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|range                  = Short Trips (series)
|name=The Immortals
|series in range        = Short Trips: Past Tense
|series=[[Short Trips (series)#In print|ST short stories]]
|series number in range = 6
|doctor=Fifth Doctor
|number in series      = 1
|companions= [[Adric]], [[Nyssa]], [[Tegan]]  
|doctor                 = Fifth Doctor
|year=Eastern [[Europe]], c[[1016]]
|companions             = [[Adric]], [[Tegan Jovanka|Tegan]], [[Nyssa]]
|writer=[[Simon Guerrier]]
|enemy                  = [[Czar]] [[U'thai]]
|anthology=''[[Short Trips: Past Tense]]''
|setting                = Eastern [[Europe]], c. [[1016]]
|prev=none
|writer                 = Simon Guerrier
|next=Far from Home (short story)
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|release date          = 9 April 2004
|series                = ''[[Short Trips (series)|Short Trips]]''
|prev                   = Eternity (short story)
|next                   = Far from Home (short story)
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'''''The Immortals''''' was the first short story in the [[Short Trips (series)|Short Trips]] anthology ''[[Short Trips: Past Tense]]''. It was written by [[Simon Guerrier]]. It featured the [[Fifth Doctor]], [[Adric]], [[Nyssa]] and [[Tegan]].
'''''The Immortals''''' was the first short story in the [[Short Trips (series)|Short Trips]] anthology ''[[Short Trips: Past Tense]]''. It was written by [[Simon Guerrier]]. It featured the [[Fifth Doctor]], [[Adric]], [[Nyssa]] and [[Tegan Jovanka]].
 
== Summary ==
== Summary ==
The [[TARDIS]] arrives in Eastern Europe at the start of the XI Century, where the [[Fifth Doctor|Doctor]], [[Tegan]], [[Nyssa]] and [[Adric]] come across a village under siege from a band of raiders.  
[[Udilf]] and the people in his town are preparing for an attack. They spend their days making weapons and armour. They know that an attack by mysterious "creatures", who are invulnerable to their weapons, will come soon.
 
Udilf is called to the town gate by [[Mang]]. Outside the town are four travellers, and Udilf lets them in because they appear to be weaponless. Their leader introduces himself as the Doctor, and he tells Udilf that they have seen devastated villages on their way here. Udilf tells him of the mysterious attackers, and the Doctor persuades him to let himself and Adric look for the attackers to try to reason with them.
 
As the Doctor and Adric walk along, the Doctor informs Adric that the "creatures" are probably aliens that are stranded on [[Earth]]. The Doctor will offer to help them get off Earth. As the Doctor stops to examine animal droppings, Adric gets bored and wanders ahead. He is attacked by a [[Scout (The Immortals)|scout]], who, when learning what they are hunting, offers to take them to his leader, Czar [[U'thai]].
 
In U'thai's camp, Adric and the Doctor learn that U'thai and his men are the "creatures". U'thai and his men are [[Asia]]n, and Udilf's people have never seen an Asian before. Their invulnerability to arrows comes from their silk shirts, which allow them to remove any arrows effortlessly.
 
Meanwhile, in Udilf's village, Tegan and Nyssa help make weapons and armour. At the end of the day, they learn that the men will be fed before they are. When Mang tells the townspeople the story of his father's fights with the [[Roman]]s, Tegan protests that at this point in history, the Romans are no more. Mang is offended that Tegan is questioning his story, and Nyssa drags Tegan away. The girls discuss the possibility that Earth's history has somehow been changed.


The village leader, Udilf, tells the travellers that their food supplies and women have been taken and eaten by their attackers, [[immortal]] creatures with misshapen features and imperviousness to arrows. Believing the raiders to be stranded aliens, the Doctor offers to help, and sets off with Adric to search for the creatures’ camp; meanwhile, Tegan and Nyssa stay behind to help the remaining women make armour and serve the men their food and drink.
After entertaining U'thai with magic tricks, the Doctor and Adric sneak out and head back to Udilf's town. The Doctor and Nyssa want a peaceful solution, so the Doctor contrives tricks to scare away U'thai: blue-white flames and trenches for the [[horse]]s to fall into. Tegan and Adric think they should fight, and Adric introduces the longbow to Udilf's people.


The Doctor and Adric soon meet the raiders, only to discover that they are in fact soldiers from Asia, whose unfamiliar features and clothing account for the villagers’ mistaken beliefs. Their leader, Czar U’thai, tells the Doctor that initially he and his men came to trade with the villagers, but soon decided to simply take what they desired; now that their way back home has been snowed in, they plan to take the villagers’ remaining supplies to see them through the winter.  
The attack comes unexpectedly at night, and the Doctor's tricks don't scare away U'thai. There is much fighting and many deaths. U'thai attempts to take Tegan, but the Doctor pins him to a [[tree]] with the longbow. He offers mercy to U'thai's men, and the townspeople are left to take stock of their losses.


The Doctor and Adric manage to sneak out of the camp and return to the village, where they inform Udilf of U’thai’s plans; the Doctor and Nyssa offer to prepare fire bombs and oversee the digging of a trench around the village, while Tegan and Adric, against their companions’ wishes, help the men folk to make longbows. When the raiders attack a violent battle immediately begins; in the mêlée, Udilf is killed, but, with the aid of some fancy archery from the Doctor, the raiders are soon defeated.  
Udilf died fighting, as did Mang's daughter [[Eeta]]. Many others died, and Mang, taking over the leadership, decides to bring the survivors to [[Wales]].


