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: At least, I don't believe Mel, Jo and Ian should be included in there. They're former companions, but they didn't serve that purpose here. [[User:WaltK|WaltK]] [[User talk:WaltK|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 14:09, 26 October 2022 (UTC) | : At least, I don't believe Mel, Jo and Ian should be included in there. They're former companions, but they didn't serve that purpose here. [[User:WaltK|WaltK]] [[User talk:WaltK|<span title="Talk to me">☎</span>]] 14:09, 26 October 2022 (UTC) | ||
== The article's opening length == | |||
Just checking before editing it, given the template still on the page, but I was wondering: does the article's opening have to be so long. At present, the article's opening is a staggering '''ten paragraphs long'''. Now of course, it is a regeneration episode and an end to the Chibnall era of the show and a lot did occur in it, but must it be so long? For comparison, [[The End of Time (TV story)]], ''[[Twice Upon a Time (TV story)]] ''[[The Time of the Doctor (TV story)]] only have 7-8 paragraphs and most of those paragraphs are considerably shorter than the ones within this article. It seems excessive. [[User:Snivystorm|<font face="Georgia"><font color="#1E90FF">''Snivy''</font></font>]]<font face="Arial"><font color="dodgerblue"> </font> [[User talk:Snivystorm|<small style="border-style: initial; border-color: initial; "><font face="Cambria"><font color="Grey">✦ ''The coolest Pokemon ever'' ✦</font></font></small>]]</font> 15:09, 28 October 2022 (UTC) | |||
