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Many problems and much confusion here. "Living her life" is incredibly vague to the point of meaningless. The second sentence is directly contradicted by the first, especially considering her investigation of Adipose Industries is specifically to find the Doctor. Not to mention that Donna first ran into the Doctor at the end of ''[[Doomsday (TV story)|Doomsday]]'' when she was teleported inside the TARDIS, not in ''Partners in Crime''. As well as this, what does the character of Donna as a whole (who neither debuts nor first features prominently in this episode) have to do with the production and narrative information about ''Partners in Crime''? -- [[User:Tybort|Tybort]] ([[User talk:Tybort|talk page]]) 17:35, October 1, 2017 (UTC) | Many problems and much confusion here. "Living her life" is incredibly vague to the point of meaningless. The second sentence is directly contradicted by the first, especially considering her investigation of Adipose Industries is specifically to find the Doctor. Not to mention that Donna first ran into the Doctor at the end of ''[[Doomsday (TV story)|Doomsday]]'' when she was teleported inside the TARDIS, not in ''Partners in Crime''. As well as this, what does the character of Donna as a whole (who neither debuts nor first features prominently in this episode) have to do with the production and narrative information about ''Partners in Crime''? -- [[User:Tybort|Tybort]] ([[User talk:Tybort|talk page]]) 17:35, October 1, 2017 (UTC) | ||
:Good call. [[User:Shambala108|Shambala108]] [[User talk:Shambala108|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 22:36, October 1, 2017 (UTC) |