With U’thai now a prisoner, the villagers rescue their womenfolk and then decide to journey to Wales to build a new village. As the time travellers leave in the TARDIS, the Doctor has grave concerns over Adric’s actions, pointing out to the precocious boy that his invention of the longbow will cause countless deaths over the next five hundred years…
On the way to [[The Doctor's TARDIS|the TARDIS]], the travellers discuss the deaths and Adric's introduction of the longbow. The Doctor is less concerned with Adric's effect on history than he is with the deaths that will be caused by this early use of longbows.


== Characters ==
== Characters ==
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* [[Scout (The Immortals)|Scout]]
* [[Scout (The Immortals)|Scout]]


== References ==
== Worldbuilding ==
* Tegan thinks her name is [[Welsh language|Welsh]].
* Tegan thinks her name is [[Welsh language|Welsh]].
* According to the Doctor, King [[Ethelred]] died in [[1016]]. As his name was mentioned, the Doctor uses this to estimate the date when they've arrived.


== Notes ==
== Notes ==
''to be added''
* All the stories in ''[[Short Trips: Past Tense]]'' take place some time in [[Earth]]'s past. This story takes place in [[11th century]] eastern [[Europe]].
* This story is a "[[pure historical]]" featuring no science fiction elements apart from the presence of the Doctor, Adric, Nyssa, Tegan and the TARDIS.


== Continuity ==
== Continuity ==
* The Doctor has recently [[Regeneration|regenerated]]. ([[TV]]: ''[[Logopolis (TV story)|Logopolis]]'')
* The Doctor has recently [[Fourth Doctor's regeneration|regenerated]]. ([[TV]]: ''[[Logopolis (TV story)|Logopolis]]'')
* The Doctor claims that [[Robin Hood]] taught him how to shoot a bow and arrow. ([[PROSE]]: ''[[The Thief of Sherwood]]'')
* The Doctor learned how to shoot a [[bow]] and [[arrow]] from [[Robin Hood]]. ([[PROSE]]: ''[[The Thief of Sherwood (short story)|The Thief of Sherwood]]'')


== External links ==
== External links ==
* {{dwrefguide|whotrip9.htm#1|The Immortals}}
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The Immortals was the first short story in the Short Trips anthology Short Trips: Past Tense. It was written by Simon Guerrier. It featured the Fifth Doctor, Adric, Nyssa and Tegan Jovanka.

Summary[[edit] | [edit source]]

Udilf and the people in his town are preparing for an attack. They spend their days making weapons and armour. They know that an attack by mysterious "creatures", who are invulnerable to their weapons, will come soon.

Udilf is called to the town gate by Mang. Outside the town are four travellers, and Udilf lets them in because they appear to be weaponless. Their leader introduces himself as the Doctor, and he tells Udilf that they have seen devastated villages on their way here. Udilf tells him of the mysterious attackers, and the Doctor persuades him to let himself and Adric look for the attackers to try to reason with them.

As the Doctor and Adric walk along, the Doctor informs Adric that the "creatures" are probably aliens that are stranded on Earth. The Doctor will offer to help them get off Earth. As the Doctor stops to examine animal droppings, Adric gets bored and wanders ahead. He is attacked by a scout, who, when learning what they are hunting, offers to take them to his leader, Czar U'thai.

In U'thai's camp, Adric and the Doctor learn that U'thai and his men are the "creatures". U'thai and his men are Asian, and Udilf's people have never seen an Asian before. Their invulnerability to arrows comes from their silk shirts, which allow them to remove any arrows effortlessly.

Meanwhile, in Udilf's village, Tegan and Nyssa help make weapons and armour. At the end of the day, they learn that the men will be fed before they are. When Mang tells the townspeople the story of his father's fights with the Romans, Tegan protests that at this point in history, the Romans are no more. Mang is offended that Tegan is questioning his story, and Nyssa drags Tegan away. The girls discuss the possibility that Earth's history has somehow been changed.

After entertaining U'thai with magic tricks, the Doctor and Adric sneak out and head back to Udilf's town. The Doctor and Nyssa want a peaceful solution, so the Doctor contrives tricks to scare away U'thai: blue-white flames and trenches for the horses to fall into. Tegan and Adric think they should fight, and Adric introduces the longbow to Udilf's people.

The attack comes unexpectedly at night, and the Doctor's tricks don't scare away U'thai. There is much fighting and many deaths. U'thai attempts to take Tegan, but the Doctor pins him to a tree with the longbow. He offers mercy to U'thai's men, and the townspeople are left to take stock of their losses.

Udilf died fighting, as did Mang's daughter Eeta. Many others died, and Mang, taking over the leadership, decides to bring the survivors to Wales.

On the way to the TARDIS, the travellers discuss the deaths and Adric's introduction of the longbow. The Doctor is less concerned with Adric's effect on history than he is with the deaths that will be caused by this early use of longbows.

Characters[[edit] | [edit source]]

Worldbuilding[[edit] | [edit source]]

  • Tegan thinks her name is Welsh.
  • According to the Doctor, King Ethelred died in 1016. As his name was mentioned, the Doctor uses this to estimate the date when they've arrived.

Notes[[edit] | [edit source]]

Continuity[[edit] | [edit source]]

External links[[edit] | [edit source]]