. The Doctor intends to find out who's causing them...

Part two

Farraday gets lost in the time eddy and is transported to a futuristic arena. The Doctor, meanwhile, lands somewhere else and due to inopportune circumstances ends up meeting Nova, which Audrey comments on back in the present. The Doctor continues recounting his story to Audrey. He asks Nova about where he is and she tells him he's landed on the "Sphere of Freedom" and that the central arc controls everything for all gaming experiences. He convinces Nova to take him inside.

Once inside, the Doctor realises that the central game, Fugitive, a game reserved for rich aliens, is emanating time eddies and causing problems all throughout history. In the present, Audrey presses him for details which he explains. The Doctor goes into the TARDIS and when he comes out, three weeks have passed according to Nova. The Doctor gives her a device he rigged up, saying that her job is to plant it in the sphere. The Doctor explains in the present again to Audrey that the plan succeeded, however, Nova was swept up in a time eddy as had happened merely moments ago. The Doctor and Audrey talk some more and as they do he becomes even more suspicious of her as she is not all she appears to be. At last Audrey reveals her deception and the Doctor is transported in his TARDIS to a supernova which Audrey reveals through their communication link is actually alive. After confirming this with a scan, the Doctor tries to find out Audrey's plans but she merely strands him somewhere else with a time eddy.


Cast

Marcus Aurelius Gallius

Marcus Aurellius ___?

References

Notes

  • Audrey, pretending to be a merchant in the streets asks the Doctor whether he prefers the classics to which he replies "Cheeky", a poke at Doctor Who fans who prefer the Classic series of the show.

Continuity